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ALISHA ZEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

LOL... Itna shor kyu macha rakha hai Alisha ???? :O :D

spamming chal rahi hai yaha ??? ;D

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
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Aawww...stop crying !! Mai koshish karti hu...
Give me 2 hours :)

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_
LOL... Itna shor kyu macha rakha hai Alisha ???? :O :D

spamming chal rahi hai yaha ??? ;D

dekh tu updt kr de othrwise yahaan wooh woh chalne + bhaagne lage ga jo kisi ne socha bhi ni hoga!!! 😈 😈😈

update kar ABHIII KE ABHIII!!

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Aawww...stop crying !! Mai koshish karti hu...
Give me 2 hours :)

2 GHANTEE!!!!!

itnaaa wait krayegi????

chal phr m to tera SS ni read kr paongi apni aatma ko hi hire krna padegi !!

saaali aaatma bohot bhaaav khaati hai yaaar !!!bohot HIGH CHARGES leti hai!!

bt jaldi kr is baar m wait kr leti hun meri aaatma meri tarah SHARIF , SIDHI SAADHI , CALM ,,,,,COMPOSED AUR PEACEFUL ni hai !! samajh ri hai na tu!!??

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Champa2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Ab toh update karo yaar. I am dying to read the next part.

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

2 GHANTEE!!!!!<img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/rev/43.gif" alt="" />

itnaaa wait krayegi????<img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/rev/36.gif" alt="" />

chal phr m to tera SS ni read kr paongi apni aatma ko hi hire krna padegi !!

saaali aaatma bohot bhaaav khaati hai yaaar !!!bohot HIGH CHARGES leti hai!!

bt jaldi kr is baar m wait kr leti hun meri aaatma meri tarah SHARIF , SIDHI SAADHI , CALM ,,,,,COMPOSED AUR PEACEFUL ni hai !! samajh ri hai na tu!!??

Areyyy !! Ek toh maine update prepone kar diya... Aur tu thank you bone ke badle ye sab bol rahi hai !???? 😲

Aatma ko bhej ya khud aaja update padhne...meko kya farakh padhega !? :P

btw tu khud hi aajana...warna baaki sab bhaag jayenge...😆

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simisworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Just found your SS and read it in one go. Awesome concept, I love it. So refreshing to see this new zoya. My heart really goes out to her and her pining for Asad. Loved the last chapter where she finally decided enough was enough. For a moment I thought she was going to do something dramatic like leave the house but I was so pleasantly surprised. I'm so glad you had her simply move her things out of Asad's room. A very powerful step in itself but also not excessively dramatic and unrealistic. Because even in a situation like Zoya's people don't just go leaving their house and family when they have a problem but they do have to do something that makes the culprit realize their mistakes. I think Asad will be so shocked when he comes home and will soon realize the place Zoya has in his heart but I think this time she won't forgive him so easily. He has really done a number on her this time and it will take a lot of groveling and work before she is ready to trust him with her heart again.

Excellent job, please continue soon!

Simi

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Hey what to say about this beautiful story with so many emotions kudos to your writing ..loved it

Last chapter reflects zoya pain, emotions love but in realistic way .The step to shift from one room-other is more difficult then to chnage the roof .As we left our past but still live in it

Superbb

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Areyyy !! Ek toh maine update prepone kar diya... Aur tu thank you bone ke badle ye sab bol rahi hai !???? 😲 dekh yaaar m ne to bachpan ek hi mantar sikhaa hai frnshp m NO SORY NO THANK U!! samjhiii !! aur tu mjse xpect kr ri hai k m TJE THANK U bolungi ???
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hunn!!! thank u mje tadpaaane ke liye!!??

Aatma ko bhej ya khud aaja update padhne...meko kya farakh padhega !? :P

dekh zyada mt bol or update kr jaldi!!

btw tu khud hi aajana...warna baaki sab bhaag jayenge...😆

jaldi krde warna apni aatma ko bhej kr tere saare RC (arree READER CUSTOMERS yaar ) ko yahaaa s bhagaaa dungi!!