~Saiyaara~ an AsYa FF THREAD 1 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Aphroditefallen

like always its sweet.. i like the concerned Asad.. ur zoya is a doll.. lots of luv sugar..keep updating..:)

Thank you soo much ! :)
I want my Zoya to be like that only...:D
She's such a sweet heart and so are you ! :))

Originally posted by: Fimmy

Wow!
The part was superb!
Amazing!
Loved each n every bit of it...
Love this caring Asad!!!
Plz plzzz plzzz cont super soon!
Can't wait to read more...

Thanks a lott ! 😃
You are always in a hurry to read more... 😆
hope you found it long enough this time.. 😳

Originally posted by: Msash

asad is caring zoya more.. I knw he cnt hurt anybdy as he thinks..nyc part. Thanks 4 pm

Yeah...its his insecurity...
thank you 😊

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

haaaye !! koi to rok lo!!! koi ni yaar mt roko coz m rukongi ni!!!! 🤣 i cant evn if i wnt!!😊 ds part ws shooo cute!!!!!

finallly asad worried 4 zoya!!!! taking care of her!!! OMG!! it ws luvlllyyy!!!!!

luvd his attention 2wards zoya!!👏
jhakaaass!! dhakaaas👏!!

full on dhamaaal!!👏

chooo tchy!!!!👏
xcellent part!!👏

xtremely faaab!!!👏

i ws eagerly waitn 4 d part !! n i gt it!!!! yipppeee tnkooo chooo mch 4 ritng sch a nic story!!!🤗
n ya tnxxx alooot 4 PMng me!!!🤗 reallly vry grateful 2 u!!!🤗 tnxxx a ton!!!🤗 luv u!!! tnk uuu!!!🤗

n plzzz plzzz plzzz update thoda jaldi!!! 😭😭😭tadpa tadpa ke mt maaaro yaar!!😆

Thank you sooo much for liking my work...!! 😃

I'm glad that you're loving the way the characters are shaping as well as the story progressing... 😳

Its always fun reading you comments...😆
Seriously, feels really good...

Thanx a lot for commenting... 😉
Will try to continue soon .. 😊
🤗

Originally posted by: cool_sri

very nice update...

Thank you

Originally posted by: Asyalover

aww its a sad but cute ss as asad had got betrayal ...cont soon...pm me too plzzz

Thanks for liking it...:))
Sure... I shall pm u for the next part !

Originally posted by: DKB532

Aw...so sweet! This is beautiful! Plz keep writing!

Thanks a lott !

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-

I loved this update :)

Thanks ! :))

Originally posted by: Curiousmind

Ahhh Asad is slowly becoming the ideal husband. Great update and thanks for the pm.

Yeah...hopefully ! ;)
thank you :)

Originally posted by: AliciaZA

I really enjoyed this chapter:-). I loved Asad's caring side, which he lets so very few people see. I wonder why he feels he will hurt the baby emotionally? He's taken such amazing care of Ammi &Najma, so i dont understand why he wud feel that way. I really hope this baby brings Asya together. I'm still trying to figure out the situations that led to Zoya getting pregnant in the 1st place lol. Cant wait for more...

Thanks ! :-)

He's just scared that he wont be able to love them...and that they (Zoya & Baby) might leave him and go...just like Aayesha or Raashid !

Ammi and Najma were his responsibilities, so is Zoya... But he doesn't want to get binded to her with love..

Lol... They consummated and so it happened...!! There's a brief description at the end of part 6 :D

God love, THIS IS AMAZAYN <3

And gawjus, and flawless, and fablouis, and BrilLiam, and every other awesome word here <3 <3

Just read the whole storay, and you better continue this soon love <3

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

Just caught up wit the last three updates and they were just fantastic !!

Awwie loved the carin' and sweet Asad :D

Aha !! Asad get ready for Zoya's tantrums ...

Honestly I would love to see Zoya demanding things and throwing tantrums :-P

Thank you sooo much ! 😃

I'd love that tooo... 😆

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey aniya...

first of all sorry for the late comments and thanks for the pm's...ur truly an amazing writer..we have outstanding qubool hai ff's, os's, ss's written by wonderful writers with lovely concepts

I love the way asad has started to show concern towards zoya...and are waiting for some more romance...I like the way the ff is shaping out...please update soon...want more love from asad's side, more concern, him shouting and telling his zoya off...please continue

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Its ok dear...:))
I'm glad that you commented now...:D
thanks a lottt for liking my writing...

I guess it'll take some time for him to open up...;)
keep reading...:)

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

Awww that was such a cuteee partt ❤️ even though ive gt complain to Asad! this idiot ullu ka pths is scared to lose his baby and hurt him/her which isnt even born but wht abt the one who is carrying it ! and the dr & Asad convo was like so good ! i loved it specialy becoz my sis is preggy and as she is staying with us for a while we hav to bear her tantrums xD
anyway continue soon and thks for the pn :)

Love, Laiba

Thank you..😳
Hahaa... He's like that only...dumb ! 😆

ohh ! Say congrats to ur sis ! Thats really good news...:))
Now I can ask some tips from you for my story...coz I've no idea abt pregnancy ! :D

Love, Aaniya :))