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Originally posted by: awesome

awesome part

loved it
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thanks a lot and yes will update soon infact might just update 1 by the night

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Chapter 2

zoya : acha , acha zyaada maska na maar , aur batha baath kya hai

[ ok' ok if all the buttering is done then will u tell why I'm here]

Ayaan : voh actually na ' I 'mmm

Berofe ayaan could stammer zoya, looking @ a very disheartened humaira walking by asks

Zoya : ayaan dekho na humeira kithni sad lag rahi hai '. I wish I could help her. Par would she like it if I interrupt in her persenol life '. I mean after all I'm '.

And zoya went on blabbering , and for the first time ayaan was thankful she was blabbering , coz he had no idea hw 2 start the topic.

Zoya : allah miya wha's wrong with me .. sorry ayaan ' tumhe kaise patha hoga what humaira feels '..anyways u where saying something na'

Ayaan : ( in his mind what do I do nw )

Um' vo .. uh..

Zoya : wait a minute !!! AYAAN AHMED KHAN ' THE GREAT IS SHORT OF WORDS HW ON EARTH IS THAT POSSIBLE AFTER ALL IT AYAN AHMED KHAN YAAR'

AYAAN: HOGAYA TUMHARA ' ABH MEIN BOLUN'. ZOYA STIL GIGGLING'.

ZOYA ' CALLED OUT AYAAN ' THE AMOUNT OF INTENSITY HIS VOISE PORTRAIT MADE HER STOP LAUGHING '. AND AYAAN HAD HIS BACK FACING ZOYA '. THAT LEAD ZOYA TO THINK WHAT REALLY IS AYAAN GOING 2 TALK ABOUT' THAT AYAAN COULD'NT FACE me.

Ayaan : ( still facing the wall ) sab bahar yahi baath kar rahe hain ' infact mein khud tumse yeh baath kehna chahtha hoon zoya'

His face nw partially facing zoya '

So miss zoya farooki kya aap mujhse yaani apne best freivd for ever se nikaah kareingi.

Zoya's eyes widened in utter shock @ ayaan's question '. She was completely taken off guard by his question '.

Zoya : ayaan mein'

Ayaan: zoya isse pehle ki tum kuch kaho ' let me tell u ki khud bhai jaan bahar hai sabko convince karne keliye tho ghar walon ki chintha tho tum math karo '. Kay

Zoya : ( wait' wait .. did ayaan say mr. khan was out ' no' no' I dint hear it right ' )

Kya' mr. khan bahar hain '

Ayaan: haan zoya and he's ''.

[ the haan was all that zoya heard '. She was falling apart in fact she could hardly breathe after hearing what ayaan had said ' she felt worse thah when she saw tanveer in asad's arms ' *sarcastic grin* and here I was thinking that was the worst feeling '

2day she had learned something;

it is harder to bear u'r love matchmaking u than to see him in some1 else's arm.

After that thought zoya was back in reality ' where ayaan was again facing the wall silently and zoya guessed awaiting her relpy 2 the proposal '. Zoya could anything but not a liar ' and therefore she should tell him the truth '

Zoya : ayaan'

The minute zoya had taken his name he felt a shiver .. coz he knew that he was in a get everything or loose everthing sitiation ' thinking all ayaan awaited her repy

Zoya : ayaan u no doubt are a great guy.. but along with that u , are my best friend so I will not hide anything from you'.

' ayaaan ' i' I '.will marry u '.

Ayaan's happiness had no bounds ' he was smiling like an idiot '.

Zoya: ' but ..ayaan'

Ayaan: but ' but what zoya now facing her

Zoya : kepping her voise low , yet! Bravely facing him said '

I DON'T LOVE U AYAAN ' mujhe tumse MOHABBATH NAHI hai '. Even though u'r my bff , this nikaah if happened will still be a arranged marriage for me ' ayaan it's b'coz u'r my bff that I belive that you deserve 2 knw this ayaan , and also b'coz u think I'm worthy of you ayaan '

Even thought the fact that zoya dint love him hurt him a lot ' 2day the respect he had for zoya had doubled '. This girl really was a gem of a person he thought'.

Ayaan: I know zoya ' I knw that u don't love me .. but I promise ki mein jee- jaan laga doonga iss shaadi ko arranged marriage se love marriage banana keliye ' if not now then atleast after marriage '.

Saying this ayaan stopped ' and zoya had tears in her eyes ' yes' yesss they where tears of happiness ' coz her immature friend is nw more understanding and sensible than a thousang zoya's put 2gether ' and it is then when she realized hw good ayaan ws @ heart ' and why all his family adored him so much '..

AND SHE NODED IN AGREEMENT 2 WHAT AYAAN HAD SAID'.

And with that zoya finished with her flashback '..

Zoya: Appi ,that's why i'm doing'.

Zeenath: par agar tumhe kissi aur sein mohabbath hai tho tum apne nikaah ke baad ke far teekh se nahin ada kar paogi zoya'

Zoya: mujhe patha hain ki aap kya kehna chahthi hai ' aur vaise bhi kya farakh padtha hai appi ' jab aapne mera akram se nikaah tey kiya tha ' tab-bhi mein use mohobbath 'nahin karthi thi' aur aap aur jiju bhi toh'''

Zeenath:tab ki baath alag hai zoya' haan zoya ; tum akram se mohabbath nahi karthi thi lekin tab tum kissi aur se bhi bohabbath nahin karthi thi'. Aur jahan tak mere aur tumhare jiju ka sawaal hai haan hum nikaah se pehle mohabbath nahi karthi thi then again zoya I dint love any body else. Lekin tum tho'

Zoya : haan appi karthe hain hum kissi aur se mohabbath ' lekin kya iskeliye puri zindagi ...

Appi aap iss nikah ko ek samjhotha hi samajh li jiye '

Zeenath : samjhothe se makaan bantha hain zoya ghar nahin '.

Aur haan tum teekh keh rahi ho ayaan bohoth acha ladka hai '. Aur tum usske achayi ke saath bhi insaaf nahi kar rahi zoya '.

Zoya: kya mathlab appi

Zeenath: zoya tumhe bhi patha hai , aur mujhe bhi ke ayaan tumse mohbbath kartha hai..aur use mohobbath na karthe hue bhi use shaadi karke tum na uske saath na uske parivaar ke saath insaaf kar rahi ho.

Tum saath-saath ,teen -teen zinagiyan barbad kar rahi ho zoya .

[ saing this zeenath left ]

Leaving a thunderstruck zoya alone '.

The last two lines appi said kept echoing in her head '

Which again took her back to the same night '.

After ayaan left zoya wanted to cry , scream , weep even laugh @ her fate all @ the same bloody time ' but she knew that could'nt break , not for anything else but her friend who had promised 2 b by her side her whole life '.

Whe walked out of the room aimlessly moving knowing ayaan must be delivering the news 2 the family members and just the she collided with some 1 ' that sm 1 was none other than asad ahmed khan'.

She was 2 dazed 2 hv balanced her self from falling' bt sm how did manage ' maybe it was her brain's Oder that she no longer had the right 2 ask help to balance her self fomany body eslse especially nt mr. khan after the decision she had taken '

Even asad was surprised at how fast she balanced her self '. Even before he could help

Asad : umm' so how is siddique residence'

Zoya: mr. khan I have been living here for the past 6 MONTHS U KNW ..

ASAD : YEAH THAT'S RIGHT

ZOYA COULD'NT BEAR THIS TORTURE ' THE FACT THAT HE WAS PRETENDING 2 B NORMAL KILLED HER EVEN MORE

ZOYA: MR. KHAN IF U'R DONE I REALLY NEED TO GO

BEFORE ZOYA COULD LEAVE..

ASAD: MISS FAROOKI .. I'M SORRY I CAME HEAR 2 TALK ' I GUESS I SHOULD COME TO THE POINT .

I.. THINK..( WITH TEARS IN HIS EYES WHICH WHERE STARRING @ THE FLOOR SO THAT ZOYA CANT C THEM)

'. T THINK' U SHOULD GET MARRIED TO AYAAN

ZOYA WAS NOT LOOKING @ HIM THIS TIME

HE STUDIED HER FACIAL EXPRESSION WHICH SHOWED NO EMOTIONS WHAT SO EVER

ZOYA: OK

ASAD : WHA' WHAT..

ZOYA: OK MR KHAN I SHALL CONSIDER THAT PROPOSAL ,NOW SHALL I LEAVE ..

TO SAY ASAD WAS SHOCKED @ HOW SIMPLY ZOYA REPLIED WAS AN UNDERSTATEMENT ' WELL !!! ALL THAT HATERED AND MISSUNDERSTANDING LASTED ONLY TILL THEIR EYES MET'

AFTER THE LONG EYE-LOCK ZOYA WAS ABOUT WALK AWAY WHEN SHE PAUSED ' SHE FELT AS IF ASAD HAD CALLED HER OUT

AND WHAT WAS STRAGE WAS THAT ASAD HAD JUST OPENED HI MOUTH 2 CALL HER OUT but had not called her yet '.

SHE TURNED AROUND NW FACING ASAD '

ASAD ROZ THO HAR SITUATION MEIN SHER ZAROOR SUNATHI HAI' THO AJ BHI EK SUNTHE HUE JAIYE NA

( COZ SM. WHERE DEEP DOWN HE FELT THIS MIGHT B HIS LAST CHANSE 2 LISTEN 2 1 )

ZOYA: AAJ , NAHI MR. KHAN KYUN KI MUJHE NAHI LAGTHA AAP SUN PAYENGE '

WITH THAT ZOYA RAN 2 HER ROOM WHICH TOOK EVERY BIT OF STRENTH SHE HAD LEAVING A FROZE ASAD BEHIND '..

ZOYA CRIED FOR A GOOD 2 HOURS ON HER BED '

AND JUST THEN SHE HEARD A GUITAR MUSIC'.

2 KNW WHO IT WAS SHE PEEPED THROUGH HER WINDOW '. @ IT WAS '..

no pre cap for this one sooo hw ws it ...

AND YESS!!! 2DAY U GUY'S COULD GET A BONAS CHAPTERS IF ... I SEEE MORE COMMENTS AND LIKE ... AND MY DEAR ASYA ROMANCE KE BHUKHE SHERON ... SABR RAKHO ... SABR KA PHAL MEETHA HOTHA HAI😆😆 ...

VARSHA

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much.loved it.plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*sigh* i hv nthng to say. Jst keep updtng. HAPPY HOLI :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

thank you so much.loved it.plz pm me.

thank you ... and, yes will pm dear😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya02

*sigh* i hv nthng to say. Jst keep updtng. HAPPY HOLI :)

thank you dear .. for all the lovely comments
VARSHA😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

Guy's pls. before going any further with update [pls'.. [x10000] listen to the song link given below' its just so that u can understand the scene better]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=i56wmkqri10


It was ayaan playing the guitar '.


And he sang ' looking @ zoya'.

Dil De Diya Hai...
Jaan Tumhe Deenge...
Ha...A...A...A
.

Now ayaan's back was facing zoya [ he saw humeira sitting alone therefore near her ear whispered '.]


Dil De Diya Hai ..
Jaan Tumhe Deenge...
Daga Nahi Karenge Sanam...*2

To which humeira smiled ' hiding all the pain she felt away from the world '.


Ho...Oo...Raab Di Kasam Yaara Raab Di Kasam...

Now ayaan turned and started moving 2 the tune and nikhath joined him '.



Dil De Diya Hai
Jaan Tumhe Deenge...
Daga Nahi Karenge Sanam*2

Asad sang above lines ' his head head on dilshad's lap..




Rukh Zindagi Ne Mod Liya Kaisa...
Hum Ne Soocha Nahi Tha Kabhi Aisa...*2


Asad and zoya thinking @ the same time in these lines '

Asad thinking about the day he found out ayaan liked zoya

Zoya thinking about the time ayaan had proposed..


Aata Nahi Yaakin ...
Kya Se Kya Ho Gaya...

And then then thinking about that moment when zoya had agreed 2 the proposal



Kis Tarha Main Tumse
Bewaafa Ho Gaya...

In this line asad thought about the time when he wanted 2 convince zoya 2 marry ayaan



Insaaf Karrr Do...
Mujhe Maaf Kaar Dooo...
Itna Hi Kardo Karam...

Ayaan sang this looking @ humeira ' he dint know why but he fet the need to do so



Dil De Diya Hai ,Jaan Tumhe Deenge...Daaga Nahi Karenge Sanam,,,,
ayaan singing these lines again looking @ zoya



Aawaragi Me Bangaya Hai Dewwana...
Maine Kyun Saadhgi Ko Nahi Jaana*2

Asad remembering all the moments he had with zoya ' and regretting all the time he had hurt her realizing how precious her smile is . Her talks are , her stupid shayari. and most importantly her simplicity is'



Chahat Yehi Hai Ke Is Kadar Pyar Du...
Kadmo Me Tere Main ...Du Jahan Yaar Do...

Ayaan again re- living the words he said to zoya about making this rishta a success . Which were his words for zoya and promise 2 himself ?



Chaain Mera Le Lo...Khushi Meri Lee Loo...De Do Mujhe Dedo Sare Gaam..

Asad 's exact thoughts expressed in the above line


.Dil De Diya Hai ...

Zoya's thought



Jaan Tumhe Deeenge..

.Daaga Nahi Karenge Sanam

Ayaan's thought


Mere Aashq Kehrage Hai Meri Kahani...Inhe Samjho Na Tum Sirf Paani*2

Zoya run's towards the pillars wanting 2 hide her tear stricken face from her family and needing support


Ayaan turning his face from away from his family ' and thinking about zoya's confession ' that she does'nt love him ' and a few drogs of tear escape his eyes



Ro Ro Ke Aaso Wo Ke Daag Dhul Jayenge...
In Bewafa Ke Raang Aj Ghul Jayenge

Asad now crying even more ' and now feeling even more desperate .to be with zoya ' to sense her presence ' to feel her touch .



Paas Tum Rahooo...Gi...Bhul Abb Nah Hoo Gi...Karunga Na Tum Pe Sitam...

Both ayaan and asad's want for zoya '

Humeira consollling herself ( in her mind ) what if she has no right over ayaan atleast he'll be near her atleast she can see him every day .. no matter hw much pain it caused her being claimed by sm 1 she sill wanted only his happiness



Dil De Diya Hai ...Jaan Tumhe Deenge ...Daga Nahi Karenge Sanaam...Hooo...Ooo

Ayaan and humeira


Rabb Di Kasam Yaara ...Rab Di Kasam...
Dil De Diya Hai...Jaan Tumhe...Deenge...Daga Nahi Karenge Sanaam ...*2

Asya together '

oOo

With yet again the flashback ended and agin zoya thought maybe this really was the best for every 1 ...


With that she one last time checked her make-up as she would have to go down 2 the mehfil any minute now '..

again to become some body else's wife '


Just then she saw her dost [Rashid ] breaking his head on smthing in the computer ( a slight smile crept up her face , ... seeing him looking @ the compuer doc. Like nuclear research ) '.. he was really trying hard to get something in the computer ' she thought she just might help she signaled him 2 cm in ',...

I thing she did do after in the last few weeks was respect her dost a lot ' coz she was right nw in his situation ' a few weeks of having 2 live through this was so hard , she could'nt imagine how he lived 17 yrs. Without his love just for the sake of the happiness of his children '

It is even harder being claimed by sm 1 else in the presence of one's love.

And her dost had lived through both those situation still stood here with a big smile on his face ..

Zoya: any problem dost ????

Rashid : yes !!... agar meri dost ithni khoobsurath lagegi kahin use meri nazar na lag jaye

( their was nothing uncomfortable or bad about the way Rashid had said it; it was a very genuine compliment he gave a friend of his daughter's age)

Zoya: muska kuch zyada nahi hogaya ' mein iss problem ki nahi [ pointing @ herself ] ( 2 which Rashid could'nt help laughing ) ' mein iss problem [nw pointing @ the computer '] ki baath kar rahi hoon.


Rashid : voh actually ' kya hain nay eh computer baar stuck ho jatha .. patta nahi kyun ..

Zoya: dikhaiye

Of -fo galathi na iss bechari system ki nahi aap ki hai .. apne is se multiple command diya haii '. Aise tabhi hotha hai jab aab baar baar click karthe rehthe hain... '

Zoya looked @ Rashid as if he had manhandled with her child and not a computer with *accusing grin😡*

To which Rashid responded a cheeky smile'.😲Which was followed by mujhe nahi patha tum kya keh rahi ho expression 🥱.

After working with the computer for a while zoya said " yeh lijiye , ho gaya aapka kaam "

Arz kiya hai (zoya)

(Rashid) irshad ! irshad !

Punjab hayana ya ho jalandar

And then entered someone else completing zoya's sher'.

zoya can fix anything

even if its Rashid miya's computer

shukriya shukriya '

zoya and Rashid turned to look @ the person[ 2 knw who had stolen zoya's copyrighted be-huda shayari ]


and then zoya exclaimed phuphi'

she ran and hugged dilshad ..


rashid : smiled @ dilshaad

even though they have'nt got the old relationship back .. things really where settling down .. nw there where casual meetings between dilshad and shireen ; dilshaad and Rashid, and no one had a problem with it ,not even MR.KHAN...


zoya:phuphi mujhe toh laga aap mujhe bhool hi gayi

dilshaad : bhala apni zoya ko phuphi bhool kaise sakthi hai ..

zoya : awww !!! aap bhetiye mein aathi hoon .

zoya: dost aapka computer teekh ho gaya na

Rashid : aur mera dimaag bhi are ithna kaam baki hai aur mein yahan baitha hoon 🤪...

Zoya and dilshaad where giggling @ the prev. comment😆

Rashid bent down to zoya's level

as zoya was sitting on the chair and Rashid was standing now and said all the best 2 zoya

patting her head affectionately .. and whispered in zoya's ear my ' mere bete ( sons) bohoth lucky hai '.

And then when he was almost @ the door turned and said

chahe jisko bhi tum milo...


'. Leaving a dumstruck zoya behind '


Precap

Zoya : qubool hai

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Ayaan : qubool hai

So how was it guy's ' ...

share u'r veiw's and don't forget 2 hit the like button '

VARSHA⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guy's ther goes your bonus chap- " might be a bit ok - ok so BURA NA MANO HOLI HAI "
and i might just update in 2 days or so ... so guy's
ar kiya hai

pls. forgive me if i'm a bit late ...

pls... forgive me if i am a bit late..

as mujhe karna hai decide asya ka fate
shukriya shukriya😆😆

lol ... wih love ... varsha
[ want more likes guy's c' mon ..]
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Qubool Hai?!! Oye kya Qubool Hai Kese Qubool Hai!!?
Dont tell me Nikah main Zoya ne Ayan ko Qubool hai bol diya
Nahiii...
Updt soon
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Originally posted by: Soumya02

Qubool Hai?!! Oye kya Qubool Hai Kese Qubool Hai!!?
Dont tell me Nikah main Zoya ne Ayan ko Qubool hai bol diya
Nahiii...
Updt soon

ARE !! BHAI ...kuaun kisse qubool kar raha hai mujhe kya pata ... usse jaane ke liye tho ... WAIT and WATCH karna padega ... HA ha HA ha 😃
VARSHA😆

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