FF - Pehla Pyaar (Epilogue Page 51) COMPLETED

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Hey, it cnt be end so really.
Shit, m expecting another one or more

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

yipee...thanks for making this the ending...not that the other one was not good...it was good, but this was better...and this one had that little dash, of the brand of craziness that zoya and khushi specialize in...loved it...

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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

like our stories have been penned by the same person" "

yes,the Gul lady's story😉

great story yours too👏

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niharika

@nihamrm

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

okay this was awesome and now i'm confused cause i like both the endings
and why did u end it so quickly

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

hey plsss give the story an epilog fron continue to last part wet asad had confess his love..in epilog pls make their nikah n also proper suhagrat in asad style as they vl b getng nikah b4 3 months ended...plsssn i als reas dat os Arshi n AsyA both r my fav ...bt stl i wnt epulog...

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

hey finished this ff just nw... i loved every chptr of it. plz continue soon... the fav chptrs of mine were when zoya come out in towel b4 asad. nd the confession part at ayaan's place... instead of alternate ending i feel confession part goes more appropriately...

althought i hv read ur OS b4... so i think it will be better to remain as an OS only... i wish u'll gv an epilogue aftr confession part... & not to forgt i liked yash-asad conversation very much...

do drop me a pm when u write some more

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Hey
I hv red dis one b4 in ur os
Bt i lyk d pehli vali endng more
Sb k saamne confession ws awsm
Plz continue writing
U r an amazng writer
Wanna read more frm u
Gd lck

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Denita what are you doing here girl?? Just run to 4lions!! You are mindboggling😃
This is the perfect story that AsYa could probably get..😳
I'm rendered speechless!!😲
Beautifully heart wrenching!!🤗
Asad behaves as a MAN!!! 👏

W.O.W👍🏼

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

And seriously I want you to go on and on with this story..This was so amazing!!🤗
Even if you are ending this one, I would want you to write another one ASAP and post it!!😃
Will be waiting😳