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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing dear really AMAZING!!!!!!

I like the last part so much u narreted Zoya's feelings so nicely

plz continue it

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Soumya Singh

@soumyasingh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I loved it...soo much...

It awesome...

mood acha kar diya..I was a little pissed after reading that post about surbhi...

but this made up for it...thank you!!

please continue this soon, and PM me..

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I was just dumbstruck. WOOOW.

Do i see this happening? YES.

BRAVO. 👏

And yeah

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

RES!

This was just boo-tee-ful! :D

I loved it! I loved how easily you slipped into the characters and i loved Zoya and Dilshad's rapport. :)

Please try and continue. :D Pleaseee?

I have this huge crush on you right now for writing this. :P

Edited by havokhotline - 12 years ago

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Sharyn

@-LarryGurl-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This wuz Mind blowin' gal!!! U havta continue!!!! Do PM meh!!

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Chinnu.Munnu

@Chinnu.Munnu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Superb OS..Lovely and well said emotions..Plz Continue this.

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suruchi rajpal

@luvushivin1

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow...just awsum continue mit yaar

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

OMG! Just too good! You must continue this!!! I hope the dance isn't real...cause if it is ..then quite clear that Asad won't treat her properly ..and continue to be indifferent. -.- Please PM me :)))

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penfriend28

@penfriend28

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

excellently written...are you going to continue this?

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

This is simply out of the world..👏👍🏼
Emotions expressed at its best..Was almost into tears😭
Please there should be a confrontation between AsYa..It would be all the more beautiful..😃
And as for that Tanveer, she should DIE just NOW..like NOW😡
Write more and please PM me!!!😊