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Posted: 12 years ago
its amazing...maza a gya...

plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was just WOW👏
The way they spoke about each other was soo mitwa-ish..😳
I loved it loved it..😛
Continue with the next part soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part dear👍🏼..don't know where to start from..it was such a amazing part.⭐️👏..

asad & zoya are too cute foe their own good..one moment they are worried for each other and the the very next moment they are ready to pull each others hair.😆..i loved their cute little banter on the marraige issue..and the cockroach scene that followed by was too good..u just made my day...at the end how they describe the other one truly reflects their love ..and what the hell mr. dhurandar wants to see their bedroom...😲
.pls continue soon ..i am dying to read what will happen next and also sorry for late comment...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely! dear pls cont soon nd pm me..if its possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ff.
I just loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey friends,
Loving all the comments, thank you thank you so much :) I cannot tell you how much it means to me. All your comments and likes have actually made me make time to write..this is like becoming like a serious addicatation. Please do keep it coming..
so my peeps, heres Part 7.
PS : Please please please tell me what you think..
PPS : Please ignore any errors..

Part 7

"Bbbeeedddrrrooomm" gulped Zoya "why?" asked Zoya. Dilshaad and Najma were shocked. Now, let the truth come out smirked Tanveer. It only occurred to now to Dilshaad that Asad and Zoya was married yet they kept their separate rooms. "Voh actually"Asad rubbed his forehead. "Miss Farooqi, sorry Zoya and I sleep separately" said Asad. Mr Watavdhekar and Dolly was shocked. "Mr Khan, what is the meaning of this? Are you Mrs Khan not married? Why do you sleep separately? Look Mr Khan I am a strict follower of kaide + Kunoon, and this is surely fishy and you hiding something Mr Khan" questioned Mr Watavdhekar. Zoya held Dilshaad's hand. This is all going downhill. Najma came and stood and Zoya's side. "Look Mr Watavdhekar, yes granted Zoya and I are married in the eyes of the law. But we have yet to have our traditional nikkah. And till then Zoya and I decided we will not have any kind of "those"relations" explained Asad. "I respect your views Mr Khan but you are husband and wife and not fulfilling or obeying all the rules of that lawful relationship you are actually breaking the law. Look Mr Khan, I really do not want to have to deport Mrs Khan on the grounds that all the laws are not being followed "explained Mr Watavdhekar calmly. Dilshaad decided it was time intervene.

"Mr Watavdhekar, Zoya will be shifted into Asad's room tonite"said Dilshaad. "But ammi"said Asad and Zoya together. Dilshaad held her hand up to stop them. "You are right Mr Watavdhekar, they should be following all the rules that apply to a husband and wife. I will make sure they do not break any of those laws" said Dilshaad authoratively. "Thank you Mrs Khan, I am glad that there is some here that follows kaide + Kunoon like me. I will take you leave. But please remember we will visit anytime" said Mr Watavdhekar. "Come Dolly, Namaste" said Mr Watavdhekar. And with Mr Watavdhekar and Dolly left. "ammi why did you agree to this" asked Asad angrily. "Cos this is what is right Asad" said Dilshaad equally loud. "ammi this is wrong "said Asad trying to make his mother understand. "are you not married Asad? Is Zoya not your wife? "asked Dilshaad. "Look I know you guys are all new to this but you are married. And it is not right for a husband and wife to be apart. Treasure these moments you have cos you never know when they will be snatched from you "Dilshaad said with a heavy heart. Zoya moved forward and held Dilshaad. "Najma, help Zoya move into Asad's room NOW "ordered Dilshaad and with that Dilshaad went into her room.

Allah Miya, now what is she to do. Zoya's bags were packed so there wasn't much to move. Najma knew it would be wise not to be in the same room. So she helped Zoya move her bags into her bhai-jaan's room and go the hell out of the war zone. And a war zone it was. Asad was pacing the room. He looked like a caged lion wanting to pounce. Zoya straightened her shoulders and walked in. Before Asad could speak Zoya started "Look Mr Khan, I am not happy with this as well. But I will do this just for ammi. I don't know who we will work this out. But let's agree to stay out of each other's way" said Zoya confidently. Asad whom was looking at Zoya seriously said "agreed! But I was a few rules." Before Zoya could even open her mouth Asad said "this is my room, so you WILL follow my rules. Rule no1 : There will be no mess in this room. No pizza boxes, no chips no dirt. Rule no 2 : You will not keep you things thrown around. Rule no 3 : No jumping on the furniture especially the bed. Rule no 4 : stay out of my way and be quiet." Asad emphasised on each rule. "is that all Mr Khan, you didn't say anything about the bathroom "said Zoya sarcastically. " the exact same rules applies to the bathroom"said Asad. "I was joking Mr Khan" said Zoya equally sarcastically.

Zoya needed some air. This man is frustrating. She turned and walked out leaving a stunned Asad staring at her back. Zoya went out the room and called Ayaan. "Raabert, how is Humera? Is she okay "asked Asad. "Mona darling, she is doing much better. Mona, I am really sorry about what happened here. I should have never asked Badi ammi to come. I feel really really bad. I am so sorry for mumani Mona. I really wished I could have strangled her "apologised Ayaan. "Raabert its okay, as long as Humera is doing better. Listen Raabert I called cos I lost a camera in all that hungama, please will you check if I dropped it there. It's really important I find it "pleaded Zoya. "I will look for your camera" said Ayaan. "okay Raabert, got to go back into the lion's den" giggled Zoya and began walking into Asad's room. "Take care of Humera Raabert, over and out". Asad heard Zoya say.
"Raabert, still talking to him "asked Asad. "why wouldn't I, he is my friend after all "replied Zoya. Asad shook his head and went to his cupboard. "Mr Khan, Please can you make some space in your cupboard for me "asked Zoya. Asad was still irritated with everything that went on today and more irritated that she was moved into his room. His irritation was reaching boiling point.

Zoya wheeled her suitcase to the cupboard and stood behind Asad. Whilst wheeling her suitcase the carpet got folded. Asad noticed this and his irritation burst "why Miss Farooqi, why do I need to make space for you in cupboard. It's not enough you took over my house, my room, my life, and my heeaarrtt, "Asad stopped before he said heart. Asad rubbed his forehead. "Beside, why should I re-arrange my life when you will be gone in 3 months "said Asad's the words hurt him more when he said it out aloud. Zoya refused to cry in front of Asad. "I am sorry for asking Mr Khan, I will just live out my suitcase for the next 3 months. Besides I don't know when you might change your mind and kick me out the house again "said Zoya fiercely. Zoya was really proud of herself her voice didn't crack once. With that she pushed her suitcase against the wall neatly took her iPad and walked to the door. To make a point she knew Mr Khan was staring a hole into her back. She walked to the window, opened the window and jumped out the window. Badtameez ladki thought Asad.

Asad went into his bathroom and splashed water on his face. He looked into the mirror. This girl drives him crazy. How the hell is he going to manage 3 months living in the same room with her. She does things to his mind, he is more aware that he has a heart around her. He unbuttoned his shirt and looked at his reflection. What had he become? Thinking about all the things that had happened in the 6 months Zoya came into his life. Zoya, this girl will drive him crazy. He splashed some more water on his face removed his shirt which was now wet and walked out the bathroom towards his cupboard. Zoya was climbing back in through the window and her shoe got stuck on the window latch. Zoya was about to fall and Asad rushed forward and held Zoya's waist. Asad's face was in line with Zoya's tummy. He effortlessly lifted her from the window ledge and set her down slowly. Zoya was sliding flush down Asad's body, there was no space between then. Asad felt Zoya's every curve as she torturously slid down as Asad lowered Zoya. Zoya finally felt ground beneath her feet. Asad's hand was still on Zoya's waist he tightened his hold on Zoya and secured his hands around her. Zoya had her hands on Asad's bare shoulders. Zoya could feel his muscles. They were staring into each other's eyes. Zoya could swear she could hear Mitwa ishq par zor nahi in the background. Zoya moved her hands over Asad's shoulder to his neck and then back to his shoulder. Asad was loving the feel of Zoya in his arms, his thumbs was daftly drawing circles on her lower back. He could almost hear Zoya moan. God, that was so sexy. They were so lost in each other that they didn't notice a third pair of eyes invading their moment. Tanveer was shocked at what she saw. Asad with no shirt holding onto to Zoya like she was his life raft. Their lips were millimetres apart. She had to stop this. They cannot get closer. And with that she dropped a plant.

This made Asad and Zoya spring apart again like they have been burnt. Asad was embarrassed. "Miss Farooqi, are you stupid? Is it so hard for you to use the door like normal human beings? Shouted Asad. Zoya looked at him like he had sprouted horns. "Allah Miya what wrong with you Mr khan? I am sure you have a mental illness, Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde syndrome, you blow hot and cold at the same time. Make you mind up? So that others can keep up." Shouted Zoya. Zoya was really irritated now, this man is frustrating. He give her all these tingly feeling and in the very next heartbeat she feels like beating him, argh! Zoya started moving forward and Asad stepped backwards, he should see Zoya was furious. "Mr Khan, you are seriously messed up in the head. Do you even know what you want? You are the one that suggested we get married? Everything that is happening is cos of your suggestion and bright ideas. Once you have made your mind up, please do tell me what you want" and with that she turned to leave, she turned back to look at Asad and then his 6 pack she smiled and winked at him and walked out. Asad didn't know why but he suddenly felt violated. He needed a shower ' a cold one!

Edited by Denita-ishq - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

Any chance of getting an update today?

Just for you..lol
xoxo
Please do comment..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG that was so frikken amazing!!! go die tanveer
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want to kill Tanveer with my bare hands for spoiling such a beautiful moment of ASYA.
ASYA's bickering is just amazing.
Now ASYA will remain in the same room.
I hope ASYA may come closer soon and we may get some hot shot mitwa moments.
Awesome part.
I loved it to the core.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahaha...

i hope this happens in the show too...
i couldn't stop laughing at this chapter..

Thanks for the PM!!

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