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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice. i felt as if i was watching my old show PKYEK again :'(

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice character sketch!

But why did Abhay and Piya's name come in here? :O It's just a editing error right?

Or it would be another couple in this, now to handle when one is not enough! 😆

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Aha! Loved the start!!!

You gotta upload the next chapter soon!! :D

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

note:
I am really sorry guys.i made a typing mistake on the character sketch as i am still hooked on abhiya.i am really very sorry i have corrected that mistake now.And yes plz look below.I have some CHARACTERS.have fun.😊

Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

New characters:

Abhay raichand:A 204 year old powerful vampire.he is a friend of both Asad and Zoya.he tries to make Asad and Zoya to be one.he somehow knows that Asad likes Zoya.Piya and Abhay will come into Zoya and Asad's life like 2 angels.

Piya dobriyal:a 203 year old powerful hybrid.she is also friend of both Asad and Zoya.She knows asad and zoya somehow like each other.She also wants Asya to be together.Forever.
Asad Zoya Abhay and Piya will have to work together to finish rahul and the Gangeral.

Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Nice story
Wow asad ia a vampire
This is interesting
Zoya and asad in the same college wow
Pls pm mee and
Pls continue soon

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I really like your writing.
This was very interesting.
Update soon!

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hninhayman

@hninhayman

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awsome and fabulous
loved it to the core
really love the story
continue soon

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preethi

@preethi18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

nice update n thanx for scarp yar...😊

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

thank you so much for your precious comments everyone.I will try my best to update tomorrow.If not then on saturday as i will be really busy with my mid term break assigments.And yes plz see down in 30 minutes.there is a surprise.😊

Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago