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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Surprise in 30 minutes huh? 😆

Wokay!!! I am waiting... Waiting...

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Sanjana

@Senoritaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

sorry for late
But awsome part yar
U r very gud writer waiting to see how asad zoya will meet?i like zoya's dialouge to T

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Chapter 2:meeting enemies and friends.

NEXT DAY .MOUNT COLLEGE.9:30 AM

zoya made her way to the class room with misha when someone called zoe."ZOE."zoya turned around.she was happy and at the same time shocked.still she smiled and said"Piya'what are you doing here.i thought you were in mumbai.not dehradun.and one more thing where is Mr.abhay raichand!"she folded her arms saying that."Zoe just cam down.breath in.breath out."Zoya did the same."okay now for the first thing.tum bohot bolti hoon."Saying that she burst ot laughing.zoya also joined."piya meet misha.misha this is piya.one of my best friends."piya and misha shook hands."piya."Asad called her.he was looking hot handsome and at the same time cute."asad.tum bhi.i thought you were never going to come as zoya's here."Piya replied.
"agar mujhe bata hona tha kii ye asad ahmed khan yaha pe aaraha hain.to main tara ka kehna kabhi bhi nahi maanti.aur ha you.tum mujse dhoor raho tohi tumhare liya accha hoga."zoya said in fuming in anger."Aur mujhe bhi tumse baat karne mein ko intrest nahi hai.agar mom aur dad insist nahi karti na.to main is college apna pair bhi nahi rakti."Asad replied.then asad and zoya turned to there back and went on their ows ways.But who knows what's destiny.When asya went piya burst out laughing."itna has kyun rahi hoon tum.yeh dono cats aur dogs ki tara fight kyun kar rahete."mish asked surpried."piya just couldnt control her laughter.after a while a voice called from behind."Its a long story.and i am sure u wont have time for it." A REALLY HANDSOME LOOKING BOY SAID FROM BEHIND.HIS BLUE EYES WITH SPARKS IN THEM.

phew.thats done.i know ki thodi bakwaas types kii hai.plz be free to shre your views.😊

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

And Abhay is right there! BAM!!!!

That was the Isshurprise-wa?? Uh huh!!!! I liked it a lot!!

But you HAVE to continue it soon, pal!!!! :D

Annie

Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago

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hninhayman

@hninhayman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow awsome
loved it
continue soon...cant wait to read next part

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

nice one dear

loved it😳

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Important note:
anyone who wants a pm of the updates plz like this post.it will be easier for me to pm then.

Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Great update! Continue soon dear...:)

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Niharikapriya10

@Niharikapriya10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hey...very nice yar...thanks...its amazing...sorry for the late...busy today...now only i completed reading...its really nice...i hope u remind me abt ur ss,ff,os in future also...🤗