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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..i jst love ur FF Bekaraar...teaser -its jst amazing..simply superb...dancing like zoya does when asad confess abt tht night...pls continue...& pls do PM me..too don't want to miss this amazing FF...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was a vry nice update😊
plz update soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 5

"Wo kya Zoya?" asked Asad.

Zoya was so much lost that she was not even noticing that he took her name; and that too First name!

"Wo.." she was again and again saying this word and the words she planned to say next fail to slip down.

He was looking in her eyes waiting for her answer. And she was trying hard to not meet his gaze but was failing terribly. Well how could she not? Her love is right in-front of her, trapping her and being all lovey-dovey and she would ignore it? Well that's not possible in a hundred years.

"Kyun Zoya?" she looked up at his face with a confused look.

She didn't knew what he wants to say and these words were just confusing her up.

"Wo bas mere muh se phisal gaya aapka naam" said Zoya as she tried to leave but only to be stopped by Asad.

"Kyun Zoya... kyun main aapse itni nafrat karne ke baad bhi aapko mujhe ignore karte hue nahi dekh sakta? Kyun mere sapnon mein aapka hi saaya chaaya rehta hai? Kyun aapke aason se mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki dard mujhe ho raha hai? Kyun main aap se aapke saare daron ko dur karna chahta hun? Kyun main aapko dekhe bina apna din nahi guzaar paata? Kyun Zoya? Kyun!" Asad spoke out shocking Zoya to the core.

"WOW! Jahanpannah 6 packs in love with me yippie!!!" screamed Zoya's insides.

Asad had finally confessed what he feels but still he is not able to identify which feeling is it.

"Main bhi toh aapse ye sawaal puch sakti hun Mr. Khan!"

Asad face dropped as he listened 'Mr. Krah' again while Zoya continued, "Kyun mujhe is Akdu aadmi se itni mohobaat hai? Kyun is Akdu aadmi ke bina ek pal bhi guzaara nahi jaata mujhse? Kyun jab main kisi musibat mein hoti toh mere dil mein ye umeed rehti hai ki aap aayenge? Kyun aapka dukh mujhe dekha nahi jaata?Why does my heart goes erratic when you are near me? Why does my heart can't stay without you? Kyun meri dhadkane badhti hain jab aap mere paas aate ho? Kyun jab aap mereko ignore karte hain tab mujhe bura lagta hai? Boliye na Asad? KYUN!" shouted Zoya back at him.

There were soo much 'Kyun' and the answer to that simple word is - love. But it seems like the two of them had swore to ever realize that they both had fallen for the other. They failed to realize that what they had wished for the other on the meteor shower day had finally turned out and khuda had already sent a qubool hai for that. But how are they to realize? Sometimes, it feels like they two are two small children who can't do anything by their own well that is when it came to their love life.

Asad looked up at her trying to absorb the words she just spoke. Their life is now like a roller coaster to them. Every other day, a bomb will explode leaving behind the two to think upon that a lot. And the same had happened today again. There was an awkward silence between the two and they didn't know how to have it gone. Just a few seconds back they were questioning the other about what they feel for each other and now the silence was all that was present there. The silence was killing zoya up so she thought of killing up this silence.

"Aap hamesha itne confused kyun hote hai Mr. Khan?" zoya yelled at him.

"Aap itni complicated kyun hai miss farukhi?" he yelled with the same intensity.

"I asked first mr. khan. Why are you so rude, so emotionally challenged?"

"That is the way I am. Do you have any problem with it miss farukhi?"


"Ya I do have one!"

"Oh and why do you have any problem?" he asked with a smirk.

"Uh.. wo…" Zoya fumbled and spat at him the next moment, "Just leave it mr. khan! An emotionally challenged person like you can never understand this!"

She left the place while the woman figure that was hiding behind the door of the room hid just to make sure she was not seen by anyone.

Edited by -ChocoPie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lazy konpal!!why dont everyday?😆 asad and zoya are back to square one again..when are they going to confess?is it going to happen before i die?update soon..🤗 Remember me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ nandu - ya they are back to square one! 🤣

ya they would confess soon :)

2-3 updates more. pakka!

n ya i do rememkber u, yaari and everyone i knew over here.

but u see 11th pressure and my not-s-lovely net is giving me a tight head ache!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice, So many kyun's my my.. Yeh dono itne budhu kyun hai kyun hai kyun hai... 😆 continue soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..lovely..wItng 4 d confession...plz update soon...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! Just read the whole thing and I'm amazed! Love it love it love it! Ahhh the whole thing was beautiful, they literally confessed and still somehow managed to go back to square one again *facepalm* if that happens in the show i'll die! But wooo yeah, i'm hoping Dilshad heard everything! I absolutely adore the way you write, keeep up the beautiful work! Please update sooonsss! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE BUT MAKE INDEX SOONISH

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