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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: suchishah

Fantastic...it made me cry
Well I m really , extremely BEKARAAR to read the next part...pls update soon...I have exams so pls pm me and I will read it as soon as I get time...plzzz


thanx u soo much dear :)

I will update soon and will start pming from the next update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Aww...dis was a sad 1...bt i luvd readin it...it was fab..updte asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: shloksuchi

Aww...dis was a sad 1...bt i luvd readin it...it was fab..updte asap


thanx dear :)

will update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
OMG!!! *_* Perfect!!! Well done!! 👏 Its hard to write thoughtfully and then on top of that write in someone's point of view that you might not even relate to ...I'm loving it! Please PM me :))) Thank youuu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: irock321

OMG!!! *_* Perfect!!! Well done!! 👏 Its hard to write thoughtfully and then on top of that write in someone's point of view that you might not even relate to ...I'm loving it! Please PM me :))) Thank youuu


thanx dear :)

POV's is my type coz I can imagine very well through that 😳

will start pming from next updates :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Lovely update konpal..loved zoya's confession in the lawn..update the next part sooon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Lovely update konpal..loved zoya's confession in the lawn..update the next part sooon.


Thanx nandini 🤗

will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
really nice...good update..interesting...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

really nice...good update..interesting...continue soon..😊


Thanx dear :)

will do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

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Zoya sat in the lawn looking up at the sky talking to her ammi.

"Main bahut buri hun na ammi? Isiliye toh kabhi koi mujhe chodke chala jaata hai ya phir main. Aap kyon gayi ammi? Uss aag se kyon bachaaya mujhe aapne? Usi aag mein aapke saath jal kar mar jaati toh accha hota na ammi? Atleast aapke saath hoti ab. Aap se theek se baat kar paati. Pata hai aami, jab rona aata hai toh koi nahi hota. Aapki gaud mein sar rakh kar rone ka man karta hai ammi. But aap nahi ho. Abbu... aabu bhi chale gaye the aapko aur mujhe chodke sirf paison ke liye. Main bahut buri hun aami. Please apne paas bula na mujhe... please ammi." broke down zoya.

Little did she knew, Asad was just standing behind her and had tears in his eyes listening to her confession.



Waise toh the entire chapter was very touching & emotional. But this last part really brought tears to my eyes😭😭😭😭 How lonely & sad Zoya must actually be...though she tries to hide everything under the facade of cheerfulness

Very well written👏👏👏 Do update soon!

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