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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

amazing update!!!loving a j Akdu ahmad khan!!!

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

just caught up with both parts... absolutely hilarious. loved everything about this story :D

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e_enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Holy Shiat.

I love it!

You're so brilliant! :)

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-Fizzi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs
*balle balle, oh shava shava*

You updaaated!!! Muahahahaha, I'm so sorry about your paper, btw. BUT THIS. WAS. BLOODY. AWESOME.

Asher, my man, Asad really isn't an ogre, but I LOVE YOU. Someone PLEASE give the give a HUGE welcome 😆 I love this guy.!!!! SO MUCH. 😆 And he hasn't even STARTED to kick Asad's butt yet!!! 🤣

The best part was Ayaan+Zoe laughing their bums off when they heard 'Jammy' mwahahahahhahahaha, poor guy, I'm already starting to feel sorry for him, but not neaaarly enough. Fizzi, make him suffer😈, tabhi samjhega yeh duffer!

Asher, puppiyaan-jhappiyaan to you my man! 😃

Fizzi, THANK YOUUU for updating! 😃
Cheers, and the next update wanted ASAP!
-Raina

Eee! RAINNAAA! I actually thought you were upset with me about my spamming and bad singing joke! ;( But I'm glad your not! :D

I had excruciating pain in my heart when I wrote that Asad looked like an Ogre, trust me. But it had to be done! :P

Your gonna love him a great deal babe! Maybe love him even more than you love me! Hmmpphh! I'd be pissed but whatever, he's imaginary but i ain't! 🤣 🤣

Asad is gonna groan and moan in pain real soon! ;) Look out for that!

ILOVEYOU! :$ :$

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-Fizzi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Babe, I'm in 12th grade! :P

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-Fizzi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: devildiva21
another superb update...!!!
loved it...!!!
ohh yeah asher go for it...!!! am just loving him...!!!!😉
and his and zoya's friendship cool...!!!😎
continue soon...!!!

Thank you so much! Your comment means a lot to me! :D And to Asher too! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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-Fizzi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Sruthi_Virmanli
Good girl! 🤗

It was awesome babe. Seriously. I love such light hearted ones. <3
Cant wait for the next part!

I've always been a good girl 😳 🤣

Thank you so much!! :D <3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: startruck
wow wow wow!

amazing update!

wonder would have been jammy's reaction on seeing asher sleeping with zoya (not literally of course)

it was really nice chapter!

continue soonish!