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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Killer preview... Please continue soon

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

oh no Asad don't think like tht u r her Mr. Right n she is your Mrs. Right trust me u shud never look for someone too perferct cuz they r never wht they seem 😭 nice fizzi

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

You do realise that I hate you for this right?

Preview deke gaayab? Kamini! 😆 Anyway, brilliant promo! Tarasta hua hi rakh tu humko! I love the way Asher punched Asad. Thank God, someone had to! But Asad punched Ash back. DAMMIT. Damn him and his six-packs. Actually, not really! 😆

But honestly, someone make Asad realise that he IS the Mr. Right. Even though he acts like an ass half the time. STILL. Sheeesh! *facepalm*

Asher, do the honours, will you?😆

Cheers!

-Raina

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

OMG!!! Can't wait for the full thing!!! I've been like addicted to your pieces!! Just amazing!!! Can't wait for Asad and Asher ...their battle xD LOL Its liek the renaissance ...where they're going to duel it out for the girl xD Thsi girl is Zoyaaa :D

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-Fizzi-

@-Fizzi-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

If anyone has any suggestions regarding the story, please PM me! :(

I'm having a feeling that I'm gonna slip in to writer's block really soon! :/

So please let me write goody goody stuff soon! :D

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Geetha

@Geet_Ha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

The story is very interesting.. 😊 I really wanted Asad to feel exactly what Zoya felt with the entry of Tanveer.. Please pm me if u have updated the next part.. Thank u so much 😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Just stumbled upon all your AsYa work and reading them one by one. This is one good one cause I like the fact that you stick to real Asad and Zoya. Asher is an awesome friend as well. Do PM me when you update the next chapter.

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Preview was great now when do we get the real update???

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-Fizzi-

@-Fizzi-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3491802/oh-shit-ss-by-fizzi-and-raina-part5-page13

This is the link for the next updates! ;)

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3491802/oh-shit-ss-by-fizzi-and-raina-part5-page13

This is the link for the next updates! ;)

Read and commented, girl!!! :D

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