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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: irock321

Amazing!! I love it! I just read it all in one go right now! Too good! Poor Zoya ...and it was totally Asad's fault for leaving her there all by herself! -.- Anyways please PM me for next chapter :))) Thanks!!


same- please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! That was awesome! Please update soon! And please pm me when you do! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Totally Interesting SS!!..
Loving their "team work"...Asad does care about Zoya but he shouldn't have left her alone like that...hopefully he finds her & we get some "Mitwa" moments!!..lol
Please pm me...Thanks!..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know all you guys want to see Asad rescuing Zoya and even I wanted to include scenes like that but then I thought that we have seen such scenes in the serial and read in many other OS, SS and FFs so decided to try something new and refreshing so please don't mind. I am also including Ayaan and Humaira in this OS now as I find them quite cute as a couple and yes Ayaan is still angry with Asad in my OS just like in the serial and yes this part will be longer then my previous parts so please bear with me and do leave your lovely comments at the end.

Part 6:

Asad was standing outside the same old building where he had left Zoya; he was running desperately around the whole place asking random people about Zoya, giving a description of what she was wearing.

Asad: bahi sahib, ap ne ek larki dekha hai, unho ne jeans pehni hui hai ur blue top?

Man: nai bhai hum ne nahi dekha.

He goes toward another man

Asad: apne kishi larki ko dekha hai, usne jeans peheni hui hai ur blue top?

2nd man: hame apna hi hosh nahi hai ur logo ko kya dekhe, jao ghar jao tum bhi ur jis ko tum dhund rahe ho agar ab tak who sahi salamat hogi to mil hi gai gi warna?

Asad: WARNA KYA! Han warna kya! Kuch nahi hoga zoya ko, kuch nahi, samje tum!(holding his collar)

2nd man: are choro mujhe, pagal ho kya? Bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha, itni fiqar ho rahi hai to bandke kyu nahi rakha apne ap se.

Asad(back into his senses): iam sorry.

Saying this asad let go of the man's collar and the man left the place.

Asad(to himself): kaha ho tum zoya?(with tears in his eyes)

Just then he heard a known voice, it was coming from the back side of the building. Asad immediately ran behind the old building and when he finally reached the place, he stood there shocked, zoya was running around with some children playing catching game.

Asad: zo..Miss. Farooqi!

Zoya was literally surprised to hear that voice and the kids with her were completely afraid and so they all ran behind zoya for protection as asad approached them.

Asad: ap yaha kya kar rahi hai? Ap ko is waqt ghar par hona chahiye tha, ammi ko kithi fiqar ho rahi hai apki ur ap yaha bacho ke saath khel rahi hai?

Zoya: oh really mr. khan, ab ap hi mujhe bataiye ke main ghar kese jati? Itni teez barish main koi auto ya taxi nahi mil rahi thi ur wese bhi ap hi mujhe yaha akele chor kar gai the.

Asad: I know, ke main chor kar gaya tha, bar bar yad dilane ki zarurat nahi hai, ap chaliye!

Zoya: relax mr. khan, chila kya rahe hai?

Asad: main kab chila raha ho!

Zoya: really mr. khan?

Asad: ab chaliye.

Zoya turns around and talks to the kids.

Zoya: ok bacho, main chalti ho ab tum log bhi ghar jao, thad lag jai gi.

Kids(together): bye didi.

Zoya(with a smile): bye.

just then one cute kid comes up to asad and signal's him to come down and he wispers into his ears.

kid: didi ki itni fhiqar hai to saf saf kyu nahi bol dete, ammi ko bich main kyu larahe ho?

asad: what, chalo jao yaha se.

He ran off with the other kids toward his home.

asad(to himself): aj kal ke bache bhi na.

zoya: kuch kaha apne?

asad: nai kuch nai.

zoya: ab chale?

asad: ofcourse.

Scene shift to Ayaan and Humaira

ayaan and humaira were also stuck in the rain , they were walking on the flooded roads as ayaan's mike was of no use so they had decided to walk home or atleast find a shelter from the rain.

ayaan: humaira begum, ap ko bhi aj ka hi din mila tha apni dost se kitabe lene ka?

humaira: ayaan, is main hamari kya galti hai, hum ne thori na kaha tha hamre saath chalne ke liye.

ayaan: ab ko akele bhi to nahi jane de sakte the na

humaira: acha, ap ko kabse hamari fiqar hone lagi?

ayaan(flirting): hame to hamsha se hi apki fiqar hai humaira begum, kyu koi shaq hai kya?

humaira(to herself): kash.

ayaan: kuch kaha apne?

humaira: nahi kuch nahi.

ayaan: barish to ur mazed bar rahi hai.

humaira: han ayaan, ghar main bhi sab bohat pareshan ho rahe hoge.

ayaan: don't worry humaira begum, sab thik ho gai ga.

humaira: woh dekiye ayaan!

humaira saw asad coming from the direction they were heading and they also saw zoya with him. Asad also spotted ayaan along with humaira and was heading toward them, while zoya was shocked to see ayaan and humaira.

zoya(to herself): Allah miya, ye dono yaha kya kar rahe hai, agar us larke ne mr. khan ko batayia ke main ne iske saath kya kiya tha to?

asad: kya howa?

zoya(worriedly): kuch nahi

zoya(to herself): Allah miya. ye mr. khan unhe ki taraf you bar rahe hai?

Asad just keep passing glance at zoya as he felt something wrong.

And they were finally face to face.

ayaan: tum!

humaira: ap!

both ayaan and humaira passed glance to each other and asad just stood their confused while zoya was just scared of asad's anger once he finds out what she did.

humaira: ap inhe jante hai ayaan?

zoya(shocked): ayaan!

ayaan: han, humaira begum, lekin ap inhe kese janti hai?

zoya(teasingly): oh ho, humaira begum.

asad: miss. farooqi, behave yourself!

ayaan: what! ye hai apki miss. farooqi?

zoya: what do you mean by apki?

asad: ek minute, ap log mujhe bataye ge ke ap log ek dosre ko kese jante hai.

ayaan: bhaijaan ye wahi larki hai jis ki waja se mazar par ap kar attack huwa tha ur isne mujhe us cold drink wale dukan dar se bhi pitvaya tha.

Both asad and humaira at the same time(shocked): kya!

zoya: oh ho apni bat to batana bhol hi gaye, us kin najma ke collage bukha behen kar andar ghusne ki kosish hon kar raha tha?

asad: what! ayaan, tum larki ban kar collage main khus rahe the?

ayaan: main kya karta bhaijaan, humaira begum fashion show main part le larhi thi to main miss kar deta kya? ur wese bhi ye mohotarma bhi woh wahi kar rahi thi.

asad: miss. farooqi ap bhi?

zoya: lekin mr. khan, najma bhi to part le rahi thi na, main to sirf usko cheer karne ke liye gai thi.

asad: don't tell me, main achi tarha se janta ho ke ap kya kya kar sakti hai.

ayaan: are humaira begum, apne to bataya hi nahi ap kese janti hai mona ko?

asad: ye mona kon hai?

zoya: are mr. khan, rabart meri bat kar raha hai.

asad(pissed off): oh to ap dono us din ek duse se bat kar rahe the ur woh sab plan ap dono ne mil kar banaya tha.

zoya: choriye na mr. khan, ap bhi kitne sawal karte hai(trying not to bring up that topic), anyway ayaan, main batati ho ke main humaira se kaha mili thi.

humaira(worriedly): are nai nai baji, main batati ho na.

zoya: are humaira, main ho na, hum log ushi fashion show main mile the, humaira tumhe impress karne ke liye part le rahi thi ur bohat dari hui thi, main use samjhaya ur phir ja kar us main confidence aya ur woh stage par gai.

Asad saw humaira's expression and knew she was embarrassed.

asad: miss. farooqi ab bhi na.

zoya(confused): kuch galat kaha kya main ne?

ayaan: to ap hame impress karne ki kosish kar rahi this?

humaira(blushing): ap bhi na ayaan.

Then it hit ayaan that he is angry with asad for not helping him in rashid's case.

asad: ayaan tum yaha itni barish main kya kar rahe ho?

ayan(coldly replies): apko ise kya karaf parta hai, main to sutela ho na.

asad felt a knife going through this heart and tears formed in his eyes. zoya saw asad and felt his pain, she wanted to go up to ayaan and tell him everything and she was about to do the same when asad held her hand and signaled her not to say anything. humaira also knew why ayaan was behaving this way.

humaira: ayaan ap ye kya ke rahe hai?

ayaan: chalo humaira begum, dar ho rahi hai.

just when ayaan was about to leave with humaira, some police man came and told them that they cannot go any further then this point as water has level is very high and anything can happen and told them to take shelter nearby.

asad: mujhe pata hai ayaan ke tumhe meri shakal bhi nahi dekni hai, lekin is waqt tumhara yahi rukna munasib hai.

ayaan had no choice but to give in as he did not want to risk humaira's life because of him. They saw a jhopri(tent type of thing with only a covering from top with nothing on its 4 side). with a bench in the middle.

asad: hame thori dar waha intezar karna chahiye, chalo.

All four of them started to walk towards the ghopri when zoya's leg got hurt because of something under the water which was not visible.

zoya: ouch!

asad: zoya!

zoya: mr. khan, ouch ah bohat darad ho raha hai.

asad: kuch nahi hoga, main ho na.

asad lifted zoya in his arms not noticing ayaan and humaira staring at them and smiling.(mitwa moment)

humaira: ap thik to hai na bagi?

zoya: han, main thik ho humaira, don't worry.

asad sited zoya on the bench and tied his rumal on her feet with great care(mitwa moment). he also took of his coat and gave to zoya to wear as she must be cold and went. Both zoya and humaira were sitting on the bench while asad and ayaan were standing on the opposite sides. zoya and humaira were actually having a great time talking to each other, they felt as if the have known each other for years but still they were not completely happy as asad and ayaan were sad and so they decided that its up to them to get these two brothers to solve their differences.

zoya(wispering): lagta hai ap hame hi kuch kara pare ga.

humaira(wispering): han bagi.

Edited by arnavkhushi-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
nice update dear !!!!!
i can't explain how much i like it
its really sooo nice than i think
i know next update will be Awesome also
i don't want to think about that but just want to read soon
So plz Plz Plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
hey it was a really nice chapter

waiting impatiently for the next part!

update soon pleeaajjj!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awesome blossom! I Loved it.. Eagerly waiting what the two girls are going to do! :D
Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Again a nice update

I loved asad care

And u didn't PM me no prob

The update was. Fab

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
nice update...👏👏
loved asads care for zoya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!!!! Wat an update.
Loved it.
Loved asad's care for zoya.
Eagerly waiting to read next part.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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