OS - The Past Meets the Future

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Sparkling-eyes5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

this was so beautiful!!!!!! great job!

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Denita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: arshi.loverb
Freakin awesum

Thank you😃

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Denita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5
this was so beautiful!!!!!! great job!

Thank you 😃 glad you liked it😃

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Denita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: nihamrm
wow thats just splendid
the comparisons between both the shows were written in a very beautiful way
and the last line that is our future just stole the whole glory
and loved the line It like our lifes have been penned by the same person
i understand the underlying meaning which u want to imply but still i just loved this os
do pm me if you write anything more😊

Thank you 😳 I am so glad you liked you it..really makes makes very happy that my story is appreciated..Asya and Arshi is beautiful..

thank you again for appreciaing my story 😃

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Denita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
i love u for this...sumthing new n sumthing just sooo beautiful

khushi ke aasu aa gaye literally...loved every bit of it

please do write more often here

Aww 😳 thank you..so glad you liked..

When life doesnt get in the way - I will try to write more often😃

thank you ⭐️

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Purely a beauty. And yes, there is so much of similarity in the two stories! I loved the end bit a lot! (:

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

This was simply heaven. Two of my favourite couple were in the same OS. Loved the way you blend IPKKND into Qubool hai.

Khushi, whose mouth was wide open and eyes unblinking.."Khushi you okay" Zoya shook Khushi a little. "khushi, khushi.." Khushi was speechless maybe for the first time in her life, Zoya just described Arnav-ji. "Zoya, what is Jahaphanah's full name.." Zoya looked at puzzled and said " Asad Ahmed Khan" Khushi let out the breathe she was holding and giggled. "Zoya, for a minute I thought you described my Arnav-ji,each

This literally cracked me up