~Dil-e-Muztar~ AsYa FF Part 7 updtd Pg. 74 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Will do dat 4 sure! 😳
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Originally posted by: NAVI55

Lovely...Can't wait for the next update👍🏼


Thanks :) Will update soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Sadaf_

Finally comment edited on page 34!! 😆


Hah...Finally 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Sadaf_

Reserved!


*Edited*
Chottuuu, you're becoming better day by day! 😃
A very nice part!! So beautifully written!!
Though it's a sad one yet I loved it!! ❤️
I'm glad Asad has decided to make Zoya alright. 😳
Razia toh Razia ismein Humaira bhi involved hai?? 😡
The last hug scene was realllyy cute!! 😳😳
Continue soon!!

Love,
Sadaf.


Aww...Am I Really?? 😳😳
I am sooo sooo glad you liked the part meli angel dii 🤗
Haan..humera bhi hai :P :P
You will love the further track...I think soo 😳😳
Muaaah :) luv uu di <3 :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
just red all the parts
they were amazing, plz post the nxt part soon, i had send u the request so pm me and plz post it nw please
Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
When are you going to update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow

just red all the parts
they were amazing, plz post the nxt part soon, i had send u the request so pm me and plz post it nw please


I am glad you're liking my ff :) Thanks alot! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess555

When are you going to update


Updating in a while! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

"Zoya beta, thora tou khaa lo" Dilshad insisted, holding the bowl of soup in her hand, sitting in front of Zoya who sighed.

"Phuphi'mein ne khaa tou lia. Please bas" Zoya said.

"Accha chalo'medicines le lo" Dilshad said handing her the medicines. Zoya took it and gulped them down without making a slight noise. Dilshad noticed the change in her. Gone was the bubbly girl, and who was sitting in front of her was a broken soul, her heart went out to her. She wiped the little tear from the corner of her eyes before Zoya could see them.

"You must be tired na beta'" Dilshad said and Zoya looked at her. "Tum aaram karo" Saying so, she made her lie down comfortably, went up to her and caressed her forehead dropping a motherly kiss there. "Take care beta" She said lovingly and Zoya lightly. As she was about to go, Zoya pulled her hand lightly. "Phupi'" Came her soft voice, she stopped and turned, "Kya hua baccha?"

Zoya signaled her to sit down, "Phupi'please aap meray paas raheye na'please stay with me." She whispered with tears in her eyes. Dilshad blinked back the tears formed in her eyes, smiled and sat down beside her. "I'm with you Zoya'you're my daughter na?" She asked, to which Zoya innocently nodded. Dilshad smiled, "I'm always with my daughter." Dilshad kissed her forehead and kept caressing her forehead until she slipped into a deep slumber.

The door creaked open and Asad entered, "Ammi wo'" But stopped short seeing the sight in front of him. His Ammi sat beside Zoya, caressing her hair who was looking angelic while sleeping. He wanted to capture this moment in his heart forever. He smiled.

"Aaram se Asad'she's sleeping" Dilshad whispered, pointing towards Zoya. "Kya hua?"

"Wo Ammi'bohot raat ho chuki hai.." Asad said, in a low voice. "Aap bhi jaa ke so jaiye" he said, Dilshad smiled. "Theek hai'" she was about to stand when she felt a pull on her arm. She turned around to see Zoya gripping her arm tightly, even in her sleep. Asad's heart filled with love for Zoya seeing how much she loved his Ammi. He smiled, touched. Dilshaad had tears in her eyes, she gently pulled her arm out of her grip and dropped a kiss on her forehead. Smiling, she left.

Asad looked at her, his eyes full of love. He went towards her and bent down to her level. He held her hand and kissed it ever so softly. "I'm sorry I coulsn't be there to support you when you were being accused of something you didn't do'" his voice cracked, "But I promise that I'll bring back the dazzling, dimpled smile of yours" he smiled through his tears, "I love you Zoya" He said.

A contented Dilshad stood outside, who had witnessed his son's little confession. She was happy that Asad has accepted his love towards her and promised that he'll bring their Zoya back.


***


"Ayaan'please have it. Aap ne kal se kuch nahi khaya hai" Humera spoke with a sugar-coated voice. Ayan sat there with fury written all over his face. The mention of yesterday made him burn like hell. He couldn't forget how Zoya had betrayed him, having an extra-marital affair with his own brother?!

And his brother'his bhaijaan. His inspiration, his guide, his best friend, his everything. Despite of being a half brother, he loved his brother like anything. And he'just betrayed him? He felt angry tears pouring out of his eyes.

Humera got panicked, "Ayaan'aap theek tou ho? Please'kuch khaa lijiye..warna aap ki tabiat kharab ho jae gi'"

"bas Humera! Mein ne kaha hai na ke mujhe akela chor do..then why do you keep nagging me again and again?! JUST.LEAVE.ME.ALONE." He shouted on her and a scared Humera ran out of the room.


***


The next morning. In Khan Villa.

Asad sat on his usual place, with his newpaper while Najma served him breakfast. He looked up from his paper, "Tamatar?" Najma looked up, "Did Zoya have her breakfast?" He asked.

"I don't know Bhaijaan" She replied, pouting.

"What do you mean by you don't know?" He got up and frowned hard. Najma suddenly became scared of him. Dilshad kept a hand on his shoulder and calmed him down. "Najma, tum tou breakfast le ke uss ke room mein gayi thi na? Phir kya hua?" She asked in a calmer tone.

"Wo'Ammi mein ne unn se kaha ke breakfast kar len'par unhone keh dia ke wo baad mein kar lengi'tou mein tray wahin chor aayi" Najma replied meekly while Asad rubbed his temple.

Dilshad sighed and looked at Asad, who looked at her with a frown. She nodded at him, signaling him to go to her room. Asad sighed and went towards her room.


***


As he entered her room, he found her standing against the window, staring at nothing. He sighed as he saw the tray, still untouched. She seemed so lost in her thoughts that she didn't notice him.

"Zoya" He called her softly, but she didn't respond. He moved towards her and kept a hand on her shoulder. Zoya turned around to see Asad staring at her with so much affection that she felt she'll melt. Tears started to pour out of her eyes, and looked at him with longing. Asad couldn't handle her tears. He HATED tears'her tears. He wiped her tears with the back of his hand gently, and removed the locks of hair from her forehead. He lifted up her chin and nodded in a negative, telling her not to cry.

He held her hand and led her towards her bed and made her sit down. He came up with the tray and sat in front of her. He forwarded a morsel to her lips, which she ate silently. She looked at him, his eyes were full of concern for her, she had seen this is his eyes before too, but now it was more intense and mixed with another feeling, she couldn't fathom. One thing she couldn't get was: why was he behaving like this? As if'As if I was his most prized possession? She wondered. He looked up to see her staring at him, and soon got lost in those eyes which he loved the most about her.

Words weren't needed. Eyes were doing the talking, taking out the secrets hidden in their hearts.


***


I know you guys must be wondering what is happening here? But lemme tell you guys, the actual story hasn't been started yet. The plot will unfold gradually.

Ignore any kind of mistakes...and Leave your comments, please':)

-Annie

Edited by _Annie_ - 12 years ago

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