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Rabert and Mona darling making plans ...hmmm
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Hello people!!! Only an idiot wouldn't continue the story after the amazing comments that you guyz posted!!! And I'm no idiot. I'm sorry I couldn't PM y'all, but allah kasam, ill PM from next time.

I decided that each chapter will describe the on going situation through the eyes of one of the character. The last one was Ayaan's take, and this is Zoe's'.. hope ya like it!!

Chapter 2- Zoya

"You want me to do WHAT?" Zoya exclaimed. "Shhh... Mona Darling, keep your voice down. Do you want everyone in the house to know that I'm in here??" Ayaan said. "Sorry" whispered Zoya. "But on a serious note, you must be high if you think your plan is going to work. It is way too flawed. I'm pretty sure it will take mister Khan just about 5 minutes to see through this plot." "Arrey Mona" said Ayaan "Why to fear, When Ayaan is here? Trust me, I know bhai jaan. And I'm 250 percent sure that he won't find out. Give this plan a chance." he pleaded. "Ok" Zoya said "let's just say for a moment that this plan DOES work, and not for a second am I saying it will, but let's just ASSUME that it works, don't you think Mr.Khan will be hurt when he uncovers the truth??" "Mona, do you want bhai jaan or not?" Ayaan asked. "Of course I do!" was Zoya's immediate answer. And it was true. She wanted him. She loved him. But if it meant that she had to deceive him, it was not worth it "But the means we are using are wrong." "But--" Ayaan started, but a vibration in his pocket cut him off. "Just a minute" he told Zoya. "Hello?" he said into the phone. "Oh, Humeira begum? What happened?... Where am I?... Well, I'm with a friend. He wanted to talk to me about something important...yes i'll be home soon...Don't worry..Go to sleep...Khuda Hafiz" he said and put his phone back in his pocket and turned back. "So...Humeira haan??? That's your girl??" Zoya asked teasingly. "Jee Nahin." Ayaan replied, though Zoya thought that he was blushing a teeny-tiny bit. "She is just a friend." "Yeah right," said Zoya "A FRIEND who calls you up in the middle of the night to make sure you are fine and is awake waiting for you. I'm not DUMB Ayaan. I can read the signs." "No, it's not-----" Ayaan started, but was cut short by a knock on the door. "Zoya?" Phuphi called out. "Are you alright beta??" "Go, go. Quick!" Zoya whispered to Ayaan. To Phuphi, she said "Yes Phuphi I'm alright. Just a minute." She ran and opened the door a crack "What happened Phuphi?? Why are you not yet asleep?" "I heard some noise from your room, and I was worried. Is everything alright?" Phuphi asked her, the concern evident in her voice. "Of course Phuphi" Zoya said." I'm fine. Absolutely fine. I'm always-----" her voice trailed off. Because making his way towards her room was none other than HIM. And Zoya's knees felt weak. As they had started to feel nowadays, every time she saw him. "Is everything alright Ammi??" he asked, in his deep and silky voice. "Yes Asad." Dilshaad said. "I just heard something from Zoya's room and I came to check on her. But everything seems to be fine. Right Zoya??" "Huh? Ya Phuphi. I'm absolutely fine." She said. Or at least that's what she MEANT to say. But she was pretty sure what she had said had sounded something like "huh yppi imbsltfin." His presence did that to her. It made her incapable of forming whole meaningful sentences. "What?" Phuphi asked, placing her hand gently on Zoya's shoulder "Zoya, are you sure you're alright?" With great difficulty, Zoya tore her eyes away from Asad's and said "Yes Phuphi. I'm fine. Really. And the sound that you heard? It was probably just me. I was singing." Yes, she knew she sounded like a complete lunatic, but she couldn't tell them the truth, could she? "At this time of the night??" Asad asked her dubiously. "Yes Mr.Khan." she replied. "I was in the mood to sing, so I started singing." To Dilshaad she said "Sorry Phuphi. I didn't mean to wake you up. I didn't realize I was being so loud." "That's ok Zoya." Phuphi said "I'm just glad you're alright. But you should really get some sleep now. It's very late." "Ok Phuphi. Goodnight then." Zoya said. Phuphi gave her a smile and turned around and made her way towards her room. But Asad was still eyeing her skeptically. "Could he make out that she was lying??" Zoya thought. But before he could ask her anything, she hastily mumbled a goodnight and shut the door on his face. After making sure that her door AND windows were locked, she collapsed onto the bed. "Oh dear God!" She thought. "What a day!" She was completely exhausted. Her emotions had worked overtime today. Especially when Mr. Khan had told her that he was getting... Marr...marr...married. The thought itself was enough to trigger a fresh batch of tears. She was just about to drift off to sleep after all the crying, when her cell phone buzzed. "Who is messaging me at this time of the night?" she thought "maybe one of those good for nothing companies trying to sell their products. Hmmm... Maybe they could sell me a sharp knife to slit that Tanveer's throat." Encouraged by this thought, she picked up her phone and opened the message. It wasn't from The Good For Nothing Companies. It was from The Guy With Absolutely Crappy Plans, namely, Ayaan. It read:

"I know that to you, my plan sounds like bull. But take your time to think about it. You don't need to make your decision today. You can answer tomorrow."

Ayaan urf Rabart. ;)

She couldn't help but smile. The guy was so sure of his plan. But if it didn't work, she would lose her Jahapanah Six Packs forever. The thought made her shudder. "Oh come on Zoya," said a voice inside her head "it's not like he was ever yours to begin with."She lifted up her jeans a bit and looked at the bandaged area of her foot just above the ankle. She had been so sure a while ago. So sure that there had been something between them... So sure...

FLASHBACK

Zoya was just putting her away her iPad after a video call with her Aapi and Jiju when she heard a knock on the door. It was half past nine and most people in this household were asleep by this time. "Who could it be?" she thought She opened the door and found Najma outside. "What's up Tomato? Is everything alright" asked Zoya. "I don't know Zoe" Najma replied "bhai jaan just told me to call everyone to his room at 9 45. When I asked him what for, he wouldn't tell me. He was behaving very vague about it." "What are you up to Mr.Khan?" Zoya thought. To Najma, she said "Ok Tomato. I'll be there at 9:45 sharp" "Ok" Najma said, smiling. "I'll see you there. I have to go call Ammi also." She turned to leave when Zoya stopped her. "Najma," she said. Did you inform Tanveer?" "No. bhai jaan said that he'd inform her himself" said Najma. "Oh." Zoya's face fell. "Ok. I'll see you there then"

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Zoya made her way to Mr. Khan's room and was about o knock, when she noticed that his door was open. She entered the room and was surprised to see no one there. "Allah Miyan!" she thought. "weren't we supposed to be here at 9:45?" she glanced at the wall clock and was surprised. "What? Its 9:30?? But my room's clock showed the time as 9:30 when I finished my video call with..." she trailed off. "Oh! Now I remember! My clock is not working! It has been showing 9:30 since yesterday night. I should leave." She turned to leave when she heard footsteps. "Oh hell!" she thought "if Mr.Khan sees me her, he'll again accuse me of coming here to ruin his room. What should I do?!?!" She quickly opened the window, jumped through it and had barely hidden herself when the door opened. It wasn't Mr.Khan, it was Tanveer. As Zoya watched on, Tanveer upturned the pillows, lifted the bedspreads and looked underneath the bed. She was obviously searching for something. "But what?" she thought. Suddenly Tanveer got up, and bolted out of the room. Zoya looked around to see what had happened, and her breath caught in her throat, because coming out of the bathroom was none other than the guy who haunted her dreams (in a nice way of course) and made her insides melt. It was Asad Ahmed Khan. His hair was wet and he had on a white t-shirt over a pair of jeans that loosely hung at his waist. It made Zoya feel all woozy, because even in the dim light illuminating his room, she could make out the breadth of his strong shoulders, the vee where the first few buttons of his shirt fell open, revealing just about the best defined abs you have ever seen. She could also see the strong planes of his face and his lips... Now, she didn't know if she could say this about a guys lip, but they seemed like they would be very soft to kiss. She had always thought that MS Dhoni was the most handsome man in the world. And boy, was she wrong. Dhoni was NOT the most handsome man in the world. Asad Ahmed Khan was. And many a times, she had dreamt of running her hands on those heavenly abs. (yes, she dreamt of him. Very often). While she was lost in her thoughts, she hadn't realized that she had been inching forward. But when she DID realize, it was far too late. "Ouch!" she cried as she tripped over the windowsill and cut her leg, ripping her jeans in the process. She closed her eyes, dreading the hit, when she found herself engulfed in a pair of strong arms. "Asad." She thought. He was always there to catch her, whenever she would fall. He lifted her and placed her gently on the couch. "Are you OK?" he asked her, his voice full of concern. "Ya I'm---Ouch" Zoya started, but midway she clutched her leg. When she moved her hand, she saw blood. "Ya Allah!" said Asad "You're bleeding Zoya" then he ran to his drawer and got the first aid kit, while she just sat there, stunned. No, not only because he was taking care of her instead of shouting at her for barging in through the window, it was because he called her "Zoya". Not Ms. Farooqi, not Museebat. Just Zoya. He hadn't called her that since the day of the accident. In fact, he had hardly spoken to her since the accident. He was way too occupied with his 'Tannu'. Argh! How she hated it when he called her that. He never referred to ZOYA as Zoe or Zoey. In fact, she was pretty sure he hadn't even noticed that he'd let her name slip out now. But SHE noticed. And SHE felt great. A lot of people called her Zoya. But when he said it, it was different. It felt like the first rain of the season. Refreshing and revitalizing. And it made her immensely happy. "Ow" she winced in pain, as the antiseptic touched her wound. "I'm so sorry" Asad said and started blowing on her wound, while steadying her leg with his hand. His touch sent a current through her. And he noticed that. So he withdrew his hand and finished covering the wound. "Can you walk?" He asked her after dressing her wound. Zoya stood up. Her leg still felt a little sore, but she could manage to walk. She looked up at him and said "Yes. Thank You Asad." "Oops!" she thought, and looked at him. "Was he going to snap out of the Be Nice To Zoya spell now?" she thought. But when her eyes met his chocolate browns, she saw something else in them. Not the usual anger. Something else. Something like... Something she couldn't quite recognize."You are welcome. Zoya" he said. She was surprised. "Had he just called her Zoya again? And this time, intentionally?" She felt happier than words could describe. Then he did something even more unexpected. He leaned in, and kissed her, square on the lips. He continued kissing her. Softly, gently and she discovered that she was right. He did have really soft lips. When they finally came up for air, he cupped her cheeks and started to say "Zoya I---" Then there was a knock on the door, and they quickly pulled apart. It was Najma and Phuphi. "Oh, Zoya. You're already here." Said Phuphi. "That's good. Where's Tanveer, Asad?" she asked her son. "I'll go call her Ammi" Asad said and left the room, throwing one last glance at Zoya. The feeling of the kiss still lingered on her lips. She wanted to run to him, grab his shirt and shout "Zoya I...?? I what??? What were you about to say Asad??" but she couldn't do that. Or she wanted to just close her eyes and rewind the moment in her head again and again and again...But she couldn't do that either, because, if she was too quiet, Phuphi and Najma would suspect that something was up. So she went to them and acted like nothing had happened and kept cracking jokes and reciting shayaris. After a while, Asad entered, with Tanveer by his side. And he broke the news and her heart... HE WAS GETTING MARRIED... NOT TO HER...TO TANVEER.

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To say that she was hurt would have been the understatement of the year. Shattered was more like it. She tried to put on a brave face, but she couldn't stop the lone tear that escaped her eye. She went up and congratulated As-- Mr. Khan and Tanveer and also told Tanveer that she would help with the wedding arrangements, all the while she was breaking inside. "Phuphi, I just remembered," she said "I need to make an important call. So please, excuse me." And before anyone could reply, she said goodnight, with a big smile, that was fake of course and made her way to her own room, shut the door, and cried her eyes out.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Thinking about the whole issue made her cry again. And finally, she drifted off to sleep.

Precap: Zoya (on the phone) : ok Ayaan. I'm ready to try out your plan. Tell me, what do I have to do?


Sooo... how was it?? bad?? super bad??? plz comment!!! and i will pakka pakka send out PMz when i update the next chapter!!!


-Sharyn

Edited by stellababes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I LOVEEED IT! Please update soon! With all this tanveer rubbish drama, I am only satisfying my heart by reading fanfics... I can't wait for the next part 👏 Do pm me!
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Originally posted by: misha93

<font color="#cc0066" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I LOVEEED IT! Please update soon! With all this tanveer rubbish drama, I am only satisfying my heart by reading fanfics... I can't wait for the next part👏Do pm me!</font>



Thank ya!!! im glad ya liked it!!
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Originally posted by: misha93

<font color="#cc0066" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I LOVEEED IT! Please update soon! With all this tanveer rubbish drama, I am only satisfying my heart by reading fanfics... I can't wait for the next part👏Do pm me!</font>



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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres!

that was really really really really very mean of Asad! poor Zoe! how dare he toy with her emotions!

this update was really nnice!

1 request - i'm kinda done wid my quota of MUs so if you could avoid another MU b/w AsYa due to Ayaan's plans!!! pleaseee!
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So mean of Asad lol kissed her and wants to marry MSK pftt nice update btw, continue soon :)
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I guess... im gretful for a lenthy chapter BUT it still doesnt satisfy me .lol. I want more. Update sooon pls!
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Oh My! So Asad kissed her?? What the Smoking Peaches?! 😲😲😲
And there he goes and announces that he is gonna marry Tanveer? What the double blistering Peaches??? Is he insane?
I do have a notion of him up to something, or he wouldn't do such a thing without any reason or just the reason of enjoying something for the sake of it, before plunging himself into something else. Like forbidden desires and all that shit and then act all innocent and go back to what is planned for himself-- Grr...😡 Am I even making sense out here??🤔

Sheesh! *slapping my face and pulling my hand down slowly* I should've backspaced it, yet am keeping it here in my comment! Why? Well, because I want you to know what is going on my mind ya know, after reading the Up-i-date!! 😉

And Sharyn is such a cute name, girl!😳

Annie
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ASAD THAT MEANO!
LOOK WHAT HE DID TO OUR ZOYA BABY!! :(
Amazing part! :D I cant wait!

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