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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
interesting...

thanx

Originally posted by: HoneySweety
Fantastic continue dear

Thanx dear :)

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hey ...

Fab update !!!

Finally Zoya got to know who's the killer :/

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Fab update !!!
Finally Zoya got to know who's the killer :/

thanx dear :)

yup finally she learnt about her ammi's killer.

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

aley! Samjha karo yaar exams hain 🤢

will try to update today only and finish it up 😳

It's ok. 😳 Update whenever you get time😃

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Jaldi update kar varna tera khoon ho jaega! Kyaa yaar apni harkaton se baaj nae aayegi! Humesha cliff hanger par chod kar tadpati hai mujhko! Yeh galat baat hai!!! Mai na teri complaint teri mummi se karungi! Tu kitni kamini hai nd vaise bhi devil toh mai hun na toh devil ko tadpana sehat ke liye acha nae hai!

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: aditi061
Jaldi update kar varna tera khoon ho jaega! Kyaa yaar apni harkaton se baaj nae aayegi! Humesha cliff hanger par chod kar tadpati hai mujhko! Yeh galat baat hai!!! Mai na teri complaint teri mummi se karungi! Tu kitni kamini hai nd vaise bhi devil toh mai hun na toh devil ko tadpana sehat ke liye acha nae hai!

gussa kyon ho rahi hai meri maa!

liukh rahi hun update.

n cliffy meri puraani bimaari hai sholly! 😆

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Enjoy Reading guys!!!!

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Part 2 (b)

Zoya came out of trance and stopped the recording. She kept her mobile safely in her hand bag and went to help badi bi who was almost half dead. She took her to the hospital and called 'Raabart' whom she guess is related to the patient.

Just as she saw him she was shocked beyond limits but slowly accepted the game her destiny was playing with her. She made him watch the video and went home taking a vow to not leave that "Bit*h" who was responsible for every single thing.

Just as she reached home, Dilshaad pounced on her with questions including "Where was she?" "How could she leave without tell?" etc. etc.

Zoya just left for her room and made a copy of that video in her iPad. She went down and saw dilshaad sitting on the couch - gloomy. She went to her and gave Dilshaad her iPad stating this is something for her. As Dilshaad watched the video she was left shocked would surely be an understatement. Informing Dilshaad, zoya left for police station for seeking 'justice' for her Ammi's death.

On the other hand, at the hospital doctors were trying to save badi bi but it was as if she has stopped responding. Nothing was working and Ayaan was all tensed up. Zoya preffered to go to the hospital before going to police station. According to her if Ayaan wouldn't have been there, she would have never been able to find it out.

Never back she would have shared that dance with Asad. Never she would have been so jealous of Tanveer-Asad relation. Never she would feel heartbroken. Never she would have decided to leave for NY again. And now she have to cancel it all.

Asad had taken his complaint back seeing the video and filed a case against Razia. Siddique was not at all mentioned in the video and thus he was better to say at a safer side.

As Zoya reached the hospital she saw a broken Ayaan. She kept a hand on his shoulder as he cried down in her lap (Maarna mat. I can't have included Humeira or anyone as no one still knew it aur Zoya ke dil mein toh sirf ek hi hai na. The great Jahanpana Six Packs 😎 )

Soon Ayaan's and Zoya's prayers were offered as badi bi started to respond. Ayaan's happiness had no bound. zoya just smiled half-heartedly seeing him and as she observed how he ran in the room as the doctors allowed them to meet badi bi. "Atleast someone is happy." thought zoya having a sigh as she went to the police station.

"Officer?" asked zoya.

"Yes?" the inspector replied.

"Ji wo mujhe case file karna tha." spoke out zoya. Just the very next moment Asad and a few officers walked in with razia captured.

Zoya turned back as she heard razia saying "Chod do mujhe maine kuch nahi kiya" with some crocodile's tears.

"Uh, leave it officer I guess that person is already trapped." Spoke out zoya eyeing Razia as she went to her.

"Merri Ammi ke saath jo tume kiya na uska badla ab main lungi Mrs Razia Siddique!!!!"

Zoya spat venom and left the police station with a shocked asad as she didn't even gave him a look.

Now he did understand how much he had pushed her away from him.!

That was just a start. A start of the realizations of feeling and of the bitterest truths.

And their life, there was much to happen!

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Pakaane ke liye khed hai. I know im not good in these stuffs!

I better be back to either emotional or lovey-dovey stuffs! 😆

So this was the last part.

Hope you liked it :)

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malini

@malini96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

wow it was an fantastic update...

plz plz continue soon.and do send me a pm

now i am eager to know how he will pacify his zoya against tanveer

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: malini1996
wow it was an fantastic update...
plz plz continue soon.and do send me a pm
now i am eager to know how he will pacify his zoya against tanveer

thanx dear.

but this was the last part of this OS.

I may continue it but only after my exams 😳