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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mycba
Nice one

thanx

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-
Kon amazing one shot. loved it

👍🏼

thanx yaari 🤗

Originally posted by: mallik4ever
do continue. Its nice.

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: eshasrk
Please continue...this seems like a cliffhanger 😭
Great writing 👏

Thanx dear will do update today

Originally posted by: kajenvirman
really well written
please PM me for the next part

thanx :)

Originally posted by: titli4love
So sad for zoya...you've written so nicely from zoya's perceptive..I loved it.👍🏼 plz PM me when you'll update...waiting

Thanx :)

will surely inform you :)

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
Her pain is eating me alive. You've portrayed her emotions so well. Please update soon.

Thanx dear :)

will update today

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: grad2011
it was awesome i really liked it plzz continue soon!!!!

Thanx dear :)

Originally posted by: e_enigma
That was nice!
I would love to read the next part!
Please PM me when you continue?

Pretty please!?! :D

Thanx dear.

will do inform you :)

Originally posted by: darkangel93
pls continue!! and pm me when u do!!! loved it!!!

Thanx dear :)

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
amazing...

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
That was fantastic !!!

Plzzz update soon :)

Thanx :)

Originally posted by: malini1996
DO CONTINUE SOON DEAR...
THE UPDATE WAS AWESOME AND ADD ME TO UE PM LIST

Thanx dear. Will update today :)

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY
amazing❤️❤️..u described very emotion soo beautifully👍🏼...do continue soon😃

Thanx u soo much dear :)

wil update today 😳

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

P.s. Sorry for the delay. 😳

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Part 2

Asad was driving like a minac, looking for Zoya but he found her nowhere. The next moment he received a call stating she is back. Rage empowered him.

First she left without informing.

Then she came back and didn't uttered a word to anyone.

This was enough for him to be angry on her. He do cared for her. If not, he would never had been driving like a minac - searching for her. But will he accept it? NO! A big NO! He will never accept that he loves her, he cared for her. Why? Just because she was Zoya and his Damn ego will never let him confess his feelings to her.!

And this was the truth. He won't do that even if it will be the end of the world and that too all because of his damn ego!

As he reached back he stormed in his room while the three women swallowed.

o0o

She had her flight at the night and she thought of taking a walk in the garden near by.

She was walking in the lonely location of the park. People hardly comes over there and she was just walking like a zombie. No emotions nothing.

She stopped in her tracks as she heard a name being called followed by a bunch of laughter.

"Zainaab"

She ignored it thinking it wasn't what she heard. But then when she was just gonna take a step forward she froze hearing the name which was being called by a woman.

"Zainaab Faarukhi!"

Tears built up in her eyes as she listened to her mother's name after ages from someone else mouth. But little did she knew, that mouth was of non other the person who was responsible for her being like this.

"Kya sunna chaahti hain aap badi bi?" spoke out Razia as zoya came out of trance and started to make a video.

"Sach? Yehi jaanna chaahti ho na tum budhiya ki us raat kya hua tha? Kaise aapka pyaara sa beta in sab jhamele mein phas gaya? yehi na ki kaise Rashid Ahemed Khan ko is Razia ne apne changul mein phasa liye?" she spoke out giving a evil laugh.

"Waise toh maine aapko aadhi baat bata hi di thi. Lekin chaliye sirf aapke liye, main aapko phirse se sab bata deti hun." She became serious.

"Bees (20) saal pehle ki baat hai jab mujhe pata chala tha ki inki dusri shaadi hui thi. Main us aaurat ke paas gayi thi 'Zainaab' ke paas... ye bolne ke liye ki mere raaste se hat jaaye... mere se mere shauhar ko cheenne ki bhul na kare... par wo maani? Nahi. Wo apni baat par adi rahi aur phir kya hona tha? Maine uske ghar mein aag laga di.!!!"

Zoya gasped listening to it.

"Par wo aur uski beti bach nikli. Aur us kambakt me apni beti ko New York bhej diya. Khair chodo mujhe usse kya. Khud yahan rahi wo aur apne shauhar ko sab sach bata diya lekin unhone uska saath nahi diya. Jaanti hain kyon? Kyonki wo uske saath sirf paison ke liye the! Chod diya use unhone. Hamesha hamesha ke liye. Aur phir, teen saal baad maine use gudiya factory mein bulaaya. Aur pata hai phir kya hua badi bi? nahi? Main bataati hun na. Phir maine use maar diya. Seedha seene mein maara tha aur bechaari, ladi bhi nahi zinda rehne ke liye. Seedha appne abbu ke paas chali gayi aur humn Rashid miyan se us factory mein aag lagva di! Aur phir hona kya tha, humne saara inzaam (blame) Rashid miyan pe laga diya aur unhe apne haath ki katputli bana diya!" and then, she broke out into the fists of laughter and the very next moment there was a sound of gun shot and badi bee was lying on the ground

-- still to be edited. going to study! 😳 --

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago