#1 AsYa FF: Time to go back (COMPLETED)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Hey , dear

I just read this fiction today and I must say I really enjoyed reading this. I m waiting for the further update and see there confession. Do add me and pm me whenever you update.

~Dee~

m glad u lykd it! Ll update soon n ll pm u! 😊

Luv Ani <3

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Finally i updated! Sorry ppl i was busy studing for my CA entrance! Ye CPT meri jaan lelega!
Phir bhi muje ye likhna tha!
So likha!
Hoe you ppl lyk it!

Both Asad and Zoya are in search of each other but are unable to find each other.

They end up bumping in the hall where Karan, Najma and Dilshad are already seated.

Karan pointed to Najma that ASYA are here and her mom too.

Najma: Koi nai chodo! Ek na ek din toh ammi ko batana hi tha bhaijaan ko. Waise bhi apne dil ki baat vo kahaan bata pate hai agar ammi khud sun leti hai toh bhaijaan ki madat hi hui na!
Waise bhi bahaana dhudhna,bhejna ka ,usse plan karna ,execute karna ..bada lamba hai aur mere bhai ki love confession mai miss nai karna chahti.
Aami ko waise bhi Zoya bahut pasand hai! So chill!

Karan: Thak gayi?

Najma: Pucho mat!

Karan: chalo tamasha dekhte hai!

Zoya: Aaaoowww! Mr khan aap dekhke nai chal sakte? Allah ne aapko do moti moti medak jaisi aakhein di hai isstamaal kiya kijiye!

Asad: Aisi hi baat hai toh kya aap dekhke nai chal sakti thi? Aakhein toh allah ne aapko bhi di hai haina?

Zoya: Aapse behaas karna bekaar hai!

Asad: Maine invite kiya kya aapko mujse behaas karne ke liye?

Zoya: Agghh! Anyways mai aapse kuch aur baat karne aayi thi!

Asad: Mai bhi!

Zoya: Pehle mai!

Asad: Kyu? Pehle muje aapne sawaal ka jawab chahiye!

Zoya: Mai pehle boli!

Asad: Par aapne koi sawaal ab tak pucha hi nai miss farooki!

Zoya: Toh kya aap iss baat ka fayda uthayege?

Asad: Kya keh rai hai aap? Aise bachhon jaisi baat kar rai hai aap!

And the fight on who says first goes on...

Dilsahad was wondering what was happening!

Meanwhile Najma and Karan were eagarly waiting was NOT SO ON THE TOPIC ASYA TO GET TO THE POINT OF THE DISSCUSSION!

Najma: *facepalm*
Muje ye pridict kar lena chahiye tha!

Karan: ye dono point pe aa kyun nai rahe hai yaar. Bane banaye plan pe pani pherna koi innse sikhe!

Najma: haan haan! Zaroor ayenge point pe jab hum inka nikaah karva chuke honge! Nai nai muje toh lagta hai jab bhai ko pucha jayega ki qubool hai tab vo Zoya ko i luv u bolenge!

Karan: Chalo iss poore situation mein kuch toh interesting hai!

Dilahad: Kya baat ho rai hai?

Najma: Ye log pehle aap pehle aap se bahar toh aaye phir pata chalega nah!

Dilshad: Sahi hai!

While ASYA were still in their arguement, Asad bowed down and Zoya to be first!

Asad: Toh kahiye!

Zoya: Aap tamatar se kya baat kar rahe the?

Asad: Konsi baat?

Zoya: Muje banaye mat maine sab suna hai!
(Karan had told Zoya not to tell he said remeber?:-p)

Asad: Kya paata hai aapko miss farooki?

Zoya: *Finally getting akward*
Wahi baat!

Asad: konsi baat?

Zoya: Wahi jo aap tamatar se keh rahe the!

Karan and Najma together:
*almost jumping*
FINALLY

Asad: Meri behaan hai voh! Mai usse jo bhi baat karun aapko kyun batau?

Zoya: ALLAH MIYYA WHATS WRONG WITH YOU MR.KHAN! Kyunki Mr.Khan ye baat aapko muje baatni chahiye!

Asad: Aap kya keh rai hai aap hi jaanti hai!

Zoya: O REALLY MR KHAN?

Asad: YES! MISS FAROOKI!

Zoya: Aapne tamatar se ye nai kaha tha ki..

Asad: Vo sab chodiye! Voh meri aur meri behan ki baat hai! Aap batayiye aap kal raat Karan se kya baat kar rai thi?

Zoya: SIMILARLY MR KHAN mai kyun batau kya baat kar rai thi mai APNE BEST FREIND SE!

Asad: Kya aap seedhe seedhe baat nai kar sakti!

Zoya: Matlab kya hai aapko mai baatein ghumati hoon!?

Asad: sahi kaha! Jo baat jise baata ni chahiye usse hi batani chahiye miss farooki kisi teesre ko kyun involve karna!?

Zoya: WHAT ARE YOU SAYING MR KHAN? YAHI BAAT AAPPE BHI PURI TARAH APPLY KARTI HAI!

Asad: CHILLAYIYE MAT MISS FAROOKI!

Zoya: AAP BHI CHILLAYI RAHE HAI MR KHAN!

Asad: KYUNKI AAP CHILLA RAI HAI!

Zoya: Whatever! Calm down zoya!
Yaa... Toh hum kahaan the?
Aap mujse kuch kehna nai chahte jo aapne Najma se kaha!

Asad: Maine tamatar se aisi koi baat nai ki jo aapko batani zaaroori ho!

Zoya: Ki hai! Mai jaanti hoon!

Asad: Soch ke bataye Miss farooki aapne Karan koi aisi baat nai ki jo aapko muje batani chahiye?

Zoya: Aapko kya lagta hai meri puri duniya aapke upar hi kayam hai kya?
Aap kyun bol nai dete hi aap mujse...
*almost in tears*

Asad: *finally understanding where the conversation was going*
Kya Zoya?

Asad looked towards Najma and both Najma & Karan turned around.

Asad understood all of the plan.
He sighed! These people have proposely created such a situation where he or Zoya would definately make a blunder!
Well right now Zoya would definately.
He had to do something!
These feelings were too precious to come out like this.
He metally decided he would talk to Zoya about this matter but not loke this.
But he wondered what to do now these both idiots had created a situation difficult to come out.

Zoya was staring at him with a blank face he wondered why?

Oh right! She was continuously speaking and he was in his own world!

Asad: Zoya..

Zoya: Aapne suna bhi maine kya kaha?

Asad: Ummm... Haan...!

Zoya: Meri last sentence kya thi Mr. Khan?

Asad: Wohhh..Mai...Actually..!
Muje pata hai..!

Zoya: Ji! Kahiye na mai sunn rai hoon!

Asad: Ummm.. Vo mai... Sorry!

Zoya: Pata tha muje! Mai aapke liye kuch nai mayne hi nai rakhti! Pata nai kyun Karan ki baat mein aa gai aur soch liya ki aapp...

Asad: Zoya! Aisa nai hai!

Zoya: *extremely angry*
Toh kahiye na!
Kahiye na!

Asad: Kya?

Zoya: *lost all her patience and got hold of his collar*
THAT YOU LOVE ME GOD DAMMIT!
YOU FOOL!
SORRY CORRECTION, YOU EMOTIONAL FOOL!
U COWARD!
I WAS RIGHT HELL RIGHT AAP EMOTIONALLY CHALLENGED HO AUR HAMESHA RAHOGE!

Asad did not understand hor to react to this now!

Karan and Najma were confused to be happy or not! Zoya has almost confessed from his side not hers that to by catching him by collar! God save Zoya!

Dilshaad was in a utter shock! She was about to speak when Najma kept hand on her shoulder signalling her that it was THEIR moment!

Asad: *almost in tears*
Aapko kya farak padta hai Zoya? Kyun kar rai ho aisa?

Zoya: *in tears*
KYUNKI MAI BHI AAPSE PYAAR KARTI HOON!
SUCH A FOOL I AM TO FALL FOR A PERSON WHO CANNOT EVEN TELL ME THAT HE LOVES ME!
Let it be you are not worth it Mr. Khan! Let it be!

With that Zoya ran towards her room realizing the blunder she made in the heat of the moment!

Asad widened his eyes hearing such a unique confession from his lady love! He now knew she loved him but left him in a situation where he was just speechless!
***

I fullfilled my promise! This was kind of a ASYALICIOUS update! 😳 mind it😆

I wnted to make it longer but had no time! Maine 10 din se break break karke isse likha hai! So finally i thought jo bhi hai i posted it!

I luv u guys for all the appreciation!
Your one line comments also mean a lot to me! Lyk seriously ok!

*Gettin out of sentiments*
Pleej mast comments dena kaisa laga partly confession🤣

Pyaare se comments pleej!

Guys plz check the UPDATED ALPHABETICALLY PM LIST ON PG 18! Check out ur names in it!

Buddy me for pms n also leave a one line comment dat u wnt a PM

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Luv Ani <3

Edited by aniiee - 11 years ago