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NOTE:
If u wnt pm plz can u leave a one line comment plz! Coz m gettin confused whom to PM n whom to not. I gt mre requests dan d conments well nt i dunno req aivayi kissi ne bheji yaa phir PM ke liye! Accept toh saari kar li! Par i ll PM only those jiski comment hai kyunki baaki mereko yaad nai hoga
Sry 4 this
But m new to d writing n PMing system!
Well agar koi is PM thing ke liye easy way yaa suggestion ho toh plz baata dena! M baccha na hlp me out!
Aur comments ke dher saara pyaar do!
End of d day comments maang hi li ghamandi hoon nah!


N abt d update aaj kal mein karti hoon

Hope u all understand
Ani <3




BREAKFAST TABLE:


Asad: kya najma itna purana gaana gaa rai hoo. Muje toh laga tha tume naye naye gaane zyaada acche lagte hai!

Najma: haan bhaijaan! Acche toh naye bhi lagte hai! Par kch purane gaano ki baat hi kch aur hai puri tarah situation bata dete hai 🤣

Asad: kya matlab hai tumhara?
*Innocent face*😆

Najma: ab aap nai samjenge toh koun samjega bhaijaan? *Dramatic way*😆

Dilshad: tum dono kabse kya bole jaa rhe ho? Muje bhi toh samjao! *All confused*😆 aur najma kya ulti seedhi baat kar rai ho mudde pe kyun nai aati kya kehna chahti ho asad se?

Najma: vo...Ammi baat kch aisi hai ki..

Asad cuts najma

Asad: kch nai! Aaj kal zyaada padhti hai na issliye thoda bhoot sawar ho gya hai! Choodo isse!

Zoya: waise bhi phoofi jahapaanah oops mr.khan se aaj tak koi seedhe muh baat kar paaya hai bhala? Kaccha nai chaba jayenge jo unke rule tode? Issliye toh najma shayad baat ghuma rai hai! Hai na najma! 😆

Najma: ummm... Vo... Haan...

Asad cut najma

Asad: aap bada janti hai mujse kaise baat ki jaa sakti hai? *all flirty*

Zoya: (thinking)
Ye aise kyun baat kar rahe hai? Aur vo bhi muj se! Chodo muje kya! Innke muh nai lagna chahiye kabhi gud jitne meethe hote toh kabhi karele jitne kadve!

Zoya: aapke har saawal ka jawab dena mai zaaroori nai samjti! Okaay mr.khan
*angry*

Asad: toh phir aap meri najma ke beech boli hi kyun agar mujse baat nai karni thi?

Zoya: mera muh bolna ho toh bolu nai bol na ho toh na bolu! Aapko kya? Hum aapke hai kaun *dramatically*

Najma: ab toh bata hi do bhaijaan! *grin*

Asad: *gives one of his ganda wala looks* 🤣

Dilshad: *confused* kya baat kar rahe ho chup chap khana khao!

Zoya: phoofi muje kch kehna tha!

Dilshad: bolo na zoya!

Zoya: vo baat ye hai ki mai 4 din mein jaa rai hoon na toh jeeju ne meri ticket
Mere friend karan ke saath li hai kyunki vo filhaal mumbai mein hai! Toh hum dono saath chale jaayenge! Kal raatko vo bhopal aa raha hai!

Asad: *SHOCKED*

Najma: (thinking)
ab ye kuan naya character aa gya bhaijaan ki love story mein? Ek toh mushkil se ek ladki pasand aayi hai! Muje toh laga tha sNyaas hi le lenge!
Kch toh karna padega dekhna padega ki zoya ke dil mein kya hai!

Dilshad: maza aayega hum aapke dost se milenge dher saari baatein karenge! Aur
Inn teen dino mein unse aap new york mein karti thi kya nai sab pataa laga lenge!

Zoya: nai phoofi vo aapne ek dost ke ghar rukne wala hai! Par milne zaaroor aayega!

Dilshad: aisa kyun kiye beta? Vo reh sakta tha yahaan!

Zoya: phoofi ussne pehle se decide kiya hua tha! Kissi le plans kharab thodi nah karne chahiye!

Dilshad: Vo tumhare saath hai new york mein?

Zoya: haan pichle 8 saalo se hum best friends hai! Mai usse kal kitne months ke baad milne wali hoon! Maza ayega!

Dilshad: haan kch dost hote hi aise hain!

Dilshad leaves n takes najma with her for some work.
Asad: *still in shock*
par ye karan hai kaun?

Zoya: abhi toh kaha dost hai nai nai mera sabse aacha dost hai! Waise aapko bada interest hai meri life mein!

Zoya leaves and goes to her bedroom.

Asad: (thinking)
Abhi toh sab thik karne ke baare mein soch raha tha aur ab ye konsa naya kaata ghus gaya! Pata lagana padega!

He also leaves.



HALL


Asad was doing his some work when zoya cme and started watching TV!
Asad: (thinking)
Yahi sahi mauka hai puch ne ka!

Asad: Aap kya dekh rai hai?

Zoya: Itni si umar mein aapki eyes kamzor ho gayi hai kya?
Criket dekh rai hoon

Asad: Waise vo karan aapka sirf dost hai yaaa...

Zoya: Aap aise kaise kisi bhi ladki ko puch sakte hai? aapki soch aisi kaisi hai ki ek ladka ladki dost nai ho sakte! Chiii! Whatever mai aapko explain karna zaaroori bhi nai samjti
Aapki aur tanveer ki dosti ho sakti hai!
Par meri aur karan ki nai just because mai new york se hoon!? Aap aisa kaise soch sakte hai mr. Khan?

Asad: Aisi baat nai hai... Vo mai sirf puch raha tha?!

Zoya: Vo mai sirf kya mr. Khan..? Waise toh aapko bilkul frak nai padta ki mai kahaan hoon kaisi hoon phir acchanak aap meri personal life baare mein zyyaada sawaal nai puch rahe vo muje apni personal life mein dhakhal na dene ko kehke?

Asad: Aap muje galat samaj rai hai!

Zoya: sammaj toh mai aapko kabhi nai sakti! Aapka hai hi weird!

Zoya left

Asad: Naraaz bhi ho gayi aur kuch pata bhi nai chala! *sigh*

Najma: Mai koi maadat karu? *grinning*

Asad: nai kch nai.. Muje kaam hai mai aapne kamre mein jaa raha hoon!

Najma: kab tak mujse chupaoge! Aapke muh se ugwaya toh mera naam najma nai!


ASAD'S ROOM

Asad: Haad hai koi bhi aise hi aake mujse meri zoya chin nai sakta! Kal aayega tab waise bhi sab paata chal jayega! Kahaan jaaogi zoya aana toh yahin padega! Akhir asad ahmed khan jo chaahta hai isse hamesha milta hai!
*grining*
Aane do jisse aana hai mai dekhta hoon kaun hai!


ZOYA'S ROOM

Zoya: allah miyya whats wrong with mr.khan kyun itne sawaal kyun itna care dikha rahe hai?
Muje kch inka samaaj hi nai aata. Choodo unke baare mein itna sochungi toh solution nai par sar dard zaaroor ho jayega!
Mere paas 4 din hai yahaan ka maza lena chahiye! Mai najma se kehti hoon muje traditionals aur yahaan ki specialities ki thodi si shoping karni hai!
Haan yahi best time pass hai!
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Baas! Mai isse aur lamba karne wali thi parphir muje meri pyaari si xam yaad aa gayi! I knw ye update thoda dumb+crap hai par koi nai tum sab bade aache ho definately jhel loge 🤣


Do see the note on pg 12 ! Plzz!

Aue haan comments dil khol kar karo! Aapka hi fayda hai aap newbie se groupbie yaa groupie se seniour yaa senior se goldie yaa goldies se dalzler ab isse aage muje nai aata par ye sab bann sakte hoo sirf inn comments ke badolat!
So keep liking n commenting!
Aacha lagta hai!

Aur haan shaili pura update maine without shortcuts likha hai sirf tere liye! Warna tu toh janti hi hai mai kitni aallsi hoon 🤣


Buddy me for pms n also leave a one line comment dat u wnt a PM!
Ani <3
Edited by aniiee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
hey just read ur parts...its awsum plz add me n pm me plzz n all the v best for ur exm hope u get really good grades
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
nyc update and plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Mind blowing swthrt. Suprb... I mean its realy funny. Do updt soon nd yeah apke woh pyari wali xm keliye all de best
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Awesum part annie
ab to bol do jahapana
cont soon
pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad miyah bol dein apni dil ki baat, iss se pehle karan app ki love story ki vaat laga de. 😆
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Asad going all jealous...nice
waiting for Karan
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Heya ppl,
Hpe all received d pms coz i did it in a really confising way! I hpe i was successfull! I hav i guess sent pms to evry1 who commented! Let me knw if i missed ny1!
Ani
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
I loved how curious Asad was about Karan !! Can't wait for Karan's entry !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
please pm me! 😃

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