ASYA SS: The light of my life pt3 pg 12 21st March

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KBfanNo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Thanks for posting this.. Even i felt the same after seeing her tears.. Seriously its very difficult to see the love of ur life with someone else.

I wish this track brings them very close...

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pkaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow!! I liked thiu OS very much

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Jahapana6packs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Can it please please please be exactly like this in the show? Ahhh this is love and i would be so happy to see something like this! amazing work do write moree :)

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Parneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

It was a really nice n well written os :)

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suchishah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

That w as fantastic...it made me cry for ur initials ...,

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samko

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

i was crying while reading

continue soon

n can u please pm me the next part link

Edited by samko - 12 years ago

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Nim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

this was just awesome! i request you to plz cont it to a second part too. u kno da recent epi of QH has set my mood all upset and broken my heart. i hope u can wonderful writers can give us some good things where v can smile a bit seeing AsYa together for i think dats not happenning soon in QH.

love,

Nimra.

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Hey ...

It was beautiful :-)

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saina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Part 2

When they were nearly finished with dinner Asad said "umm.. tamatar can you please come to my room after dinner? I need your help with something". But Tanveer poked her nose in before najma could reply by saying "What do you need help with Jammy? I'll do it for you". Najma's face fell when she saw tanveer trying to grab all of her bhaijaan's attention again and remained quiet but Asad who was beginning to feel irritated with tanveer's interference in everything said in a serious voice "no thank you tanveer! It's something very personal and important that only najma can help me with. Tamatar please come with me when you are done". Najma flashed her bhaijaan a beautiful smile and followed him to his room. Zoya was feeling more and more confused watching the new developments since she thought that Mr Khan liked tanveer and thought of her as the perfect girl for him. Zoya just sighed and said to Dilshaad who had a knowing smile on her face "I swear your son's mood swings are worst than pregnant women phuppi! I'm sure unhein khud nahi pata ke woh kya chahte hai". Dilshaad's smile widened and she said affectionately "I think he finally knows that what his heart wants is what's best for him zoya". Zoya just shrugged not understanding her phuppi's coded language and tanveer fumed seeing Asad brush her off again and zoya not being affected by her presence anymore. All her hard work was going down the drain and it was like she (tanveer) did not exist and did not matter to them anymore.

Asad closed the door behind najma making sure nobody hears their conversation and gave her his credit card and said "yeh lo tamatar.. please take zoya shopping with you tomorrow and you pay for everything you both like with this.. jitni chahe shopping karna and don't let zoya pay for anything.. Zoya is feeling upset and I want you to try and cheer her up" Najma was surprised hearing this and said "Lekin bhaijaan zoya to dinning table par khush lag rahi thi" "woh bohot dukhi hai tamatar and she is hiding her pain from everyone as usual. She is feeling like she is just a guest and is intruding in our family time". "Kya? zoya ko aisa lagta hai bhaijaan? Lekin she is not a stranger bhaijaan.. woh to humari family ka ek hissa hai na? Phir unhein aisa kyun lagta hai?" najma asked in a tear filled voice. Asad hugged najma and said "ro mat tamatar.. tanveer has been reminding zoya that she (zoya) is a guest since she came here and to some extent even I'm responsible to make zoya feel insecure since I never paid attention to what tanveer has been saying to zoya" Najma was shocked to hear this and said "Ya Allah! I know tanveer is your close friend bhaijaan lekin unhein zoya ko hurt karne ka koi haq nahi hai.. Now I understand why zoya has been so quiet lately. Anyways I'm going to stay with zoya 24/7 now and I'm not going to let anyone hurt her like this again. She needs to be reminded ke woh hamari family ka kitna aham hissa hai". Asad smiled seeing his tamatar so fiercely protective of his zoya and said "I knew I could trust you with this tamatar. Aur haan I've arranged for two bodyguards to accompany you girls tomorrow. Tum toh jaanti ho ke zoya is a problem magnet that's why I want to keep you both safe". Najma gave a mischievous smile and said "Aap hum dono ko safe rakhna chahte hain ya phir sirf zoya ko?" Asad turned red and said "Tamatar!" Najma laughed and left the room wishing her bhaijaan sweet dreams.

Zoya and Najma were helping Dilshaad in the kitchen the next morning when they saw Tanveer coming out of Asad's room with his laptop. "Aap Mr khan ke laptop ke saath kya kar rahi hai tanveer? He will be upset when he knows you've touched his laptop without his permission. Agar aap chahe to mera Ipad used kar sakti hain". Tanveer gave zoya an irritated look and said "No thank you zoya I'm going to use the laptop itself aur waise bhi I don't need permission to go in Jammy's room and use his stuff but I guess you won't understand this.. aap is ghar mein mehmaan jo hain". Dilshaad who felt upset hearing all this said while giving zoya a side hug "zoya iss ghar ki mehmaan nahi hai tanveer! She is an important part of my family.. Don't ever call her a guest again please" Zoya felt emotional hearing this and hugged Dilshaad with tear filled eyes. Najma joined in the hug too and said "ammi is right zoya and nobody has the right to make you feel like a stranger in your own house. Let's go out now if you are ready.. ammi we'll eat something from outside itself". Dilshaad let them go knowing that zoya won't be able to eat properly in tanveer's presence "theek hai but make sure you both eat something" she said with a sweet smile. Zoya and Najma hugged Dilshaad and went for their girls day out.

After spending the whole day spending Asad's hard earned money they came home at 7 in the evening and saw a fuming Asad shouting for his Ammi. Dilshaad came running hearing Asad's angry voice and asked "Kya hua asad? Why are you shouting like this?" "Did someone touch my laptop without my knowledge ammi?" he asked in an angry voice. Tanveer who had come running hearing Asad shouting said with a smile on her face "haan Asad.. I used your laptop when you were in the bathroom this morning as I needed to check my email". Asad looked at her with anger and asked with gritted teeth "kis se pooch ke? Who gave you permission to touch my laptop? Didn't anyone stop you as they all know that nobody touches my laptop? If you would have asked I would have told you to used zoya's Ipad instead tanveer!" Seeing Asad so angry Dilshaad asked "why are you so angry Asad? What happened?" Asad tried to control his anger and said "The very important project I stayed up all night to finish was deleted and I nearly lost the contract ammi! We've been given only till tomorrow morning to retrieve the data!Aur ammi aap ne isse roka kyun nahi?"

"Zoya tried to stop her when she saw tanveer coming out of your room with the laptop asad and even offered her Ipad lekin tanveer did not listen to her" Dilshaad said. Asad fumed even more hearing this and just overturned the glass centre table in the living room which shattered to pieces. All the ladies took a step back seeing asad's rage except for zoya who ran to him and held his arm to calm him down and said "please calm down Mr Khan.. Show me the laptop and I'll see if the data can be retrieved but you have to calm down ok? You are scarring phuppi and najma" Asad nodded hearing this and took a deep breath and calmed down. Zoya gave him a bright smile seeing him listening to her and said "aap pehle fresh hojayier and I'll look into it in the meantime ok?" Asad gave her a small smile and said "ok" and went to his room without sparing a glance at anyone else.

Zoya hugged phuppi and najma and said with a reassuring smile "Tamaatar will you please clean this mess and phuppi aap Mr Khan ke liye coffee bana dijiyer while I check the data". The three ladies got to work and tanveer went to her room knowing that Asad will kill her if she stays in front of him.

The living room was clean and his coffee was ready by the time he came out. Asad just went and sat quietly next to zoya who gave him a bright smile and said "The data can be retrieved Mr Khan.. It will take all night but don't worry it will be ready by tomorrow morning. Aap bas coffee pijiyer aur apna mood theek kijiyer." Asad sighed and said while taking the coffee from his ammi "thank you so much zoya and I'm sorry for the outburst ammi. I should not have spoken like that to our guest". Dilshaad smiled and said "It's ok beta but you should really learn to control your temper.. you really scared us today asad" "haan bhaijaan.. thank God zoya was here nahi to pata nahi kya hojata" Najma said with tears in her eyes. Asad hugged his ammi and najma feeling really bad for scaring them and a second later Zoya joined the group hug and said "kuch nahi hoga tamatar! main hoon na" Asad thanked Allah in his heart for sending zoya in is life to complete his family.

Tanveer came out of her room only when she was called for dinner and saw Asad sitting next to zoya who was working on his laptop. She just went and took her seat quietly at the dinning table. Dilshaad called Asad and zoya for dinner but they said they would eat later. Dilshaad sighed and said "tum dono bhi na bohot ziddi ho! theek hai aaj main tum dono ko apne haathon se khilaoungi". She then told tanveer and najma to bring their plates to the living room so that they can all eat together. Asad stiffened when tanveer sat on the couch opposite him and zoya but zoya held his arm and signaled him to calm down which was not missed by tanveer who was hating zoya more and more by the minute.

Instead of serving her food in a separate plate najma asked dilshaad to feed her as well and Dilshaad, Asad, Zoya and Najma ended up having their dinner from the same plate while tanveer looked on from the other couch.

Oh my god! I feel so horrible for witting the last line.. I'm not supposed to feel so much dislike for tanveer, she is just a fictional character! Hope you guys like it.. Please like and comment and thank you so much for liking the first part:)

Edited by saina01 - 12 years ago