Poker Face-AsYa SS (16+) Updated! Chapter 5 11/4

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

OMG i m so flattered by zoya's boldness

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marialuvsarshi

@marialuvsarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

lovely work please pm me when you update!

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RMamsa

@RMamsa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

I don't know whether to beg you for a quick update or request you to stop writing!

Don't you know you are not suppose to play with hormonal fan girls like that!!!

Lol!

Del that was a Fantastic update! The chemistry you created was electrifying & your quick witted writing coupled with GRAPHICCC descriptions make me realize I should not be reading your work in public!

The guy across from me has a bemused look - I think he is trying to figure out why 'I' am blushing at my laptop & smiling profusely!

I'll make sure I don't fall asleep unless I'm all by myself after reading this! 😉

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

How the hell are these two going to keep their hands off each other,I really cnt see and I sure as hell dnt want them to even try..😆 come on babay...lets get some raunchy,racy,plane action..just everything that fantasy's are made of!

Who would be after Zoya and why?Interesting and very intriguing.Am loving the greyness of the whole concept/plot,the level of suspence,thrill and erotica are all very gripping indeed!

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: RMamsa
I don't know whether to beg you for a quick update or request you to stop writing!
Don't you know you are not suppose to play with hormonal fan girls like that!!!

Lol!

Del that was a Fantastic update! The chemistry you created was electrifying & your quick witted writing coupled with GRAPHICCC descriptions make me realize I should not be reading your work in public!

The guy across from me has a bemused look - I think he is trying to figure out why 'I' am blushing at my laptop & smiling profusely!

I'll make sure I don't fall asleep unless I'm all by myself after reading this! 😉

To the bold: 🤣

I am beginning to wonder if its a little to graphic 😃

Thanks for reading Mamsa, I'll try and give you some recovery time before I update again 😆

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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: shaz2009
How the hell are these two going to keep their hands off each other,I really cnt see and I sure as hell dnt want them to even try..😆 come on babay...lets get some raunchy,racy,plane action..just everything that fantasy's are made of!
Who would be after Zoya and why?Interesting and very intriguing.Am loving the greyness of the whole concept/plot,the level of suspence,thrill and erotica are all very gripping indeed!

It's going to be hard. Asad isn't the sort to sit around an read a book after that, now is he? 😃😉

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The Daily Rush

@TheDailyRush

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

thanks for the chuckle in chapter 2 😆
exactly what i needed, I'm taking a break from finishing up an application for uni and the short read was a great stress buster!

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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Rushitaa
thanks for the chuckle in chapter 2 😆
exactly what i needed, I'm taking a break from finishing up an application for uni and the short read was a great stress buster!

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading 😊