Poker Face-AsYa SS (16+) Updated! Chapter 5 11/4

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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
oooh lord this was good and Zoya was dreaming abt all of those things 😲 anyway it was good 😊

Thank you...! 😊

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: delena90

Thank you...! 😊

sorry it wasn't longer i was just speechless

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Very interesting story. Continue soon.

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Outside of their names and a few similarities with the original characters like Zoya and her iPad, so not the characters I am used too. Quite a bold and extroverted Zoya in the sexual sense...I will need to get adjusted to it as I am used to good old fashioned romances. However, this is interesting and you write so well and it did make me laugh, and more importantly, I want to read more. 😆

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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Laila2009
Outside of their names and a few similarities with the original characters like Zoya and her iPad, so not the characters I am used too. Quite a bold and extroverted Zoya in the sexual sense...I will need to get adjusted to it as I am used to good old fashioned romances. However, this is interesting and you write so well and it did make me laugh, and more importantly, I want to read more. 😆

Hey Laila, thank you for reading and liking it. Yeah it definitely is different...more an AU then following the current storyline. I'll update asap :)

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adele9010

@adele9010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hawt!!! *fans self*

Let me come back from my cold shower and write some more!! 😳

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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: kandygrover
Very interesting story. Continue soon.

Thank you! :)

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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: adele9010
Hawt!!! *fans self*

Let me come back from my cold shower and write some more!! 😳

Hehe thanks dee! 😃

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598470

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

That was really good, do continue soon.

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Ohw my gawd! I felt the way Zoya was feeling... And i feel so bad for Zoya! That is the most embarrassing thing ever! As if that wasn't enough to get me addicted to your story you had to add two sentences that made my curious like hell! Awesome update!