Poker Face-AsYa SS (16+) Updated! Chapter 5 11/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaz2009

Hey Del,this is friggin interesting stuff babe!From the prologue all I could picture was some "Eyes,Wide Shut"Scenario going on 😆,well not exactly along those lines,there's no mutual consent here...just hope the woman is not Zoya!I really like the bluntness of Zoya here,no beating around the bush,straight to the point ever so matter of factly.Could picture Asad's mightily shocked expression at Zoya's response..😆 Hope she ditches that Kabir soon and get's it on with Asad her body guard, as of now!😛I believe we're in for a racy erotical ride on this new venture of yours Del!?😃Please do hurry with the next update,the gutter mind is hungry and is in need of immediate action!😉



Don't worry the girl in the prologue is not Zoya but it may be someone connected to her. You'll just have to keep reading. 😉

Haha don't worry on the AsYa fun...it's going to be in the gutter, floor, bed, wall...wherever you want it to be 😆

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment shaz, means a lot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

OMG zoya is way too Bold



She is, isnt she. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Different and interesting story. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Well I'm 15, but the concept is really intriguing, so I've decided (if your fine with it) to carry on reading the ss but only the bits I'm comfortable with :-)

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting Story...like the beginning so far.
Please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaahahhh!

Del not fair! you cant post such amazing write ups in such short doses! I wont have it I tell you
! Its bad enough we have to wait for stupid 20 min slots every 24hrs now this tooo!

crap- already hooked- I'll make your life miserable if you don't update the next 2 - Very long chapters together 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: RMamsa

Aaahahhh!

Del not fair! you cant post such amazing write ups in such short doses! I wont have it I tell you
! Its bad enough we have to wait for stupid 20 min slots every 24hrs now this tooo!

crap- already hooked- I'll make your life miserable if you don't update the next 2 - Very long chapters together 😡



🤗 thanks for reading! Now, I promise and pinky swear that i'll update at least two chapters this weekend, kapish? 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Well I'm 15, but the concept is really intriguing, so I've decided (if your fine with it) to carry on reading the ss but only the bits I'm comfortable with :-)


Nikki <3



I am fine with it...as long as you are ok with the content. 😊

Thank you for reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was amazing! I can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sophie420

Interesting Story...like the beginning so far.

Please update soon!



Thank you! I will do soonish!

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