AsYa SS: You're a perfect fit.. Updt Pg. 26 (30/4)

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

wow this was amazing! Totally loved it!

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friendsall

@friendsall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

too good with a simple english...no complications with the feelings...CVs ko thoda aapka thinking de dho...a very light hearted and intense apology...Cheers...continue ur gud wk...

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

SHIT.

THIS WAS JUST AMAZING!

You made me go all mushy. :D Epic writing, I must say! I loved it! :D

PLEASE write something new? PLEASE!

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

PICKLES!

Okay, I just wanted to say something random to catch your attention. :P

You're a fabulous writer. It's a privelege to have you on the forum. :D

*hugs*

Thank you for writing. :)

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Haha Dee.. i knew you would be super happy!! See, I kept my promise! 😃😳

Thanks so much, my dear.. next one coming up soon..

And yes, A short story and FF in the pipeline.. Might be delayed due to work commitments and a family function.. But yes, it is surely going to happen in the near future.. 😃😉😳

My dear I can wait for my entire life.. <Just joking.. 😆 Please Post the FF and SS soon >

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

that was freaking awesome. especially ending of the 1st part asya.👏

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

i just love it i want more please pm me!👏

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Oh Avantika , You are too good. I m in love with you yar.. hehehe.. What are you doing with my Asad over here. He is the same as I always wanted him to be there back in the show. But, rather he prefers to be all akdu and stubborn. Akdu Jahapana. But he is so cute over here. I really love you for this. And , Zoya is the same as always , cute and mischievous. I could imagine her talking in her sleep (she can't shut her mouth even while sleeping), I can surely imagine her shock when her jahapana was on top of her (oh!! So, sensuous) , I can imagine ear duo shaped eyes when she was shocked while he teared her tickets (perfect one my Jahapana.) , and off course I can imagine her dumbfound expression when he proposed to her.

Girl, you are actually good with the proposing bit , if I ever have a boy friend I'l ask him to go get lectures on proposing from you. You are too good. My eyes were twinkling when I read those beautiful phrases when he proposed to her. Too apt... And, zoya being zoya , oh her expressions I could imagine it all..

Had Jahapanah just spoken all that? Strike 1..

He loves someone, so much? Strike 2

HE.. LOVES.. ME??!! Strike 3..

hahaha.. Nice one.. She really is cute with her attics. A Drama queen she is... And the badua part just blew me off. Our Akdu has been really hilarious throughout. And, again you are such a cliffhanger. But, then something has to be stored for tomorrow.

What do you mean by it should be continued or not. Can't you make out with the response you receive. Off course you should continue it.. And update sooner!!!

Now , I m waiting for three things - The next update, The short story and the FF on Asya.. 😆

~Dee~