AsYa SS: You're a perfect fit.. Updt Pg. 26 (30/4)

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suchishah

@suchishah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Heee...avantika was that the first half ...if yes then pls upload soon dear...it's really a cliffhanger as mentioned above...

Urban writing skills are amazing and flawless...can u pppllleeezzz continue I m like too greedy to read the second half...pllleeejjj

Secondly I seriously want cvs to read ur update and take some inspiration from u...great update...

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

@ Everyone: Posted the next half above.. Do give it a read.. 😃😳

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Awesome.. 👏 Please Continue It... 😛 Don't End it Here... 😭😃

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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awsum...awsum...jst awsum...i jst started wid this SS...n m completely in luv wid dis 1...i want 2 read mre...m sendin u a reqst...plz i want u 2 pm me wen u updte the nxt chp..

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

We want more!! We want more!!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

And am soo sure. once that Gudiya Ghar sajiz ends Tanveer is kicked off. This is Goona Happen!! FOR SURE. What a piece what a fab work!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

And yuppTHIS IS IT

Am sure, everyone must me screaming, and i too must join them in chorus 😆 😆 😆

ONCE MORE ONCE MORE ONCE MORE 😆 😆

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poojdc87

@poojdc87

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

What a great story Avantika! Really good job! I loved all the parts so far! I'm glad Zoya didn't immediately fall into Asad's arms during this confession thing. Although I guess she hasn't really had the opportunity so far? He just left after admitting that he loved her, which was such an AWESOME scene!!! Such a unique way of proposing😳. Please do continue - we have to see how Zoya reacts and Phoopi and Najma's reactions too.

Pooja

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

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👏 Way to go sister, will be back to give you a full on review, promise.😛

Okay here I am as promised, its Monday morning and this has to be the perfect read I needed to set my mood for rest of the day.

Waht have you done to me Avantika? I am dreaming AsYa these days.😆

I am not even close to catching up with all the updates but I could picture this whole scena and Asad and Zoyas expressions down to T with your descriptions of them.

At first my heart went out to Zoya, because he, it seems have hurt her so much in the past, and her break was inevitable, I didn't want her to forgive him.

Then I heard his side and felt his pain also and I instantly wanted her to forgive him and never leave him.

I can see this happening in the show, I know the track just started and I am sure Zoya is in for some painful moments but if it ends like this it will be all worth it.

So Jahapanha has fallen for her and had even confessed basically, what happens next?

Please don't keep me waiting, share quickly please.😉

Tusi cha gaye, meri behna, congrats.

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Love love Loved the update! Whether it be Riya-Arjun, Maanvi-Virat, or now Asad-Zoya, you continue to amaze me with your work! That was just perfect. Not mushy, not too dry, just a well-balanced update. Thanks for the update! And of course, you have to continue it!