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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

This is so beautiful. You explained the jist of the scene, flawlessly and impactfully. Short, but effective! :D

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Beautifully written.

You wrote it SO simplistically and yet, it stole my heart. Amazing. 😳

-Raina

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This was heartbreaking but amazing!

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lakshmi

@meow23

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

amazngg drabble..
i felt lik kickng asad der itself hor huggng dat so called tanu.. bt i'm soo glad she wld leave n go

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The_Inner_Voice

@The_Inner_Voice

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome Baccha 🤗

Marvelous piece of writing... 👏

You know...I do not watch the show, do not know the characters... and yet,
I could feel the soul of it... ❤️... that's what makes a great writer... to make people connect with the character as if they know them for quite sometime.

And here comes your jhappi 🤗... for sending me the link 😃

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

It was short and cute. I loved it asya forever :)

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t1234

@t1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

This was great!

You explained the scene in very few words and words that held so much depth!

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Ok so i had read this ages ago, and i realized today that i was stupid enough not to comment. You described her emotions so beautifully and to a T. Just amazing!

Do you forgive me for not commenting sooner 😛