Yeh Kaisa Ishq Hai Sajnaa! (UP#3 pg 27) ~ AsYa SS - Page 5

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Ankie,

Beautifully written.👏

You get 👏 for the language.

1. Zoya attempting suicide😭

2. Zoya, an illegitimate child...😭

For these two, you get 😡 😆

...just maintaining a fine balance here...😉🤗

Originally posted by: sweetypie_16

Hehehe...Maaf kiya! :P jao, aap bhi kya yaad rakho gi...😆

Originally posted by: -Yuks-

Nice so far

Originally posted by: sparikh

wow - very intense 1st part! all are emotional broken esp Zoya!

pls continue soon...

-Sona

Originally posted by: afsuu

hahhaaah u r threee much

this called modern way of phaiking

but sorry i forget to send arman tablet look the pic and his smile enough to heal big big patientwaaa so eat medicine on time otherwise see this pic

eat warna

Originally posted by: suchishah

I loved it...it was good afterr all ur gutter posts...pls update soon

Ankieewa are you again attempting tht style where confusion n curiousness takes life of the reader. If this is the case you sure have me in hooked up for this one.

I would like to read more. Its nice

it was wonderful somehow i feel that this will happen awesome!👏👏

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Eheheh, was the language good? kindaa bit apprehensive about it. its too simple, which i dont like, i wish it was ornate but Damm myself! 😡 😕 😆

Both those two, gets inspired from my fav book THE KITE RUNNER. 😳

was reading it again for the umpteenth time lately! 😆 😆

Originally posted by: blueflames

Ankieewa are you again attempting tht style where confusion n curiousness takes life of the reader. If this is the case you sure have me in hooked up for this one.

I would like to read more. Its nice