ASYA: OS GALLERY BY AS ❤️ (Note pg27) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: AKlover101

OMG... that was amazing! Very well-written! Please pm me when you update! Thanks in advance :)


Thank u sooo much...glad u liked it :)
Yep I would add u in my p.m list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks a ton
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Originally posted by: grad2011

<font color="#ff00cc">loved it!!!</font>


Thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE Next update coming up tonight or tomorrow morning :D
Be ready to read :P
And people who expect a p.m from me...make sure u r there in my buddy list. :D
Love ❤️
- APARNA
Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Anyone on for the update? I know it's really late in the night but I just completed writing it so thought to post it right now. :|
And I was not at all sleepy...:P
Anyways m posting it :D do read when u guys r free :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello people, I am ready with one more OS of mine. First of all thank you so much for lovely response on my first OS, I still cannot believe...85 likes, seriously? I didnot expect that :D. Acctually this inspired me to write one more OS. This one is really simple and an usual love story. I just thought to put it in my words. I hope you guys like it. Just drop in your views, like, dislike or criticize...anything. Your views are appreciated here :D

ECSTASY



He looked down at her cherubic face, angling his neck as in to look at her properly. With his one arm securely wrapped around her shoulders, he caressed her bare arm ever so daintily with his palm and the other arm flexed, with his palm clutching her small hand placed over his bare chest, his thumb stroking her fingers gently. Her head was perfectly placed over his shoulder. He moved his hand which was previously clutching her hand over her cheek, caressing it with his thumb and started stroking her silky tendrils thereafter. He smiled when she snuggled closer to him wrapping her arms around his waist. Tilting his head a bit, he kissed her forehead letting his lips linger there for a while. It was two years back that they married each other on this very day. And this had been the best decision of his life. He couldn't believe that he was the one reluctant to marry then and that too with this girl in his arms. So much has changed between them since the days when he hated her, but he could not deny the fact that there had always been a connection between them, be it on emotional front. Somewhere he felt that he had started falling for her since the day he had seen her. Acctually, he couldn't say that it was love at first sight, obviously not, he wasn't the teenager who would feel that it was love on mere attraction. But he felt some kind of acquaintanceship when he had seen her the first time. He was glad that his mother had successfully cajoled him to marry her. Not that he was against marriage, but he wasn't sure if she was the one for him. But today he was convinced that no one could have been a better match for him. She might not be impeccable as such and no one is but she was atleast perfect for him. It is their second wedding anniversary today and he had been planning for the surprise that he had given her yesterday night since a month. Expressions on her face were unfathomable when he brought her in their room that he had decorated with Lillys and Jasmines being her favorite. He could do anything to bring those expressions on her face. And that smile of her's, when he had let out his hand as in asking her for a dance, was to die for. Though it was their second wedding anniversary, he would always consider this as their first anniversary, the reason being, exactly one year back he had finally told her that he loved her. It sounds eerie, but that's how it had been. He had fallen for her long before but his vanity made him camouflage his feelings for her. Admist all this he couldn't repudiate that she was the soul reason for bringing back his smile which once had evanesced after the tragedies that transpired in his life. She was truly an angel for him who had given him the reason to smile. Today her happiness meant everything to him. The reason for his indignation on her initially was due to the fact that he knew he was infatuated towards her and he didnot want that to be converted into love. But what was he to do when he was compelled to think that way by incidences happened in his life. Today he could say, he was the happiest man on the earth. She was the only priority in his life now. He still dreaded those moments in his life when he had heard her scream over the phone. That had almost frozen him. What if he would have lost her? He pulled her even closer than she already was. Reminiscing every detail of that night he drifted his eyes close.


Flashback
One year back

"Asad, where is zoya? She told that she would be back by 8:00. And it's already 9:00." Dilshad asked coming out of the kitchen with a cup of coffee in her hand.


Asad who was working over the designs of his project, looked up at his mom for a split second, then flickered his eyes on the wall clock and looking back at the laptop screen he spoke "Chill mom, u know how she is when it comes to shopping na? She would come back, don't worry."
Though he made it sound as casual as he could, only knew how solicitous he had been, since the clock stuck 8:00.
Placing the cup of coffee on the table, dilshad closed his laptop screen, sitting besides him and mumbled with finality in her tone "Call her NOW."

"yes ammi, I am calling her, chill." he whined, pulling out his cell phone from his pants and getting off the couch. " Sometimes I doubt, wether I am her son or zoya is." he mumbled under his breath, while dialing zoya's number not realizing it was audible enough for dilshad to hear.

"Zoya." dilshad chuckled and went inside the kitchen to dump the utensils in the basin.

Asad grimaced while smiling slyly looking at his mother's retreating figure. He Waited for zoya to answer his phone. Hearing the phone ringing on the other side, he felt weird rush of adrenaline. He knew it was wrong on his part to shout at her daily for no particular mistake of her's. But it irritated him to the core knowing that he was in love and that too with the girl he once hated. He was never against marriage but he couldn't acquiesce in the actuality.
Exactly after four minutes she answered the call.
"Hello"
"Hello zoya, ammi was asking me your where abouts. How much more time would you take?"
"Mr Khan, I am finished with my shopping. Tell ammi that.."
Before she could finish her sentence, he heard her quail followed by a loud boom and voice of horns and screech of the cars halting. His heart stopped beating and head started spinning. All he could manage was to shout her name.
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He scrambled towards the reception with tears spilling out of his eyes and dilshad following him trying to assuage him and herself.
"Mrs. Zoya Ahmed Khan?" he asked the nurse on the recepeption with tenderness in his voice. When the nurse who was talking over the phone signaled him to wait, he banged the desk hard and bellowed with rage "Damn it, where is Mrs. Zoya Ahmed khan?" alarming the nurse. She groped to grab the file kept on the desk, hanging off the call. Checking the file she answered pointing out the way, "room no 21." He briskly walked towards the direction, seeing the doctor coming out of the room, he rushed calling him out and asking "Doctor, zoya? She is fine, right?"

"ummm, you are?"

"Her husband."

"yea, good. We need your signatures in some of the documents. She is really serious. We need to perform an urgent surgery. There are 90% chances that we would be able to save her, but we we cannot guarantee. She has some internal injuries as well. "
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Asad was sitting on the stool besides zoya's bed, clasping her hand in his. He was still sniffing, his tears did not seem to stop. Zoya was lying lifeless on the bed. Doctor said she should gain conciousness in an hour or two and was out of danger but needed to be kept under observation for 24 hours. He tranqilized at that but the the mere thought that something might have happened to her had killed him. His lips curled into an adorable smile when she slowly drifted her eyes open. He knew exactly what he had to do. Slowly he started stroking her hair. She grimaced in bewilderment wondering if it was his impersonation. Nevertheless she smiled faintly at him trying to lift herself up as in to sit. Asad stopped her and uttered, "You need rest zoya, keep yourself lying." at which zoya choked making Asad chuckle. This almost made her believe that it was someone else masked as Asad. She gave him an amazed look at which he said, "What? Zoya I am your husband and you should know that I was worried because I love you". He bent towards her making her dodge, bringing his lips near her ear he whispered, "And I mean it. Happy wedding anniversary sweetheart" making zoya smile wide in anticipation. She reposted mumbling,"Thank you and by the way I love you too."

Flashback ends


Voice of alarm broke his train of thoughts. He opened his eyes and stretched his arm towards the side desk to get the mobile. Zoya flinched in his hold whining. Switching off the alarm, he lightly shook zoya and whispered touching her ear lobes with his lips, "Happy wedding anniversary jaan. Now get up, we need to reach office by 8:00, remember?" She moaned at that and replied, "I don't feel like going to office Asad. Lets take a day off." This made him smirk.
"Okay fine you don't come. But some delegates are coming from China, and I have meeting at 8:30. I would come back by 12:00." She lifted her to look at him making a puppy face, pouting her lips. He smiled and pecked her lips.
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"Okay so, I guess we are on for the deal then Mr. Chang." he said shaking hands with Mr. Chang when he heard his phone buzz. Excusing himself he answered the call, "yes ammi."
"Hello, Asad, Zoya suddenly fainted. I have no idea what happened. I have sent for the doctor. You come fast." he could feel exigency in her voice hung the call without bothering to reply and rushed out informing his assistant. He cursed himself under his breath while driving, she seemed pale and tired when she woke up in the morning but he ignored that deferring that may be it was because she was unable to catch with her sleep properly yesterday night.
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In exactly twenty minutes he reached home. He barged inside, banging the door behind and expeditiously climbed the stairs skipping the steps alternatively. He walked briskly towards her room and stopped when he spotted Dilshad talking to a lady doctor smiling. He walked towards them and asked intriguing in their talk, "Mom, is zoya fine?" Dilshad smiled at that and replied, "Yes she indeed is. She might be needing to talk to you. So go and meet her first." she lightly patted his cheek. He slightly nodded and spared a faint smile to the lady doctor before entering their room. She was sitting leaned on the bed post with duvet covering her legs. Closing the door behind, he sluggishly walked towards her. When she accomplished his presence, she slightly blushed ebbing down her eyelids. Sitting besides her, he held her hand and casually caressed back of her hand with his thumb and mumbled, "Are you fine now? What happened suddenly?" She slightly nodded her head and looked at him.
"Asad, I-I ummm I just.." she staggered.
"What happened zoya, is everything fine?" he asked with solicitude in his voice.
She sighed and uttered in one breath, "I am pregnant." His eyes popped our that. Keeping his index finger below her chin, he made her look at him and sibilated with a huge smile adoring his lips, "Say it once again."
"I am pregn..." before she could complete saying it he captured her lips in a deep sensuous kiss. Pulling apart he engulfed her in his arms muttering in her ear, "Thank you so much zoya, this was the best anniversary gift any]ne can have."

xoxoxox


I need biggy comments from everyone who reads it :D
Love ❤️
-APARNA


DEDICATED TO YUNI
Happy birthday yuni :D
Love u mwah
Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGG! That was tooo cutee... I loved it :)) Would love to read more of your work so do update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res.
Will edit after exams. Pakka
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely OS...Asad counting their anniversary from confession day - very cute...

-Sona
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear
awesome OS really loved it
AsYa is too cute
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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