Destiny an AsYa FF (part26,page 84)

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

great update!!! plz send me a pm once you update! sent you a buddy req already :)

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princee

@princeegoyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

hey nice update...love muskan yr...& ya no pm to me WHY?..i m already in ur list...i m angry wd u 😕...i want pm next time whenevr u update😛..

pari

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Laxmi

@asyarocks1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

beautiful update buddy...

asya romance was damn cute..

humeira and muskaan ne toh mera dil jeet liya..

gr8 update..

thnx for the pm too.

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
res!!
willl b back by d evning dea!! :)

WHAT AN AMAAAZN UPDATE!!!!!!!👏👏
AWWWSSMMM!!👏
JST LOVED IT FROM D CORE OF MA HEART...❤️
IT WS SOOO NICELYY WRITTEN...👏
LOVED D SIBLINGS LOVE... SOO TOUCHY N SWEEET... 
AWWIIIEEE asad gfted her necklace n evn made her wear it thtss chooo cute...
ohhh man vn i read ths ""STOP!!!!"" i seriously had ma heartr in ma hand ... i ws like ohhh god now thr is gonnaa b another probs😕but fortunately thr waaasnt anyy..😃oool thaaanks to u...😃d way u turned d tables ws awwwsmmm!!👏
u r an awwwsm writer...👏👏
hatttsss off deaa
loved muskaan humeira bonding...😳
moreover billlu ki to chop ho gayiii yipppeee...
PERFECT UPDT DEA...👏
tnkooo chooo much 4 d PM...
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aww thanks!!!! I am really happy that you like my ff! I hope you will enjoy it more because there will be more sibling bonding and more of tanu failing! And of course more Asya romance! 😉 and besides I didn't want Humeira to be the bad person cause she has already suffered a lot in my ff! Ok now I feel really guilty!!

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
hey nice update...love muskan yr...& ya no pm to me WHY?..i m already in ur list...i m angry wd u 😕...i want pm next time whenevr u update😛..

pari

sorry!!! I am so sorry I promise that I won't make that mistake again! Although I am happy that you enjoyed this update!

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Nice os...
Do pm me when you update...

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: mochhug
Can you write my love story? Please? Seriously, if you were the script writer for my love life I would be so happy all the time

Loved his gift, and how he was wrapping the blanket on her. It's too cute.

AND OMG I LOVED that Humeira didn't fall for Tanveer's stupid plan. Silly cat. Expecting her to automatically trust someone she just met 🤣

I don't know about ALL the time! but I am sure if I wrote your love story than you would be happy a lot! Anyways I am really happy that you liked this update and of course we would expect Tanveer to trust someone automatically cause she is really desperate!

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Nisha

@nisha150

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Hey guys!! Sorry for updating after a while!! Actually I was supposed to update my FF last week, but I didn't have time cause I had to update some other FFs so I couldn't update last week! Sorry again!! Anyways enjoy!

It was the day for the mehndi and sangeet ceremonies and the whole house was busy with the arrangements.

The ceremonies were supposed to take place in a big ceremony hall. That was also the place where the nikaah was supposed to take place.

Although everyone was going to the same place, everyone were divided up.

One group was supposed to take the groom to the hall and the other group were supposed to go with the bride. Everyone had to do this for the nikaah also.

Anyways, Dilshad was busy dividing the groups.

Dilshad,"Ok, I will go with Asad and with me will be Najma, Tanveer, Ayaan, and Nuzut."

Then Muskaan spoke, "Wait! I want to be in bhaijaan's group."

Then Dilshad looked at her and spoke, "beta you have to be in Zoya's group."

But Muskaan was stubborn, "No ammi! This is not fair! I am also the groom's sister."

Then Dilshad said gently, "You can be in his group tomorrow."

"But why not today?"

"Because one of the groom's sisters have to be with the bride."

"But Nikkat is also the groom's sister."

Then Dilshad sighed and said, "But you both have to be together. Two sisters with the groom and two with the bride."

Then Muskaan gave up and said, "Ok fine! But me and Najma will switch spots on the nikaah day."

Dilshad smiled and said, "Ok fine beta."

Dilshad was about to leave when Muskaan spoke again, "Ammi can we have a group name?"

"Group name?" Dilshad looked at her confused.

"Ya! Then someone would announce it when we enter."

"Ok what are the group names?" Najma asked

"Well my group-"

Then Najma interrupted, "But Muskaan its Zoya's group!"

Muskaan rolled her eyes and spoke, "Zoya's group will be the Ras Malais and bhaijaan's group are the mirchi pakodas!"

Then Zoya asked micheviously, "Why is Mr.Khan's group name the mirchi pakodas?"

"Well that's because bhaijaan is so angry all the time so that's why and we are the ras malais because you are so sweet."

Everyone started laughing except bhaijaan and his group

Then Ayaan said," Muskaan that's not fair! I am also sweet!"

Then Dilshad said," Muskaan you are also going to be a mirchi pakoda on the nikaah day."

Muskaan then said," I change my mind!"

Asad and his group sighed, but then Muskaan said, "I will be with Zoya on the nikaah day!"

Zoya laughed with everyone else.

Then Asad said a little embarrassed , "No ammi! If we are getting these group names then I am going to cancel the sangeet and mehndi"

Then Zoya said, "Oh come on Mr. Khan!"

Asad just ignored her and crossed his arms and said stubborn, "No."

Then Muskaan said, "Fine!! No group names mirchi pakoda."

Everyone started giggling at Muskaan's remark.

"Ok ok! Enough of the laughing we have a lot of work to do. Ras malais you are going to the hall first and then the mirchi pakodas." She ordered and teased at the same time

Everyone laughed except Asad

"ammi!" Asad looked at her embarrassed

In the afternoon it was time to leave for the hall. While everyone were busy getting ready, Asad took the advantage of it and tried to get into Zoya's room. He was wearing a red sherwani and tried to look his best not only because it was his sangeet, but for Zoya. When he went into her room carefully, but the first thing he saw was nothing. It was dark. That was because someone covered his eyes with a dupatta.

"Zoya?' He asked hopefully.

"No my dear bhaijaan."

It was Muskaan and she was laughing, but someone else was laughing with her. He though it was Zoya, but then he realized that it was not her laugh. Then there were two other laughs.

"Who is here?"

"Not your would-be-begum." It was Najma

"Najma? Muskaan?"

"Correct! But bhaijaan you have two more sisters!" It was Nuzut

"Nikkat? Nuzut?"

"You are so good at this game bhaijaan!" It was Nikkat

"Now lets get out of this room. The dullan is getting ready!" Najma spoke

The 4 sisters took Asad out of the room and shut the door behind them. Asad uncovered his eyes and Muskaan took her dupatta back.

The four sisters crossed their arms and looked at Asad curiously.

"Bhaijaan what were you doing in Zoya's room?" Nikkat asked sternly

"Wo actually.." He began

"Phir wo actually!" Muskaan said annoyed

Asad mentaly face palmed himself and said, "Actually I was looking for ammi."

Before any of the sisters could start their lectures Dilshad came and said, "Arre you are all here? Zoya is waiting for you Muskaan and Nikkat. Challo!"

Muskaan and Nikkat left giggling and then Dilshad said,"Asad beta the ras malais are leaving, after they leave the mirchi pakodas have to go."

Nuzut and Najma giggled and Asad just rolled his eyes.

In the hall Zoya's group were entering with someone yelling, "Welcome ras malais!"

Everyone started laughing while Zoya's group looked at Muskaan. She looked at them and said, "What? You guys actually thought that I was joking?"

Zoya laughed with everyone else joining her.

Zoya entered she was wearing a beautiful blue salwaar

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She was waiting for Asad and then realized he was here when she heard the hilarious announcement

"WELCOMING THE MIRCHI PAKODAS!!!!"

Everyone laughed and Zoya's group looked at Muskaan who of course told the announcer to announce that

She looked at Asad and his group who were a little embarrassed. Although Ayaan was laughing with Nuzut, Najma, and Dilshad.

Asad's group set Asad down next to Zoya who was mesmerized by her beauty. They gave each other a quick smile.

Soon the music came on and everyone started dancing.

The four sisters were also dancing and asked Zoya to join them, but Zoya rejected their offer and said she will later.

Asad slipped his hand to Zoya's and covered their hands with her duppata. Zoya blushed at the romantic gesture, but it didn't last long because Muskaan and Nuzut pulled Zoya with them to dance on a song.

Asad was upset, but Ayaan sat next to him and started talking to him.

He kept on looking at Zoya who was happily dancing. He smiled at her. Zoya looked at him and smiled back.

Precap: Dance battle between Mirchi pakodas and ras malais

Asad and Zoya dancing together on Jeene Laga Hoon

Zoya changes into a different outfit for mehndi.

I hope you guys enjoyed this update! Sorry that there weren't that many mitwa moments, but there will be a lot for the next update! Please comment and like! Thanks!!!

BTW THIS FF IS ENDING SOON!!!

Edited by AsYa_fan - 12 years ago