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Lovely update :) wonder if zoya would soon leave the house
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it was beautiful update!

Asad couldnt stop himself from caressing her face haayeee that chooo chweet!

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Hey guys,sorry for the late update,actually I was really busy,but now I have enough time to do 2 update! (maybe I will do that) Anyways enjoy update 10!
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~Destiny~
Asad slowly went to Muskaan's room. He saw that she was praying. He felt even more guilty because he knew that whenever she was worried or upset Muskaan would just pray.
Muskaan noticed that Asad was there so she finished praying and put her mat away slowly,not looking at Asad and uncovered her head. Asad entered the room slowly and feeling even more guilty.
Muskaan pretended not to notice. Asad was holding something behind him and when Muskaan sat on her bed he held a teddy bear in front of her. Muskaan smiled a little,but then frowned.
Asad smiled and sat infront of her.
Then Asad said,"arre you don't remember Mr.Teddy?"
Muskaan said nothing and pretended to text on her phone.
Then Asad said,"These days people only know one do one thing,text." He then took her phone from her hands and replaced it with the teddy.
Asad said,"remember when we were little and Ayaan and me would take your teddy away and hide it and then you would tell on us."
Muskaan carressed the teddy's head,but still listened.
Then Asad continued,"and then when you were 10 I took the teddy and replaced it with Ayaan's stuffed frog and then I would give the teddy to Najma and I would say that Najma took it-"
Then Muskaan continued smiling,"and then I knew that it was you all along and I would take your favorite carrot pillow and replace it with Ayaan's donut shaped pillow."
Asad smiled and said,"I miss those days."
Muskaan replied,"me to."
Then Asad looked at her and said,"I'm sorry,I shouldn't have said that."
Muskaan looked at Asad and said,"bhaijaan no matter how far we are from our country,we are Indian at heart."
Asad smiled and said,"I know and i'm sorry."
Muskaan said,"bhaijaan I think that you should say sorry to Zoya."
Asad hesitated for a moment,but Muskaan said,"If you say sorry to her then think that I forgave you."
Asad looked at her and slowly went out of the room and walked slowly to Zoya's room (Mitwa)
Asad opened the door to her room and said,"Ms farroqqi."
He entered the room and said,"Ms.Farioqqi?"
There was no answer he continued,but no answer. He checked everywhere in the room and saw her suitcase gone and window open. He saw a note on her table and read it.
Dear phupi,Najma,and Muskaan,
I am sorry,but I have to leave. I know that its a little early,but I think that its better if I leave. I feel that I am not wanted here and thats why I am leaving. Don't worry I will find another place to stay until appi and jiju come. Please take care and I guess this is good-bye.
From,
Zoya
Not wanted? This is all my fault! How could she leave like this?
Asad felt like screaming her name so loud that wherever Zoya was,she could hear him,. He tried calling her,but there was not use.
Muskaan and Najma came out and Najma said,"what happened bhaijaan?"
Asad said rapidly,"theres no time do you know where Zoya can be?"
Then Muskaan replied,"Zoya came to my room 1 hour ago and asked me where Bhopal staion is.."
Asad then ran and got his keys and ran to the car and started driving. Muskaan and Najma were confused and realised that Zoya was gone.
In the railway station-
Zoya was crying and thought that nobody wanted her anywhere,she had no family and was not wanted anywhere.
Zoya cried and thinking,why did her ammi leave her alone in this world.
Just then a bunch of goons came and Zoya saw them. One sat next to her and said,"Salaamakum."
Zoya quickly stood and moved and the goons said,"where are you going? Let me help." He slowly got the handle of her bag,but she slapped him. Then goon yelled and almost slapped her when a hand grabbed his and Zoya looked at the savior and it was Asad. Zoya was shocked and Asad went infront of her and Asad kept on hurting the goon's hand and he pushed him. 2 goons attacked him,but Asad punched them. Then one goon grabbed Zoya,but Asad kicked him and slapped him. Zoya was shocked and then 3 other goons came and one goons hit Asad,but it was like he didn't feel anything,so Asad smacked him and got the rod and the goons. Then he kept on hitting the goons and Zoya tried to stop him
Mr.Khan,stop you will kill him!
"So what? He tried to hurt you,how dare he!"
Then Zoya tried to grab the rod,but Asad pushed her and she fell and hurt her arm. She yelled ouch and Asad stopped and went to Zoya and saw her arm bleed
"are you ok? I am sorry."
Asad got a hankerchief from his pocket and tied it around her wound.(Mitwa)
Zoya stood up and said,"Thank you for saving me,bye"
Zoya walked a few steps and Asad grabbed her arm and pulled her close to him.(Mitwa)
"Dont even think about leaving Ms.faroqqi. How can you leave Ammi,Najma,Muskaan?" How can you leave me-"
He stopped and hesitated and said,"lets go"
He let go of Zoya and without a word Zoya followed him to the car.
Precap-Asad plays the guitar and sings Tu Jaane na and looks at Zoya the whole time.
Edited by AsYa_fan - 12 years ago

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