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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh poor humera anyway nice update, i can't wait for the next part,
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OMG!!!! I'm sooo excited for next part!!! I love the Asya moment!!! ;) Amazing!!! But poor Humera ...feel bad for her! ...sort of xD Thanks for the PM :)
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Hey...I just simply loved it...ur updates are always adorable...u rock dear...
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hey it was a really nice update but it was small!

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the update was nice. so Mr. Khan asks for Zoya too in his duas, deir small moments n eye locks are good start to their relationship. wating to read wat happens at the lake. it'l b fun i know.
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Nice update!
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Very nice ff
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Hey guys,I am back!!! Well with my os Destiny. Anyways thank you for your comments on my os and Enjoy this next update!!!!!
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~Destiny~
At the lake-
Asad and the 4 ladies were in the front of the lake. It was twilight and a very romantic weather. The moon was wakining from its sleep and the stars were coming out and sparkling on the lake. It was a very beautiful moment. Zoya was excited to see the shining lights on the lake and so were the 3 other ladies. Asad just wanted to get it over with and go home. Asad then noticed Zoya and how beautiful she was with her white suit. Her hair was blowing in the breeze and she had a beautiful smile on her face. Her eyes showed her excitment. (Marjawa) Then his thoughts stopped when Dilshad started feeling dizzy. She almost fell to the ground,but Muskaan and Najma caught her by her arms. Asad and Zoya were alarmed and went to Dilshad. Najma said,"Ammi!"
Zoya was the first to speak,"Phupi what happened?"
Dilshad,"I am fine just a little dizzy."
Asad spoke worried,"Ammi how are you fine?"
Then Zoya said,"Call the docter!"
Then Muskaan said to Zoya,"Don't worry I am a doctor,Ammi when was the last time you ate and drank water?"
Dilshad replied,"In the morning."
Muskaan said,"You are dehidrated,Ammi I brought a water bottle its in the car lets go there."
Then Dilshad said not agreeing,"No,I don't want Zoya to miss the lights she was very excited."
Asad then said to Dilshad,"Ammi please lets go."
Dilshad didn't agree
Then Muskaan said,"Ammi you have to drink something and if you don't drink anything then your health will become worse."
Asad and Zoya got worried,but Dilshad didn't budge so Asad sighed and agreed. Asad stayed with Zoya; and Muskaan and Najma took Dilshad to the car. Asad just rolled his eyes and turned to the lake. Then Zoya said,"Mr.Khan why are you always this boring?" Asad didn't answer instead he asked another question,"Ms.Farioqqi,why are you so annoying?" Zoya turned to Asad and said,"why are you so batameez?" Zoya turned to him and said,"Why are you so khuddos?!" Zoya turned back to Asad and looked at the stars. She smiled and then saw a shooting star. Zoya then said,"Look Mr.Khan a shooting star! You should make a wish!" Zoya quickly put her hands together and starting making a wish. Asad looked at her smiling. The wind was blowing her hair to her face. Asad felt like removing the hair on her face and tucking it behind her ears. He went close to her. Zoya was done making a wish and saw Asad going close to her. They were face to face and looking at eachother. Asad put his hand on her cheek and caressed it. Zoya closed her eyes and felt his soothing hands.(Mitwa) Asad went close to her and then suddenly the lights went on and the show started. Asad and Zoya were shocked at what just happened and moved back. They both turned to the lake and realised what happened. Zoya closed her eyes remembering the times when she argued with Asad and what just happened. Asad just looked at the lake shocked at what happened. Asad and Zoya remembered when the kwazi sahib told them that they were a beautiful jodi. Zoya decided to forget what happened and focus on the lights. She looked at the lights and smiled. Then after a couple moments Zoya started walking and so did Asad,but then Zoya tripped and Asad caught her. In the background were the beautiful lights and Asad and Zoya were staring at eachother. (Mitwa).
In the car the back of the trunk was open and Dilshad was resting on Najma's lap and Muskaan was trying to call Asad.
Najma said worried,"What happened? Where is bhaijaan?"
Then Muskaan said annoyed and worried,"I don't know he is supposed to come back by now the show is over and he and Zoya aren't back yet."
Then Asad and Zoya came a little uncomfortable
Then Muskaan came to them and said,"bhaijaan,what took you so long?"
Zoya then said,"um I fell and I kind of sprained my ankle."
Muskaan then took her arm and said,"Are you ok? I will check it if you want?"
Zoya said,"No I am fine."
Muskaan said,"No you are not fine,I am gonna check your ankle."
Zoya looked at Asad helpessly and Asad said,"Muskaan shes fine now."
Muskaan looked at AsYa suspiciously and said slowly,"Ok,but if you start to feel pain then please tell me,I am a good doctor."
Zoya smiled and gave Muskaan a reasuring hug. Then Zoya said,"How is phupi?"
Muskaan said,"Shes fine and shes resting. There was a medicine shop nearby and I got her some glucose. She will be normal later,but its better if she rests."
Najma stood and Asad took his Ammi in his arms and set her in the back seat with Najma and Muskaan with her head on Najma's lap. Asad went to the driver's seat and Zoya in the passenger's. Zoya didn't look at Asad,but looked at Zoya and then looked away and started the car and went off.
In the Khan house Zoya and Najma were on the couch texting eachother😆 while Muskaan was on her labtop. Asad came wearing a cute white top and blue jeans. Zoya just started staring at him and then heard the ring of Najma sending her a text and looked her. Asad said,"what is that noise?" Zoya stood and smiled and said,"Its a text Mr.17th century!" Asad just said annoyed,"I know what a text is Ms. Faruoqqi." Zoya then smiled looking at the text and texted Najma back. Najma looked at the text and while reading it Asad snatched the phone and said,"You are right next to eachother,I don't think you need to use this." Muskaan looked up and stood and said,"I agree bhaijaan! I feel that they are texting about me!" Both girls giggled and Asad just rolled his eyes and said,"Najma please study." Then Zoya said,"but Mr.Khan-" Asad looked at her angrily and said louder,"Ms.Faroqqi,I don't want your influence to get to my sister so please stay away from her!" Zoya looked at him teary-eyed. Then Muskaan said,"bhaijaan please stay calm or else Ammi will wake up and its important for her to rest." Then Asad said angry,"The faster this girl goes away from this house the better it will be for everyone."
Zoya started tearing up and said quietly,"Ok if thats what you want." She left the room and Muskaan and Najma looked at her worried. Then Muskaan said,"bhaijaan you shouldn't have been harsh on her,she didn't do any harm. Asad said,"Muskaan you agree with her because you were brought up in the same enviorment with her." Muskaan then started having some tears,but holded them and she said,"I-I didn't mean that bhaijaan,true I agree with her,but bhaijaan-" Asad just left and Muskaan just looked down with a tear coming down from her eye. Najma put a hand on her shoulder and Muskaan hugged her crying thinking if she has been a good sister to Asad.
Asad thought of what Muskaan said. He remebered yelling at Zoya for being a bad influence and saying its better if she leaves the house. He tries to work,but Muskaan's words keep haunting his mind. He closes his eyes and remebers the times he spent with Zoya. (Teri Meri) He then opens his eyes and says to himself,"I am sorry Zoya."
Precap: Zoya is in the middle of nowhere and is surrounded by goons. She slaps one goon and the goon almost punches her,but someones hand grabs the goon. Zoya looks at the person and is shocked.
Hey guys I hope you enjoyed this part😊😊😊 Please like and comment my os,thanks!😃😃
Edited by AsYa_fan - 12 years ago

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