FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 4

Its gud..!!! but bit confusing.. if ayaan was already in love with zoya thn his reaction when she called him and also when he met her in nite was not clear.. even her reactn when she met him... the story line s gud.. plz continue..😊

loved the prologue and chapter one is a great beginning. Pls add me to your PM list!!

Originally posted by: nrthya

Its gud..!!! but bit confusing.. if ayaan was already in love with zoya thn his reaction when she called him and also when he met her in nite was not clear.. even her reactn when she met him... the story line s gud.. plz continue..😊

thanks dear.don't include prologue in story line, the main story starts from part-1, prologue is written showing the high point /twist in the FF... the story has started from first part ...

Originally posted by: Bablylovely20

Superb next part plz

thanks dear.. will update today...

Hey all, sorry for being late, infect i wanted to post this chapter on Saturday but had some commitments at home so was busy... So i may post one more Part today as i want my story to move ahead of the show so that it may not loose its interest...
Here is Part-2

Part-2

Ayaan was shocked on listening Zoya's plan to kidnap Asad.

are you mad? what if police gets us? said Asad

Allah Miyan.. Whats wrong with you? you want to protect your abbu or not? and who will complaint police? Phuphi or Nazma? they are already with me.. and Mr. Khan will be in our custody….

why do I feel , I have listened you before? Ayaan asked doubtfully….. anyways leave….but where will we keep bhaijaan?

I have a plan for that too…. listen…. and zoya told him the whole plan…

What? Ayaan was shocked, how a girl can make such plan, and that too stupid plan… how will it work?

It will definitely work…. or I have second option too….

now whats that? Ayaan asked……

that will be plan B, if Plan A fails…..

Bhaijaan says right about you. you are the craziest person on the earth…. ayaan said…..

Zoya was cutting her teeth on listening but controlled her self while saying, reach there in time…..and hanged the phone….

It was next day morning, when Zoya went to Asad….

Mr. Khan….

Miss Farukhi, please don't start again… I am going to the court and thats final…

Mr. Khan , I have not come for that now…

so what do you want….

infect you know, my visa is going to expire in few days… please help me… she made a puppy face…

what can I do?

please take me to that address, you gave to me…. you know the area very well but I may will be lost….

Asad smirked on listening… lost and you? till now you were running alone here and there in spite of my warnings, now suddenly what happened?

Mr. Khan, please… you know I don't have time now to roam around… and hearing is in the afternoon na,its just one hour run, if we go now, we will be back in three to four hours…please mr,. Khan, it will be your last favor to me, after that I am going to leave India….

as she completed the sentence, something broke inside Asad…. he had important meeting but could not say no in spite of all efforts…..

Ok, let's go….

On the way, as usual Zoya was torturing Asad with her Shayari and talks…. as they reached there and found the house…. It was an old house broken from places….

They entered the house, zoya suddenly had glimpses of her past…. she felt like a child running from here and there and a lady running after her calling…. Zoya, be careful varna aap gir jayengi………

Suddenly she said….. ammi pakdo mujhe………..

what? asad asked…

Zoya came to present… nothing….. she spoke while lost yet..

Let's go inside.. Asad said… but the door is locked.. Asad said…

Mr. Khan, there is a door backside….May be…. Zoya said..

Do you remember this house?

I think I have some past memories of this house… she said but Asad could feel her voice very low as something was breaking inside her….

there was a door on the backside, which was locked from inside, Asad pushed that hard and the door opened. they entered the house, suddenly tears flew in Zoya's eyes may be memories of her past had stroked again..

Asad slowly put his hand on her shoulder… Miss Farukhi, are you ok?

Yes I am Mr. Khan, let's ckeck…. I am sorry for bringing you to a dirty place, you may go outside if you are feeling uncomfortable due to dirt…. she said as she remembered Asad being very particular about cleanliness….

Miss Farukhi, look at those pictures, Asad signaled her changing the topic towards a wall where three pictures were hanging… They both went towards the wall…..there was a picture of a child, one was of group and one was a family picture, but all were not clear due to dirt and were moisturized being quite old…..

Zoya took her tab and checked her old pictures while Asad was also looking at them… When Asad saw a picture in her tab and said, its you…..

Yea, zoya said with tears…. and look Mr. Khan this group photo is same as I had given you…

yes, but this third one….. this is almost ruined picture…said Asad..

Mr. Khan this must be me with my parents….

but i can't see the faces clearly….

Yes Mr. Khan…. but lets take this picture with us… I may redevelop this picture…

Asad removed the picture from the old frame and put it into his pocket… then they started checking the house properly, while Zoya and some memories reminding her of past, she was all in tears…. they got zoya's old toys and her ammi's stuff…. when Zoya started weeping badly and ran outside…

Asad went after her,he put his hand on hers… Miss Farukhi….

she didn't reply….

Finally he held her shoulder… and said…. Zoya…..

On listening, zoya turned back and hugged him tight while weeping…….

he hesitatingly put his hand on her back and comforted her…. after some time, zoya came back to senses and parted from him… Asad looked on the other side and same was with Zoya….

Asad broke the silence finally…

Miss Farukhi….

Zoya looked towards him slowly….

We got so much stuff related to you as well as your ammi but could not get anything related to your abbu….

may be when he left me and ammi , he took everything with him..

he left you, I mean…. he left home after your mother's death?

I don't know Mr. Khan, I told you already, I know nothing about him…. we may try to redevelop that snap and may get any clue about him…..

Should we leave now? asked Asad..

Let's go…. zoya said…

Are you Ok? asad said hesitatingly…

Yes, I am fine Mr. Khan, Thanks a lot for your support….. and zoya went into the car…

on the way she spoke nothing… Asad could feel her silence and tried to break that silence but zoya could not answer… he had never seen such side of Zoya……he never knew the girl whom he hated the most due to her non stop talking may be so serious too…..

So how was it...hope you all like it...please hit like and leave your comments... i may post one more part in afternoon so will pm in the afternoon...

hey im new to this forum nd just read ur parts...waiting to see how ayan reacts after seeing zoya...ur writing is fantastic waiting for the next part do pm me

Originally posted by: scarletgirl

hey im new to this forum nd just read ur parts...waiting to see how ayan reacts after seeing zoya...ur writing is fantastic waiting for the next part do pm me

thanks dear, will definitely pm you next part...

So i am posting next Part too, i know its too early as i am not getting good response too, but i completed it and just wanted to share it...

Part-3

Zoya's silence broke only when her phone rang….it was Ayaan…. then Zoya remembered their plan…

Yes…. we are on the way back to home…. and she cut the call….

Who's there? Asad asked….

Nnn… najma…. zoya said…. and kept silence….

suddenly after some time, the car broke down….

what happened Mr. Khan?

I think,its puncture…..

they both got out of the car, one tyre was punctured and Asad started changing the Tyre….. zoya was extremely angry on Ayaan, she called him and whispered…

Ayaan, you are such a stupid person…

what happened Miss Farukhi?

you punctured one tyre only…

yes, you said me to puncture the car na?

but don't you know, there is always one extra Tyre there, if you need to stop someone, puncture at least two tyres….

Oh god… now what?

now you stay at the guest house, I do something….

k… I am waiting for you people……and he cut the phone….

zoya saw a small water pool nearby… she thought of a plan…. as Asad completed the task of changing the tyre.. she slowly went near the pool, and jumped into the pool….and started shouting,,… help, someone save me…..Mr. Khan….

Asad looked towards the pool and ran towards it on listening Zoya's voice… he jumped into the pool and saved her from the water…. zoya was acting like she didn't know to swim…. Asad brought her outside… she closed her eyes showing herself as unconscious…

he held her into his embrace tight, as he was going to loose her …. zoya could feel his tension for her and was feeling bad from inside that she was going to cheat him….. finally She started coughing….Asad laid her on the ground and started rubbing her hands… she slowly opened her eyes… she could see small tears in Asad's eyes too…. Finally she slowly got up and sat on the floor, Asad left her hand and came back to his angry mode….. Miss Farukhi… are you mad? why did you go near the pool….

Mr. Khan, infect I was talking on the phone and went near the pool, my foot slipped there, she cooked up story….

let's go now….

they both were wet and it was a little cold…. as zoya entered the car, Asad wrapped a towel around her , zoya could feel his concern for her hidden behind the anger he was showing….

Finally he started the car and they moved ahead… they were near a guest house where Ayaan was already inside….

Zoya pretending being feeling very cold and started shivering, Asad stopped the car… Miss Farukhi…are you ok?

she didn't speak , just nodded her head….Asad could feel her shivering, Finally he said, here is a guest house, lets stop here for sometime, you may dry your clothes.. yet we have one hour in hearing of court …. he said while checking his watch…

Zoya was too happy, her plan has succeeded.. they both reached the guest house, Asad got a room booked, when receptionist who ws an old man looked at him suspiciously, he wrote on the register as Mrs. and Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan….

they went into the room….you get yourself comfortable, we have half an hour here… Asad said while leaving her inside the room and went out so that she may feel comfortable…

Zoya got the chance and called ayaan….

we are here in the guest house…. Mr. Khan has just went outside…

but how did you convince bahijaan to come here? ayaan was shocked that his bhaijaan has agreed to come to the guest house that too with a girl…

that is none of your business, he has given me half an hour…and you too have half an hour to hold him… he may be in the lobby…..

suddenly she could listen the knock on the door…

Wait, may be he is on the door of my room, room number 201…come fast… and she cut the call and opened the door

Mr. Khan? he was in changed and dry clothes..

yes, infect, there was a small boutique in the guest house, from there,I got a dress for you… you were feeling cold na? this may be not of your style but still will help you to get rid of these wet clothes..

Thanks Mr. Khan, Zoya said while handling the packet from him but feeling guilt inside…. she took the packet to the washroom, it was a beautiful black saree, finally with a lot efforts , she wore the saree and was looking stunning… she came outside, Asad could not help but looking at her…. for the first time Zoya felt shy with Asad's look, Asad started looking on other side…. when zoya saw a flash light on her phone, it was ayaan…. now what to do, she was thinking… finally she texted him, "he is with me in the room, you will not be able to kidnap him, I am going with plan B, wait for ten minutes and then you may leave to the court…

Ayaan texted… Ok,

suddenly zoya said, Mr. Khan, I am feeling hungry, can we get some food or coffee?

Asad ordered two coffees for them…

As trey arrived, zoya prepared coffee for him… As soon as asad drank the coffee, he felt unconscious on the sofa itself…

Zoya called Ayaan to come there… as Ayaan and Zoya looked towards each other, Zoya shouted…….tum? same was the reaction of Ayaan……

What are you doing here? ayaan asked….

That I should ask you.. how can a stupid person like you be brother of Mr. Khan?

What do you mean?

and they were into a fight again…

Ok, its not time for fight, its time of action, Zoya said,

but what did you do with bhaijaan?

Zoya smiled and showed him a bottle of sleeping pills?

Are you mad? Ayaan was shocked,if something happen to bhaijaan?

don't worry, nothing is going to happen to your bhaijaan, I gave him just two tablets, he will wake up by evening… I am here with Mr. Khan, you must leave to the court now…

Finally Ayaan went out of the room leaving Asad and Zoya in the room, while Asad was in deep sleep…Zoya sat near him and also got a fast sleep sitting on the sofa itself.

It was the evening of the day when Asad woke up from his deep sleep while Zoya was sleeping there keeping her head on his shoulder and his hand was on her waist…her hair were falling on her face.

Asad slowly shifted his arm …. she was looking gorgeous in black saree….Asad looked at her and slowly touched her face, he could feel her soft skin with his hand and fixed Zoya's hair, which made Zoya woke up, she looked towards Asad, finally Zoya spoke, Mr. Khan, you are awoke?, she tried to get up from close proximity of Asad, but pallu of her saree was stuck under Asad, so she got pulled and ended up falling into Asd's lap… both shared a small eye lock , zoya slowly pulled her saree and went away….

while Asad was still trying to collect his feelings for zoya…. when she came and said, Mr. Khan, I think we should leave , its too late….

yup… he checked his watch… court's hearing would have finished by now, we have to go fast….he held her arm and both went away, Zoya was happy , her plan had succeeded and that too without Asad any doubt about it…. he was feeling guilty himself for not reaching he court in time..

When they reached home, no one was at home as both Dilshad and Nazma had went to the court…. Zoya called Ayaan, he thanked her for her help and to get his father bailed…. Asad called Police inspector, who told him that Rashid got the bail from the court as there was no witness present there….. Asad was doubting zoya but was not sure as he himself had decided to stay at guest house,…. but poor didn't know it was all plan of one and only Zoya Farukhi…..

When he got call from his office for an urgent meeting…

It had been a long day for Zoya, she went to her room to freshen up, as she returned from washroom, Dilshad was there in her room….

Phuphi aap yhaan? Zoya said…

Yes, I was here to thank you Zoya, jo aaj tumne kiya Asad ko court mein ana se rokne ki liye, aur koi nahi kar sakta tha….

but phuphi maine to kuch nahi kiya….

Zoya, Ayaan ne mujhe sab bta diya hai, thanks beta…… and she hugged Zoya, zoya too hugged her back….

now I have to find out that doll which may prove Rashid innocent…..Dilshad said…

No phuphi, you are not alone, I am also with you, we will definitely find it….. Zoya said……….

Mr. Khan, aap? When she saw Asad standing on the door with anger in his eyes…..

Precap:- Great confrontation of Asad and Zoya alongwith entry of Tanveer…….

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

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