FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 2

Originally posted by: grad2011

really nice plzz continue soon!!!!!

Thanks dear. hope to continue..

Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Please Conti.

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Originally posted by: _Oishi_

I loved it..pls update soon

thanks dear, hope to continue...

so no one else liking it? thanks for the comments who liked...take it as an os please... and forget...

Thanks to all those who read the prologue and liked it, i had asked for 30 likes but got just 24 till now..but i can't break the heart of those 24 , who liked my prologue and those too who read it silently and went away and i know will come back to read part one... if want pms, add me to your buddy list...
..so here is the first part...

Part-1

Three months had passed since Zoya was staying at Asad Ahmed Khan's home.. Asad had never liked her, her carefree behavior, her messed room, her dressing style but was unable to get her out from his house due to Dilshad who loved Zoya very much, but now time has changed since zoya helped Asad to find out the person who attacked his mother an dthey have been better in their relations, Asad knows he has some feelings for Zoya but still unaware of those feelings and Zoya takes him as a friend, a savior and a guard of her life, with whom she shared most important secret of her life that she came from New York to find her father, who left her alone when her mother died, unaware of the fact how her mother died…..Asad had put his father behind bars in the doubt of a murder seventeen years ago and was also blaming him for the attack on Dilshad… But Dilshad is not ready to accept it, nor Zoya , his sister Nazma, his step brother Ayaan, Shirin and two daughters of Shirin….. but it was only Asad who was stuck that Rashid is at fault….. Ayaan had made him clear that he is not punishing Abbu for the murder he may have done seventeen years ago but he was punishing Abbu for leaving him alone seventeen years ago….. and Asad? he was speechless on this and was thinking was Ayaan right?

Dilshad had made Asad clear, he will not go on hearing in the court to give his statement , ahe had made him clear that she will find the proof of Rashid's innocence, "That doll having recording of that night seventeen years ago which show it was a plan against Rashid" but Asad was clear that there is no such proof.

Ayaan Called Asad.. Bhai Jaan…

Haan Ayaan….you are calling me at night this time?

Bhai jaan, Abbu is innocent, he can't do it…

Ayaan, all the proofs are against him….i have seen him with skeleton in the doll factory….

but bhai jaan ye kisi ki sajish bhi to ho sakti hai?

Ayaan tum ye kaise keh sakte ho?

aaj dadi ne Mamu aur Mumani ko Godiya factory ki koi baat karte suna hai, they were talking about some doll at your home which may be proof in favor of Abbu…

Ayaan, I have checked everywhere for that doll, I could not find that doll. I think this is just Mr. Rashid Khan's excuse to get free from jail…

Bhai jaan this means you will give your statement?

yes, you know I always stand for truth and I will stand for truth here too…..bhut raat ho gyi ha Ayaan, good night….

and Asad cut the call without listening to him…. but he could not notice Zoya was standing behind him….

As he turned, he saw Zoya…

Miss. Farukhi, can't you knock before coming?

I could have knocked, if door was shut, it was already open…

kahiye kya baat hai?

Mr. Khan, please understand feelings of Phuphi, if she is saying , your Abbu is innocent, there must be some truth behind it…

Ms. Farookhi, maine pehle bhi kha ha don't interfere in my personal matters..

no Mr. Khan, this is not your personal matter, Phuphi bhi isme involved hain… can't you see how much will it affect two families? here phuphi, nazma and there ayaan and his family… Mr. Khan, please think again on your decision….

no Miss. Farookhi, I don't need your advice, you may leave…. its better you keep yourself away form this matter and finish your own work for which you have come, your visa is going to expire next week…. I think you must take care of that and go and check the address, I have given you to find your abbu….

Mr. Khan, you are changing the topic…

yes, I am… now its too late, I think, you should leave…. and he shut the door on the face of Zoya…..

and Asad went to his bed to sleep but sleep was too away from Zoya tonight…. she knew, she has to do something so that Asad may not go to court next day….. and she thought of a plan…..

She went to Kitchen for having water, there she saw asad…

Kya hua Mr. Khan, apko neend nahi aa rhi?

I was going to sleep, just came for water..

K, I 'll give yo said zoya…. took bottle of water and gave a glass of water to asad, Asad thanked her and went from there….

After sme time, She went on lawn side, checked Asad was sleeping…… she entered into his room from window and picked his phone and came out…

Allah Miyan, please help me…. main jo karne ja rhi hun, I know, Mr. Khan will never like this but this is for my phuphi only… she prayed while making call to Ayaan….

Ayaan was shocked to see Asad's call at midnight….

Bhaijaan, kya hua? sab thik to hai na? Ayaan asked hurriedly…

Mr. Ayaan, Its not Mr. Khan, I mean Asad, main wo bol rhi hun jo apke bhai jaan ke ghar guest hai…. Zoya said whispering to Ayaan…..

You? but why did you call me and is everything fine? ayaan asked with a lot tension…

Yes, everything is fine here… I called you to tell I also don't want Mr. Khan to go to court for statement and for that I need your help….

yes, tell me, what is your plan? asked Ayaan to Zoya….

you have to come here now… I am waiting, said Zoya….

K… I will be there in ten minutes… said Ayaan and cut the call…..

It was midnight and quite dark…. Zoya was standing in the lawn waiting for Ayaan there… When Ayaan came… due to darkness, he could not see Zoya's face….

Hey…. are you Ayaan? zoya asked to the figure in dark?

Yes Miss……….

Farukhi… said Zoya…

ok, so whats the plan?

We have to kidnap Mr. Khan ….said Zoya…

What? Ayaan was Shocked…

Precap:- ayan and Zoya face to face….

So how was it? hope you all liked it... and i will be updating regularly almost daily but only if i get some better response here...do leave your feedback, that improved the moral of the the person writing the story...

i read the prologue but was not able to comment.a wonderful story,please do continue to write.😛😉😃

Fantastic...that's really adorable...pls pmme next time

Originally posted by: kiran4471

i read the prologue but was not able to comment.a wonderful story,please do continue to write.😛😉😃