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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: havokhotline
This story is so good!

It's publish worthy, I tell you! :D

The both of you are doing a wonderful job! :)

Thanks, girl!

Del and I are having so much fun writing it 😆

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
Beautiful update...loved it..
aww...again prob between AsYa...hope it will be solved soon :(

[quote=ABBY92]I loved Asad's proposal but Damn, just as everything was going good, something had to go wrong yet again !! Just hope Asad' realises that Zoya doesn't feel that way about him anymore !![/quote]

Thanks folks!

Don't worry - it's a love story - the guy always comes back, and they live happily ever after! Patience!

If you notice Asad didn't want to screw things up further. He didn't want to be nasty. Give him time... he'sway more intelligent than the Asad we see on TV! 😆

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: shaz2009
Great job Dee!My heart just went out to Asad,felt so bad for him!You've done a great job of expressing his hurt and pain of Zoya's betrayal.
I'm just left wondering now,if Zoya will still go ahead with her revenge and will Asad trust her again after this!

Hey Shaz,

Thanks for writing back, as always!

What do you think? Check Zoya's response to his proposal, her thoughts about him.. do you think she still feels like that about him?

And Asad, well, he was upset but was he spitting venom? No!

Another read of the chapter and you should have your answer on what to expect next! 😉

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

hey it ws amezing. I cn feel de pain

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: adeeti10

Hey Shaz,
Thanks for writing back, as always!

What do you think? Check Zoya's response to his proposal, her thoughts about him.. do you think she still feels like that about him?

And Asad, well, he was upset but was he spitting venom? No!

Another read of the chapter and you should have your answer on what to expect next! 😉

Now im desperately waiting for the next update.

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Tanzia Scott

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

OMG you ladies have done it again wonderfull, fab update.Can't wait for the next part, why can't these two get their act together.

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Daayan Bai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: adeeti10

Hey Shaz,
Thanks for writing back, as always!

What do you think? Check Zoya's response to his proposal, her thoughts about him.. do you think she still feels like that about him?

And Asad, well, he was upset but was he spitting venom? No!

Another read of the chapter and you should have your answer on what to expect next! 😉

I hear you Dee and I got it!😉 You just never know with what goes on in a writers head and when an unexpected twist may turn up!😃😉

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Beautifully written! 👏

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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Wow,amazing update.I hope Asad tries to be more understanding.They just reconnected and he started to judge Zoya again!

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RMamsa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: delena90
Hot one Dee!!! Now if only Asad would do some of those sexy moves on screen 😃

That I would 'Totally' second!

loved the morning after, had the right mix of affection, admiration, love, sex, tension & reflection (on Zoya's part this time) Much needed chapter to make the story line stronger 👍🏼 my only complaint - It ended too soon!!!!!

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