Revenge Roulette by adeeti10&delena90-Chapter 5 up - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderfull, they should be honest with each other @least for the sake of their baby
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooow ya super u guys have such awesome writing skills wish I even had half of them so that I would get at least some better marks in my essays 😆 but but but I'm not here to say this but to tell how much I luved tis ff I read all d parts in go YES n just luved it plzzz do pm me the next part I would hate to miss it 😳 keep writing such awesome stuff u guys r sooo good 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update. u kno i was thinking just yesterday dat if dey together now, dere'l b no revenge n so da ff wud end but noo.. u proved me wrong. how happy i was on seeing AsYa together but it all crashed seeing Asad leaving da house all of a sudden. i understand Zoya's emotions at the moment. Asad shud understand dat it was all done by Zo wen she was mad at him but yea she forgot to mention abt it to him lately. but please Asad shud act wisely cox it was only due to his words dat Zoya had to bear alll alone. i hope he comes back to her n not go back to the angry mode. i loved Asad's proposal. hope u guys cont soon. n thank you for sendn pm.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: latanzia

OMG you ladies have done it again wonderfull, fab update.Can't wait for the next part, why can't these two get their act together.


Hey!
Yup, I know how you feel. Just when things were getting better!
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Posted: 12 years ago
😉

Hehe! Crazy writers eh?! Why can't we just let them be? 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: antara2309

Wow,amazing update.I hope Asad tries to be more understanding.They just reconnected and he started to judge Zoya again!


Thanks!

From Asad's POV, he's been judged by Zoya. She's said things she probably didn't mean, but they were nasty things nevertheless. So he's hurt and upset that the woman he loves thinks so lowly of him.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RMamsa


That I would 'Totally' second!

loved the morning after, had the right mix of affection, admiration, love, sex, tension & reflection (on Zoya's part this time) Much needed chapter to make the story line stronger 👍🏼 my only complaint - It ended too soon!!!!!


Hey Mamsa,
Del will be back with her update this weekend I guess... So there's more to enjoy!

Glad you liked Zoya's POV.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Starrydee

Wooow ya super u guys have such awesome writing skills wish I even had half of them so that I would get at least some better marks in my essays 😆 but but but I'm not here to say this but to tell how much I luved tis ff I read all d parts in go YES n just luved it plzzz do pm me the next part I would hate to miss it 😳 keep writing such awesome stuff u guys r sooo good 😃


Thanks! We started with essay writing in school too. I don't know how well I fared there 😉

Anyhow, I'm glad you liked our work and I'll PM you the next update. Just send me a friend request.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

beautiful update. u kno i was thinking just yesterday dat if dey together now, dere'l b no revenge n so da ff wud end but noo.. u proved me wrong. how happy i was on seeing AsYa together but it all crashed seeing Asad leaving da house all of a sudden. i understand Zoya's emotions at the moment. Asad shud understand dat it was all done by Zo wen she was mad at him but yea she forgot to mention abt it to him lately. but please Asad shud act wisely cox it was only due to his words dat Zoya had to bear alll alone. i hope he comes back to her n not go back to the angry mode. i loved Asad's proposal. hope u guys cont soon. n thank you for sendn pm.

love,
Nimra.


Nimra,
Life should be simpler, at least in fiction no? 😉

The truth is they're both at fault for the mess. Asad goofed up in round one, by saying mean things to her. And Zoya goofed up now by not being honest about how she felt when she wrote those things.

The key to any successful relationship is honest, rational communication. That's missing both times. 😭

Asad is in love and he wants to marry her. He just saw a note of what she thinks of him. He is hurt. Give him time, bechara 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved every bit of it. It was brilliant 👏 And I just loved this line from Chapter 4, "She hadn't had sex since that night and he…he could tempt a nun to sin" 😉 😆

Pls update soon

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