Pyar ki Ghoonj OS 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AsYa OS 3

Asad realized that zoya was actually here .. Oh shit !!

A: " tum sach main yahan ho ?"
Zoya was so confused and asked
Z:"what do you mean mr.khan pichay hatiyay!"

She moved forward to get up and leave but collided with Asad and fell right on top of him (Mitwa tune :)

Zoyas hand touched the flesh of Asad and she didn't dare move as her arm was stuck under Asads back. Asad looked straight at zoya and saw confusion on her face he tried to move but just caused zoya to fall right on his bare chest. [zoyas expression :O big eyes ] zoyas breathing got heaveier she could feel the tenderness of his skin on her face she couldn't breathe she didn't know what was wrong with her why couldn't she just get up.. She felt a different type of feeling that she never had felt ever.. Asad could feel her warm breath on his chest and hear her breathing get heavier, he felt her trying to move.
A: "aik minute"
he brought her face forward to his own and moved up letting her arm loose and freeing it. Zoyas hand was free but she didn't realize it ..

Asad looked up to see zoya staring right at his face and he looked straight into her eyes, he saw pain and mixed emotions in those eyes, it was those eyes that he could never read no matter how hard he tried he could never understand how she felt.

Zoya staring right back saw Asad as an open book someone who's seen many pain in his life but she couldn't see past his eyes to see the true Asad. A peice of hair fell to zoyas face and Asad pushed it behind her ear with his hand zoya following his hand to his ear..

Asad realised what he just did and coughed and quickly got up and put a hand over to zoya to help her get up, instead of rejecting his hand she held it and he pulled her up bringing her more closer than ever.

He was gripping her hand and she let a little ouch and he looked down to her hand. Her sleeve was caught in his watch and caused it to rip. Asad was pulling out the sleeve from his watch when he noticed her arms there was bruises like she had been burnt he brought her arm close and said
A:" yeh kya Hua zoya?"
Z: " kuch nehi mr khan" she pulled her sleeve to cover her arm
A: "mujhe nazar ara hai ms Farooqi, kaisay Hua?!" He started to get worried and sounded angry
Z: " mainay kaha na nothing !"
Zoya turned to leave but Asad now furious pulled zoya by her arm and looked straight into her eyes
A:"Meri baat khtam nehi hoyi.. Kya Hua hai ?!"
Zoya sacred and tears flowing down her cheeks didn't know what to say to him .. Why did he care.?
Z:" ur hurtin me mr khan"
asad felt a tear drop to his hand and he let go of his grip..

he turned around and anger was building inside why did he hurt her he always hurt her .. he hated hurting her the most because her pain bothered him .. he punched his hand into the wall.. zoya now terrified didn't know what was wrong with him ...She build confidence and said

Z:"kuch nehi mr khan and why do you care? Who am I ? Main lagthi kya hoon apki? Main mar Bhi jaoon toh aap ko farak Nehi paray ga "

Asads anger went over the top of his had and he pushed her up to the wall
A: " mujhe farak patrtha hai...! Farak partha hai!"
Zoya confused and delusional
broke his grip now angrier than ever

Z:" kyun ?! Kyun mr khan"

Asad turned around in anger not having the words to understand and respond to zoyas question. Zoya was so angry she looked at him in disgust and left the room without saying a word and slammed the door of his room shut and Asad closed his eyes letting a tear roll down his cheek
A: " farak partha hai zoya"

Ahaha tell me how it is like it :) and ill continue and I wanted to change the way zoya tells Asad the truth cause it was too random I think in real epsiodes :)
Xoxooxox
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was good, short but good. I would like Zoya to tell Asad why those burns are there and of course I would like them to confess their feelings for each other since that will never happen on the show...or maybe it will after a gazillion years.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: npatel

It was good, short but good. I would like Zoya to tell Asad why those burns are there and of course I would like them to confess their feelings for each other since that will never happen on the show...or maybe it will after a gazillion years.




Ahaha I know it was short I was doing my homework :p lol next one will be longer lol and yes a billion gazillion years I agree :p 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey...I also thought the same that in episode it was too random to show zoya telling truth to asad ...I think they dint had a plot...as they dint have about zoya meeting ayyan...l.


Well u r amazing...actually I can imagine things happening...so that's what I call ur magic of writing...well keep it up...and pls do update soon as I wanna see Zoya to know asad Ko pharak padta hai...U r truly fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwweeeweewwwn loved it
Our poor asad
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suchishah

Hey...I also thought the same that in episode it was too random to show zoya telling truth to asad ...I think they dint had a plot...as they dint have about zoya meeting ayyan...l.


Well u r amazing...actually I can imagine things happening...so that's what I call ur magic of writing...well keep it up...and pls do update soon as I wanna see Zoya to know asad Ko pharak padta hai...U r truly fantastic



Thanks so much :D ye it was too quick and zoya said she doesn't remember it happening but her arms r burnt and she said she doesn't know it happens and she confused me so I did it my way :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wil :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its realy too gud pls continue and pm me after new update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HoneySweety

Its realy too gud pls continue and pm me after new update.



Thanks I wil :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my gosh!!! yooo this is perfect! I love these two together!!This is I think going better than the show ...the show is just dragging everythinggg! loll Please update soon!

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