Pyar Ki Ghoonj OS 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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AsYa OS continued ...

link to part 1 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3454911

Asad realized what was happening ... Zoya didn't react to the hug she couldn't get herself to put her arms around Asad.. she herself was to confused to react..He quickly let go of zoya breaking the embrace and turned around not being able to look at Zoya in the eye anymore.. Zoya was shocked at first but now felt bad for Asad seeing the state he was in she regretted no returning the hug .. He just need someone to be with him when he had no one ... Zoya looked at him with concern..
Z: " mr.khan are you okay ?"
Asad turned and left without saying a word, he went inside his room and slammed the door shut.! Zoya stood outside motion less and thought
"Kyun main mr khan par haath nehi rakh sakhi, kyun main unhay support kar sakhi?"
Zoya was in deep regret .. She slowly started walking back inside towards her room passing by Asads room .. She stopped and sighed put her hand on his door and said "goodnight mr khan" zoya left to her room.
Asad was pacing back and forth in his room N thought

"Kyun main kamzor par gaya... Kyun mainay aisaa kiya .. Kyun !" He said smashing his hand against the wall ..

" kyun main ous sai door reh Kai Bhi us kai pass kheecha jaraa hoon..kyun?"

Asad questioned himself and thought that from now on he's going to stay away from her. He climbed up on his bed and layed down to sleep closing his eyes...
Asad was laying down and he opened his eyes to see zoya and quickly sat up,
A: "AAP!! Yahan kiya Kari Hain"
Z: " sorry mr khan but I don't know mujhe kya hogaya hai .. Main aap sai door reh kar Bhi door nehi ho sakthi.. I don't know what's wrong with me aaj Kal mujhe boht ajeeb ajeeb khyal atay hai"

Asad thought "isay bhi?!"
He slowly zoned out and couldn't hear her anymore all of sudden ros petals began falling but Asad kept staring straight at her, a peice of her hair was bothering her and he smiled and moved forward to push it aside and caught her in his gaze .. He looked at her beautiful eyes and the terror they had .. He watched her breathing get heavy .. He knew she was confused but he didn't even know himself kai woh kya kar raha tha,But he just wanted to look at her

Z:"Bhai Jaan"
A: "WHAT?!!"
Z: "bhai jaaan"
A: " tum pagal toh nehi hogi stop calling me bhai!"
Asads eye opened and he saw najma nudging him calling out to him ... He quickly sat up
N: "bhai jaan agar main aap ko bhai na kahoon toh kya kahoon.. Aap kya kerahain?" Najma was confused
A" kuch nehi tum jao"
N: " aap ka breakfast ready hai ok?"
A: "hmmm"

Asad thought to himself that it was only a dream .. What kind of dream was this !! im Going crazy

" ab sapnon Main bhi agi?"

he quickly stood up and walked towards the bathroom

"Yeh Larki mujhe pagal kar Dai ghi"

Meanwhile, zoya saw that Asad wasn't coming to the breakfast table and decided to take his coffee to is room and opened the door slowly and silently
and called out "Mr.Khan" and saw he wasnt there and saw the washroom door closes she decided to wait for his return and sat down.
Asad forgot his shirt outside so opened the washroom door and walked right past Zoya
Zoya shocked covered her eyes SIX PACKS!!
" MR KHAN!!"
Asad turned around and gave a blank look to her and thought

"aab din main Bhi sapne.. Ur going mad "

Z: " mr khan plz apni shirt pehnain mainay kuch nehi dekha.. No six pack.."

Asad thought yeh kaisa Bukhar hai mujhe? I think too much stress he thought to himself he couldn't find his shirt anywhere

Zoya was sitting on Asads shirt and Asad saw a peice of the shirt and walked towards her slowly and thought

" why do I keep seeing me Farooqi everywhere mere Damakh khrab kar diya hai is Larki Nai.." And thought shirt is right there and she's not there I'm going crazy ill just go there and get my shirt.. That's it

Zoya saw Asad coming closer and thought why isn't he reacting does he not know I'm here and why is he coming close to me. Asad came up close to zoya and was a
Inch away from her face .. her breathing got heavier and she stopped talking she could smell the frangrance of the shampoo he had used and saw a drop of water dripping down his forehead her eyes followed the drop to his neck and than slowly slipping to his chest and slowly dripping to his six packs and turned away quickly.. Zoyas hair hit Asad in the face and he realised she was actually there !!


Okay so i decided to add a bit of comedy because the show is too serious right now and i tried making it as realistic as possible .. So please comment tell me how it is and ill improve next Time and tell me if I should continue !! :D
Xoxoxo,
Rashda Ahmed

p.s COMMENT SO I KNOW WHAT TO FIX AND IF I SHOULD CONTINUE
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honestyfirst thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one ...
Asad imagining zoya evry where ...

I want add one more scene ..

Ayaan starts his shayeri n asad imagine him as zoya n he starts like miss faruri ...

N ayaan teasing asad ...

Lol lov to see those scenes


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice One!
Loved how Asad thought Najma was Zoya, and said stop calling me Bhai. 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thats really good dude!! Continue please!! :D Your right it does make the storyline a bit more refreshing. They should do that for the show as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆 Comedy was a nice touch
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: honestyfirst

Nice one ...
Asad imagining zoya evry where ...

I want add one more scene ..

Ayaan starts his shayeri n asad imagine him as zoya n he starts like miss faruri ...

N ayaan teasing asad ...

Lol lov to see those scenes




Ahaha that would be funny 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice...imagine Zoya calling Asad Bhai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cool story, nice touch of humor
Do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice plz do continue!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it.

Continue this and thanks for the pm. PM me the next as well. Thank you😊

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