ASYA SS!!DOORIYAN...updtd pt 13 pg 71 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
when will u update yaar !!!
now i m a bit angry m srryn fr tht bt wht to do u write so well its 15 days i read this i m dying 2 read the nxt prt plezzz update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was superb!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great story
The suspense of what's going to happen next is killing me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
plezz i beg of u add me into ur buddy list fr dooriyan's pms i lv the way u portraited asya's charachters !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
DOORIYAN...
PART 9
Zoya sank on the floor
Zoya - i m sorry plz mujhe maaf kar dijiye Asad...i cannot risk ur life...
She sat there and remembered the past tht always haunted her the one which separated them...
She smiled at the irony of life...

5 years back...

It has been 5 months since they were in a relationship...everyday was special for them...they had started getting physical too...initially Asad was against it but Zoya was the one who had told her decision too coz she knew how hard was it for him to control...and she had also heard from her frnz that these desires are more strong in men than in women...
Even she could not control herself when he just used to kiss her...she could feel as if she is gonna die if he didnt go further...and so she insisted him not to stop himself even then Asad didnt want it...
So she had taken the frst step and had gone to his home when he was alone...
And tht is when they had it for the first time...but bfore doing it Asad had stated
Asad - Zoya r u sure jaan...u want it...
Zoya - yesss...
Asad - ok jaan look at me...i want to say something...mai Asad Ahmed Khan son of Dilshad Khan aapse nikaah karna chahta hu...kya aapko qubool hai...
Zoya smiled with tears in her eyes...and said...
QUBOOL HAI...QUBOOL HAI...QUBOOL HAI...
Asad kissed her forehead and said
QUBOOL HAI...QUBOOL HAI...QUBOOL HAI...
and tht is when they both had made love for the frst time...
It was another day when they both were laying in each others arms after their love making session...
Asad - Jaan...
Zoya - hmmm...
Asad - u neva talk abt ur family...who all r there in ur family...
Zoya stiffened hearing this...suddenly Zoya became cold...and told Asad neva eva to talk abt her family...
Asad shivered for a second hearing her cold voice...and with tht he pulled her in a bone crushng hug...
Asad - sry jaan...i wont ask ever again...
Zoya reached home the one she hates to b called as home...it was jst a house...no home...no one was her except her step sister...
Yess she was Razia Shaikh and Hussain Shaikh's daughter...her father had died when she was 14 yrs old...and then her mother had married her ex lover Gaffur Siddiqui...who was a total drunkard and and a gambler...her mother had made grave mistake which Zoya was regretting not her coz she killed herself...leaving Zoya alone in this cruel world and wth her so called father...
The one she could call her family was er step sister Zeenat, Gaffur Siddiqui's real daughter...her so called father used to beat her abuse her only Zeenat aapi used to save her...
Zoya entered her house only to meet her sulking father shouting at her Aapi...she ignored and was about to enter her room when her father called out to her...
Zoya - ji abbu...
Gaffur - ye ham kya sun rahe h...tumhara kisi ladke k saath...chiii...kya naam h us namakul ka...
Zoya - Asad...Asad Ahmed Khan...and the roar of slap echoed through the room...
Gaffur - kal se tumhara college jaana bandh...
Zoya was crying sitting there quietly she had had enough of it...
Zoya - aap hote kaun h mujhe roknewale mai aapko abbu nahi maanti...samjhe aap...and one more slap...
Zeenat tried her best to stop her father but he did not...he bate her to no extent...
At nite she was sitting in her room crying bitterly cursing her fate...she so wanted to b in Asad's arms...she cried the whole nite and slept...
Next morning she felt dizzy and started to throw up...but she.jst thought it to b the previous night's effect...
But she needed to go to the doc for her injuries...she sighed she wont b able to go to colg olso especially infront of him amd like this no...he will jst kill this man if i tell him...she jst left him a msg tht she wont b cumng for nxt one week aftr tht she had kept her phone on silent knowing he would ask 100 questions...she took a bath and went to the doctor...
The doctor did the checkup...she was her mother's frnd...she knew what Zoya goes through...
Zoya - what happened khala...is everythng fine...
Doc - zoya how can u...u r...u r pregnant..
Zoya was sweating by now
Zoya -khala r u sure these reports r rite...
Doc - i dont want to hear anythng...u will abort the baby...and thts final...next week meet me..
Zoya was still in shock...she was walking through the road aimlessly...somehow she reached home...she could c some men staring at her but she looked down and walked inside her room...she was unable to compel what to do...goddd she is jst 17...they shld hav taken some precaution...
At nite when she was abt to go the dining table she heard her father talking abt her wth someone...
Gaffur - tum samajhte q nahi mujhe thoda aur waqt chahiye paise ka intzaamat karne k liye...
Man - mai kuch nahi jaanta hamne jo tumhe samay diya tha woh waqt khatam.ho chuka h...tumne 1 crore ki baazi haari h...us wajah se tum apna 50 lakh ka ghar haar chuke ho...aur baaki 50 lakh k liye hamne tumhe 1 mahine ka waqt diya tha jo ab khatam ho chuka h...
Gaffur - ek aur hafta dedo mujhe...
Man - nahi...ek raasta h...
Gaffur - kya...
Man - woh jo tumhari sauteli.beti h...use hame bech do...
Gaffur - mai taiyar hu lekin woh jis ladke se pyaar karti h woh bada khatarnak h ...maine pata lagaya h uske baare mein...
Man - huh...toh use maar denge...
Gaffur - ye hi thik hi rahega...toh thik h tum jab chahe us ladki ko le jaa sakte ho.
Man - thik h ham use kal lekar jaayenge
Zoya just couldnt believe what she heard...
She ate her dinner and was continuously thinking what to do...she touched her stomach which had a new life growing inside it...which gave her an unknown power coupled with Asad's love...she decided she would runaway from here tonight itself...she thought to contact but she could not risk his life...
She packed her bags, took some jewellery which her mother had given, gave her aapi a last look...and went away never to return back in this hell...
She ran and came to Asad's house gave a last look to his room where he was standing never to c him again...and she came to Mussorie...
At the same time Asad was feeling restless since the time she had told him abt her health...he called Zeenat and enquired abt her but the response she gave made Asad feel tht the earth is gonna eat him down...
Zeenat - Asad...zoya is.not home...she had left a note for me..tht she has left us forever...
Asad kept his phone when he heard Maan calling out to him...
Maan - Asad ...asad...look at me Asad...
Asad looked at him...
Maan - do u know where is Zoya...
Asad - no...
Maan - i know...i had seen her with her bags and catching a bus...
Asad and Maan both hurried towards the bus stand but they were late the bus had long gone...
Asad felt like a defeated man...in the morning there was another shock the bus they were searching for had a major accident and no one survived...but Asad somewhere had hope tht she is not dead...and hence he became what he is now...he left no stone unturned to quest for her...
Initially she stayed at a widows place till her delivery...and how complete she had felt holding her and Asad's love in her hands...

Zoya came back to reality with a knock on the door...
Secretary - mam the clients want to talk to u...
Zoya - tell them m coming...and Zoya went to meet them...

Here Asad was driving aimlessly.her words continuously ringing in his head...
My husband...my husband...he stopped his car in a jerk...he remembered something and again headed to confront her...

Precap
Do u ol want confrontation

Thank u guyzzz for bearing with the delay...
And dear Asya4eva this updt is specially for u...happy brthdae sweety...
And for the readers who commented on the thread for updts...
So hit like and comment
Loads of love
Nazia
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it. yes for confrontation. plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
after maintaining "dooriyan" frm us fr so
many dayz u are bck lol😆😆
but , the update was really good. felt
bad fr zoe hope everything😃
falls in place and plz confront asya
i want it and do update
fast :)😉
Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part..gud one..ya plz confrntatn...atlst inir ff v can hav dmthng gufd...

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