The Best Surprise - AsYa OS removed - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hehe.. i'm so sorry Bharti, i thought u hadn't continued da os, but abhi i went back to the first page to read ur other works n so found the remaining part of the os. so sorry.😳

so the ending was superb. AAK now a proud father, wow Mr. super cool is Daddy now. his surprise for Zoe was beautiful n da surprise he got in the end was the best. i can imagine how scared he must hav been while his love n child were in OT n tears were a way expressing his love n care for his family.

i'l send a buddy req to u, plz accept it.

love,

Nimra.

very cute!! thanks for the PM!

It was amazin:))))
Thnkz for the pm:)

Cute...it would be very interesting to see how this story would progress if Asad and Zoya did get married and Zoya gave birth to a son...it would add growth to the story in terms of Asad and his father and how he plans on relating to his own son differently considering what he went through as a child.

Hey dear

Lovely OS

Asad is so caring

Love his surprise

Do write more

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: Laila2009

Cute...it would be very interesting to see how this story would progress if Asad and Zoya did get married and Zoya gave birth to a son...it would add growth to the story in terms of Asad and his father and how he plans on relating to his own son differently considering what he went through as a child.

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Lovely OS

Asad is so caring

Love his surprise

Do write more

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Beautiful OS!!!