Broken- AsYa OS

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Eternal1234

@Eternal1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome write more loved it!!!!

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow Beautiful.

Naughty, Naughty Asad n Zoya.

This was so emotional and Hot, please i know it is an os but do continue soon

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MuneebaSheikh

@MuneebaSheikh

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow such a hawt os
Loved it

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome!

This OS was amazing.

Please don't leave it like this, update soon!

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

😆 You know, this might actually be interesting if it happened on the show...a lot of good passion - you're a good writer 😊 Give us more...

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kriti

@GroverAddict

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

very nice

please write more soon

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Laila2009
😆You know, this might actually be interesting if it happened on the show...a lot of good passion - you're a good writer😊Give us more...

Thanks so much. I might just do a series of inter-connected one shots because I am usually swamped with work. 😊

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: delena90

Thanks so much. I might just do a series of inter-connected one shots because I am usually swamped with work. 😊

I wish you could give us your version of the redemption and take it from there...I think some of us feel so unfulfilled and I promise you it might be something we can send to the writers...tell them how it's really done.😉 not just a one-shot but ff in about three to five parts...something to think about...only suggesting since you do write well. I wish I could write like you guys - my writing is always so dry ane technical...very matter of fact..kind of like me. 😆

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Laila2009

I wish you could give us your version of the redemption and take it from there...I think some of us feel sounfulfilledand I promise you it might be something we can send to the writers...tell them how it's really done.😉not just a one-shot but ff in about three to five parts...something to think about...only suggesting since you do write well. I wish I could write like you guys - my writing is always so dry ane technical...very matter of fact..kind of like me.😆

I did write an OS on the slap issue. I just couldnt stand seeing both characters being trashed. Check it out. I am probably going to continue it. I think I just called it an AsYa OS. You could look it up if you like. :)