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Originally posted by: Laila2009
Not my cup of tea I'm afraid. A very horny Asad who cannot control himself - cold shower? The treatment of child abuse was written in a sexaulized manner and that was over-the-top. A very disturbing incident and treated very casually and matter-of-factually was very bothersome. She runs a way and stays with her Nana who runs abandoned home for kids? Other fan-fiction writers have eroticism and romance and both characters are likable.
Here, I am neither fond of Zoya or Asad - they seem like two carricatures for the soul purpose of writing some raw sex scenes - Thanks for sharing.
Hi Laila
I appreciate your honest comment.
Thank you for the feedback.
I have exercised my Creative Liberty here. When characters have some grey shades, they are interesting. And that also brings some element of reality and surprise in the fiction.
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