AsYa OS: Sealed With A Kiss

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Haha this was funny and cute! You are a good writer :)

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This was just bloody epic, Shifali! :D

Please continue it. :D

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

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I didn't realise I had already reserved a place out here! XP Anyways, I've posted my comment on Page 7!

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Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Lmfao.. Nice os.. Are u gonna continue??

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

🤣 reminded me of the movie Ek Main aur Ek Tu 🤣

Good work 👏

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Neema

@N33MA

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

It should be iLlligal to leave it here , lmao! But seriously it wa so well written , please do consider writing more & pm me future work? Thanksss

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

omg it was superb...

totally can imagine Asad and Zoya in this scene...

do continue...u have left us hanging here...

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Omg this is tooo good

plz continue
u're a awesome writer

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Miss Sara

@Samaira32

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Shifali dear.. Please have some mercy on us.. If not a short story please please pretty please do post a next part to this... Awww this was so cute especially the Bite.. And i loved their expressions... It was hilarious... Please a next part to this... 😛