AsYa OS: Sealed With A Kiss - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god. This is just so wow. I loved it and there I see a super interesting plot for a lovely SS. I'll give you all u want if u continue. Please????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww NICE!!!!! what happens in vegas, huh??? :P LOVED it!!!! are you planning to continue??? if you are, then DO pm me!!!

Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Hehehe it was nice just like wat happened in vagus type

I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it... it was beautifully written as well as funny...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG this should not end where it did :O Though i know you don't want to continue this but i am sure all the readers want more!! OMG the last part was sooo hilarious 🤣 if them on same bed wasn't enough you got them married 😳 OMG.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice to see you've covered up that little indiscretion.
Wouldn't want anyone to think you've plagiarised, now would we?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow such a lovely one shot; do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awesum yaar...
plz continue na...
Why does she call him DRACO...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Where is the kiss, eh? Come on!!! This was so lovely to read and refreshing too!! 😉 I loved the way you described their emotions! Come on, Shifali!! You gotta continue this piece of love or you'll be in to bear the wrath of me and everyone around here in the forum!! So tell me, are you or are you not continuing this?? Hmm? *blowing at my nails* *smiling evilly*

Annie😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KoolKatz

Awesum yaar...
plz continue na...
Why does she call him DRACO...


Because she's likely copied this and replaced Draco with Asad.
There's literally no originality in this story at all.
What happens in Vegas? - really?
Give the readers some credit at least, we're not blind or stupid.

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