(16+) AsYa SS: Summer love Chap 9 pg. 85 - Page 43

Originally posted by: adeeti10

Hey Asma,

Thanks! I kinda got carried away with this SS. It's not restrained like my other one as I've taken liberties with the characters here. Asad is so different and so is Zoe.

Glad you liked my work. It's great writing for people who appreciate it.

Oh ok... Thanks for letting me know. Be, how does one confirm the age of the people on the PM list? I have another problem regarding my PMs. 90% of my friends are from the IPK forum and they don't watch AsYa I think.

So I didn't PM at first. Then when i got multiple requests, I started PMing people who left comments. Only problem is I don't know their ages.😊Also I have created a new ID to PM people but since I'm a newbie, I can't send out PMs! Imagine that!😭

Hey!!
I'm glad that you carried away with this SS.I'm loving the hot shot romance a lot yaar.

I just told u about the rules of the forum coz there can be a problem for u.It does not happens usually coz I've seen everyone posting all good(16+) parts here only [:;] but we need to be careful.Right? I hope you didn't mind my suggestion.
Actually 16+ content is not allowed here.If u ask the age from ur readers, everyone will say that they are 16+. So, the writers usually send the whole 16+ part in pm to all those who wanna read it.You know reader's discretion is not in your hands, right?😆Youngsters should know that they should not read such mature content.😆
Oh the newbie problem with pms is really frustrating.I can understand ur problem yaar.Well all u can do is that pm the people with the url.They can copy paste it on the address bar and get to the actual page.
I hope I'm able to help you a bit. 😃

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Hey!!
I'm glad that you carried away with this SS.I'm loving the hot shot romance a lot yaar.

I just told u about the rules of the forum coz there can be a problem for u.It does not happens usually coz I've seen everyone posting all good(16+) parts here only [:;] but we need to be careful.Right? I hope you didn't mind my suggestion.
Actually 16+ content is not allowed here.If u ask the age from ur readers, everyone will say that they are 16+. So, the writers usually send the whole 16+ part in pm to all those who wanna read it.You know reader's discretion is not in your hands, right?😆Youngsters should know that they should not read such mature content.😆
Oh the newbie problem with pms is really frustrating.I can understand ur problem yaar.Well all u can do is that pm the people with the url.They can copy paste it on the address bar and get to the actual page.
I hope I'm able to help you a bit. 😃

Oh snap!!! That was tooo hot! My gosh!!! ☺️

Oh my days Dee!That was hotness personified!☺️My lappy screen,my whole God damn being is on fire.That was racy and way too hot to handle!Asad and Zoya finally do the deed and from start to finish you maintained the excitement,the thrill,sensuality,passion...it was sheer eroticism at it's best.

When Asad pulled out the stationary in wanting to know Zoya's demands,I just thought," come on get out of here!"He's only being a tease and what I loved more was the fact that Zoya complies in just going ahead as cool as a cucumber,as sexy as ever, in jotting down her deepest desires..😆 Just super,super loved this touch by you!

They both are such teases,that know how to up their game from the other,if Asad is a master at the art of seduction,Zoya is the Queen of intoxication...she sure played havoc on Asad's senses!

I got nothing else to add Dee, as I too, am totally out of my senses this moment, 😃 ☺️...all else I can say is thankyou for making this most awaited Asya moment the most cherishable ever! 🤗

Originally posted by: marialuvsarshi

AMAZING!!!!! PLZ PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE!!!

Originally posted by: shaz2009

Oh my days Dee!That was hotness personified!☺️My lappy screen,my whole God damn being is on fire.That was racy and way too hot to handle!Asad and Zoya finally do the deed and from start to finish you maintained the excitement,the thrill,sensuality,passion...it was sheer eroticism at it's best.

When Asad pulled out the stationary in wanting to know Zoya's demands,I just thought," come on get out of here!"He's only being a tease and what I loved more was the fact that Zoya complies in just going ahead as cool as a cucumber,as sexy as ever, in jotting down her deepest desires..😆 Just super,super loved this touch by you!

They both are such teases,that know how to up their game from the other,if Asad is a master at the art of seduction,Zoya is the Queen of intoxication...she sure played havoc on Asad's senses!

I got nothing else to add Dee, as I too, am totally out of my senses this moment, 😃 ☺️...all else I can say is thankyou for making this most awaited Asya moment the most cherishable ever! 🤗

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

super hot.

Originally posted by: shaz2009

Hey Dee,it's not too much at all!I've read ff's which are even more explicitly X rated on the forums and they didn't get shunned,so I dnt think you have anything to worry about.You kept the balance with subletlety of aesthetic descriptive details,leaving no room for vulgarity.If anything I wanted more erotic love adventure,but hey,that's my overworked gutter mind for you!😆

Originally posted by: airplanes4evr

Great Story!!! PLEASE keep writing!!!!