(16+) AsYa SS: Summer love Chap 9 pg. 85

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delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: adele9010

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the new id! Did you manage to update the pm list? 😊

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blessed4

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Just came across this ff.

read it all in one go and

I must say it was MINDBLOWING

Sensuous and hot

Please continue soon

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: delena90

the new id! Did you manage to update the pm list? 😊

Hey del, yup I did. But since we're newbies, we can't send out PMs! What a bummer 😭

Edited by adeeti10 - 12 years ago

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Oishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Waah..Thats super Hot ☺️

Great writing skill ...I Must say..loved the part <3

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Livingfree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Super super hot. You are truly a gifted writer. Fantastic work 👏 Do give us more chapters please

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Hey Adeeti
I read the last three parts in one go.I'm sorry,I forgot the page number of my reserve.
I'm posting my comments all together here now.
Woah!! Girl you are just amazing...
I mean the hot sizzling chemistry of ASYA and their wild moves are just amazing.
I liked the way Dilshad understood the love game of ASYA and acknowledged it so nicely.
I really loved the scene where Asad proposed Zoe.It was quite surprising and unique to see a man proposing a woman in a swimming pool.
The dinner, intimate moments in the car were written very well.
And what should I say about the latest part.My laptop screen burned by the fire that existed b/w ASYA's hot romance...

You are a wonderful writer darling...
I love your style of writing a lot.
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Take care!

PS-Regarding your queries about the mature part and its compliance with the forum rules,I would like to tell you about what has been happening around in relation to such parts.The latest trend on the forum is to pm the 16+ parts rather than posting them here.Mods are a bit strict towards the 16+ content.But writers usually take the liberty and post the 16+ part here only on the forum posts.I would suggest you to pm such parts from the next time coz the mature content is an issue here.I hope I've answered your doubts.

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
Waah..Thats super Hot ☺️

Great writing skill ...I Must say..loved the part <3

Thanks Oishi!

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: s120
Super super hot. You are truly a gifted writer. Fantastic work 👏 Do give us more chapters please

Sure, got a few more and then the wedding.

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
Hey Adeeti
I read the last three parts in one.I'm sorry,I forgot the page number of my reserve.
I'm posting my comments all together here now.
Woah!! Girl you are just amazing...
I mean the hot sizzling chemistry of ASYA and their wild moves are just amazing.
I liked the way Dilshad understood the love game of ASYA and acknowledged it so nicely.
I really loved the scene where Asad proposed Zoe.It was quite surprising and unique to see a man proposing a woman in a swimming pool.
The dinner, intimate moments in the care were written very well.
And what should I say about the latest part.My laptop screen burned by the fire that existed b/w ASYA's hot romance...

You are a wonderful writer darling...
I love your style of writing a lot.
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Take care!

PS-Regarding your queries about the mature part and its compliance with the forum rules,I would like to tell you about what has been happening around in relation to such parts.The latest trend on the forum is to pm the 16+ parts rather than posting them here.Mods are a bit strict towards the 16+ content.But writers usually take the liberty and post the 16+ part here only on the forum posts.I would suggest you to pm such parts from the next time coz the mature content is an issue here.I hope I've answered your doubts.

Hey Asma,

Thanks! I kinda got carried away with this SS. It's not restrained like my other one as I've taken liberties with the characters here. Asad is so different and so is Zoe.

Glad you liked my work. It's great writing for people who appreciate it.

Oh ok... Thanks for letting me know. Be, how does one confirm the age of the people on the PM list? I have another problem regarding my PMs. 90% of my friends are from the IPK forum and they don't watch AsYa I think.

So I didn't PM at first. Then when i got multiple requests, I started PMing people who left comments. Only problem is I don't know their ages. 😊 Also I have created a new ID to PM people but since I'm a newbie, I can't send out PMs! Imagine that! 😭