(16+) AsYa SS: Summer love Chap 9 pg. 85 - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful story,cant wait for ur update.i have also read ur other ff TLC.u r an amazing writer.both are wonderful.so when r u gonna update TLC?i am looking forward to it.hope u accept my buddy request.i rarely get time to come on IF.ur other posts are also well written.looking forward for ur other posts as well.😛😃😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dont know how to send buddy request.😕so would u mind sending me one pretty please?😳some error is coming.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran4471

i dont know how to send buddy request.😕so would u mind sending me one pretty please?😳some error is coming.


No worries, I don't have a buddy PM list as there are lots of buddies from other forums as well.

You've done the right thing... Leave a comment here and I'll PM you my next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran4471

wonderful story,cant wait for ur update.i have also read ur other ff TLC.u r an amazing writer.both are wonderful.so when r u gonna update TLC?i am looking forward to it.hope u accept my buddy request.i rarely get time to come on IF.ur other posts are also well written.looking forward for ur other posts as well.😛😃😉


Thanks Kiran! I'm going to update TLC hopefully soon. Was easier to write this story to be honest.. Cos there is such a happy vibe to this one.

I will send you updates to both anyway :)

Glad you liked what I wrote... It's fun writing, but more fun when people enjoy what you've written! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aalia_A


A business writer? Now that I would never have guessed! Yours is the first fan-fiction I've ever read in my life and I must say I couldn't have asked for a better start. Part One is terrific, you have this gift of etching out characters in broad strokes yet they seem to still have depth in them. You convey a lot with a few choice words and that is something I really appreciate. The mental images that are thereby conjured up are terifically vivid 👏 I must say I like your Asad alot.

No, this is not a feedback... Lemme go finish the entire story uptil now since I am in the rare position of not having to wait for updates and I will get back to you with my thoughts. In the meantime, I don't know where the story has got up to but I'll echo all your other devoted readers - please, do continue 😳


Hey Aalia,
Haha! Business writing sounds boring I bet! Well it's fun too.. In a different way. Telling a story at the end of the day.

I started writing last year when I discovered IPKKND and got inspired by some amazing writers on that forum. I'm nowhere as prolific or creative as they are... But I realise I'm not that bad either 😛

To be honest, I visualise. I write, and describe what I see in my mind.. So like Shaz said, my minds in the gutter sometimes 😉

Do go through the rest of the chapters when you can. I'd love to know what you think.

And yes, I definitely plan to continue. Thanks for voting yes!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
Really want to see them married.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!...Superb Update!..
Totally Loved It & A Wedding Would Be Awesome!..
Thanks for the Pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story.. Can you add to ur PM list?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Create

Awesome story.. Can you add to ur PM list?


Hey, thanks! Sure!
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Posted: 12 years ago
When are you updating Adeeti? ;)

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