(16+) AsYa SS: Summer love Chap 9 pg. 85 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Laila2009

Gasping for air...that was incredible! You cannot leave us hanging...this Asad is really hawt! And he's so amazing strong, powerful and in control - a real seduction artist...you simply cannot allow yourself not to give us the ultimate scene where he takes the innocent Zoya into his room and teaches her the art of love-making - it would scorch this forum that we'd have to call out the fire brigade...We'd be giddy for days on end that the Asad and Zoya on screen would look pale in comparison.


I don't think writers know that women want strong males who are dominant, powerful and confident but also witty but never cruel and bullish- any woman would fall for someone like them and it would not require any effort on the part of the man. You've given us the perfect guy...I'd like to take him home with me.

The whole chapter was beautiful - it was a seduction scene in itself and that is an art form that few people know how to capture.


Thanks Laila! 😆
Line up the queue... Seems like Asad here is a big hit with the women!
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes,yes update!! i want the wedding...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your writing is just out o this world...plz...plz...plz...add a couple of more chaps...my lappy is already on fire...that was tooo romantic...

you just rock boss...just excellent ,splendid and the most awesome writing skills...plz continue...👍🏼

Let me know before u post the SR chap., in case u plan to post one...will need a fire extinguisher ready for sure...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeti10


Annie, your comments are fab as usual! Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed this family chapter... Now for some AsYa action next week!


😲 😆 Heehee... Gee, thanks!
Yippee!!! Now can't wait for the 'Action'-wa!! 🤪
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raii

yes,yes update!! i want the wedding...


Thanks raii! We all want the wedding! 😉 And of course, post wedding fun!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Your writing is just out o this world...plz...plz...plz...add a couple of more chaps...my lappy is already on fire...that was tooo romantic...


you just rock boss...just excellent ,splendid and the most awesome writing skills...plz continue...👍🏼

Let me know before u post the SR chap., in case u plan to post one...will need a fire extinguisher ready for sure...😉


Sure will PM you my updates so you can catch up! 😆

Thanks for your lovely comments, made my day!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


😲 😆 Heehee... Gee, thanks!
Yippee!!! Now can't wait for the 'Action'-wa!! 🤪


Lol! Me too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeti10


Her Api and jiju... That's another chapter worth! I liked their characters on the show. So yes, it's going to be a big fat Indian wedding 😉

Omg Well really looking forward to it! I just love ...Asad has soo much ego but its totally him. 😆 Your fanfic is really well written. Much better than what I could ever do! 👏 And Thanks for the reply 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

Omg Well really looking forward to it! I just love ...Asad has soo much ego but its totally him. 😆 Your fanfic is really well written. Much better than what I could ever do! 👏 And Thanks for the reply 😊


Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Do we need to pester you for the next chapter? We are eagerly awaiting.

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