Espresso Love - AZ OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: hooriya93

I really like the title. I am not any good at titles but I think yours is awesome. I really liked how described Asad's feelings of loneliness in the beginning. Nicely written. Although I do wish you had explained why Zoya was depressed. I would like to find out.

Good job.

Originally posted by: AlwaysLife19

OMG!! Look who's here? Meri SG waali friend! Where were u all these days???

Anyways, coming to the OS, it was beautiful... No, seriously... And I would love to know what happens next...

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

awsm!

just loved it!

pls do continue it pretty please :)

Originally posted by: -RadxAli-

HINAL ! AHHH ! YOU ARE ACTIVE HERE ! =O I missed you damn ! *Rushing to inform Richa* HInz wroote a OS ! =D

Originally posted by: Piyuksgian

Hey, hinal di...its awesum...cont soon

Originally posted by: _palak_

plz plz plz continue soon !

Originally posted by: SilentPromises

I loved how you framed Asad's emotions and his determination together... also the name of the OS is so catchy.. loved it 👏

Originally posted by: iiDona

Alright, read the part, it was almost impeccable when it comes to an Espresso date.

Yep agreed... Tbh, I would love an Espresso date... But for now, I'll just write about it instead 😉 About the details, I see you played it safe not mentioning the city.

Yea.. I figured I should stick to the feelings and emotions rather than contrasting Asad and the city.. That was my intention at first, to not include Zoya, but I'm a hopeless romantic 😆

Do you live here as well?

Not downtown... But I lived in Toronto for a couple of years, I'm in Brampton now

Though I'm going to uni next year, and Downtown is where I'll be 😃

Fair enough, either way. I personally would not want to know what was wrong with Zoya. Hey, it is your call. Do continue writing, I will be sure to check out your works as they come along.

There are a lot of requests to continue it... I'll probably be continuing it.. But I respect your opinion... That's kind of why I ended it there.. But let's see :P

BTW, I cannot afford Starbucks either. I am a Tim Hortons/Williams person. My coworkers, on the other hand, have taken it upon themselves to turn me broke. Peer pressure to drink Starbucks everyday. I am trying to switch to tea so that I do not have to conform #StudentLife.

Conformity... We're all victims to it 😆

Anyway.. Thanks a lot for the comment!

Means a lot to me :D

Take caree <3 Hope you have the strength in you to switch to tea so you don't turn broke 😉👍🏼

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

wowww this is so good...

should be one of the best os of the week...:)

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

Hey it was awesome yaar and the title was well give! Asad's feeling were described so well and loved your writing style too. Would love to read the next part so please do continue.. And also write about Zoya's problem.

Loved the OS. Thanks for the PM. :)

Originally posted by: laizu

Its a nice OS. Loved it.

How time changes people. Wishing in the show also we will see Asad Zoya talking and smiling over the coffee cup.

Originally posted by: anamika2010

hey hinal sis,i have already read it on blog..its awesome! loved it...

ur di

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hey the os was beautiful. it was sad to know about the death of Dilshaad and Asad being all alone for years. Zoya had also lost her family. it's good they shared their grief wid the other n know dat dey hav mutual feelings too. i hope u continue dis os to a proper end where dey r together.

Nimra

Originally posted by: Mus@

Beautifully written and expressed 👏👏

Originally posted by: kandygrover

Really cute os:)