AsYa FF: silent love updated (Prt 6 pg 11) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU ALL FOR THE AMAZING COMMENTS!!!! 😃 Honestly made my day. I was so afraid that no one would like it, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! Please do continue to comment and do suggest me things so I can change things and make it better so that you all can enjoy it even more! Also thank you to the silent readers, for taking the time out to read my ff! 😊

PART 2:

Zoya's eyes widened and in all confusion, stress because of Mariyam, and the surprise attitude of Asad. Becoming dizzy, Zoya tries to hold on to something but in the empty space she fails. Asad notices Zoya's condition and runs to catch her. Zoya falls perfectly in Asad's arms (Mitwaa ishq pe zor nahee) Asad could not lay his eyes off of Zoya. She looked like an angel. Coming back to his senses, Asad gently picks up Zoya and places her on his bed.

Asad: Zoya, Zoya! Get up Zoya!!!

Asad begins to rub her hands hoping it will help bit nothing happened. He quickly runs to the kitchen and grabs 2 glasses of water. One to splash on her face and one for her to drink. Running as fast as he could, Asad reaches his room and sits beside her.

Asad: Zoya, please get up.

She still did not respond. Asad, worried as he was, puts his ear near her heart to see if it was beating. (Dhuk dhuk, dhuk dhuk.) Asad slightly shivered hearing her heart beat. He grabs the first glass of water and dips his hand in it and sprinkles some water droplets on her face. Her eyes twitched. Asad stops spraying water at her and puts the glass down.

Zoya opened her eyes and did not know what was going on. She looked around to notice that she was in jahapana's room, that too on his bed. She turned her head to see Asad smiling at her. Still confused, she smiles back.

Asad: Zoya are you ok?

Zoya nodded. Asad helped her sit up straight and picked up the second glass of water. He held the glass near her mouth so that she can drink the water with no problems. Zoya drank a bit of the water and Asad puts the glass down.

Asad: how are you feeling now Zoya? Are you ok?

Zoya heard a bit of concern in his voice.

Zoya: Yes I'm fine, thank you.

Asad: Zoya can I ask you something? How come all girls faint so easily. Like I was trying to talk to you and you just fainted. Are girls really weak?

Asad said this purposely to see if Zoya was actually fine.

Zoya: Allah Miyaa, whats wrong with you Mr. Khan? Girls are not weak, and especially not me. I only fainted because you….

Zoya stopped. She knew that she was about to say a bit too much. She looked at Asad. Eye lock. Asad understood everything. Not saying anything he helped her get and walked her to her room. On the way there, Najma and Dilshad saw them and were surprised.

Dilshad: Asad and Zoya… Like this?

Najma: No No ammi that can't be bhaijaan. That's impossible.

Both sat down in shock.

Asad opened her door and helped her sit on her bed.

Asad: Mariyam, take care of Zoya, im going to call the doctor.

Zoya: Nai nai Mr. Khan. I told you, I'm fine, but thank you

Asad: Are you sure?

Zoya: Yeah yeah Mr Khan. I'm good.

Asad: Ok if you need anything just call me… I mean Mariyam. Mariyam will help you. Asad shocked from his own words, walked out of the room and went to his own room.

Dilshad: C'mon Najma, let's go see of Zoya is ok.

Najma: Ji ammi.

Next part:

Zoya walks out to the garden, still thinking about what had happened today between her and Asad.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Loved it! Continue soon n dp add me in yr pm list!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awsome Loved It. Again Do Conti.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice work. Loved ur updt. Continue soon. Plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwn so loved it
i wanted asad to find out bout Mariam and den dey both try to keep her out of dilshaad's eyes will b more fun
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Cute. Please continue soon. Asad's concern towards Zoya was one nice thing that I liked. Waiting for more .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh my my this is so darningly good like your vms <3 <3
Continuee pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
continue soon and also add the page and part no. in the title itself .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Once again thank you everyone for the amazing comments
Hope you do enjoy this next part:

Part 3:

Dilshad walks towards Zoya's room and Najma follows. Dilshad knocks on her door.

Dilshad: Zoya.. are you ok? What happened?

Zoya looks at Mariyam and freaks out.

Zoya: Mariyam Go run to the bathroom.

Zoya: Oh Puppi, you're just like you son. I'm fine. Trust me

Najma Giggled a little and Dilshad just smiled. Zoya hid Mariyam and ran to open the door.

Dilshad: Oh really? How so Zoya. Please do explain

Dilshad was now doing this purposely to see how Zoya would respond. Zoya being as bubbly as she is continued her rant.

Zoya: Oh puppi, you both worry about me way too much. I only fainted, and you both freaked out as if I was dying or something. I am very strong you know.

Najma could not stop giggling and nor could Dilshad. Dilshad now understood that maybe her son had strong feelings for Zoya, but just does not realize it. She was happy because Zoya was a great girl and the perfect kind for Asad. Someone who is full of life.

Zoya anxiously looked at the bathroom door hopping Mariyam would make no sound.

Zoya: PUPPI!

Zoya had yelled all of a sudden and startled Dilshad and Najma.

Zoya: Oh sorry puppi. Actually I was going to say that why don't we go make some lunch. I am really hungry. All this fainting has made me really, really hungry. C'mon lets go make some food.

Zoya grabbed both of their arms and walked outside of the room. Zoya was still weak, but she had no choice but to get them out of the room. Right when she walked out Asad was walking towards her room. He saw that Zoya was bringing his ammi and sister out of her room. He could tell that she was still weak.

Zoya looked at Asad and tried to silently tell him that she needs help. Asad understood and came to the rescue.

Asad: Uhh.. Ammi, why don't we all sit in the living room and watch some tv.

Najma and Dilshad were both surprised. Asad and tv? Well many surprising things were happening today, so they just went with it.

Dilshad: yeah sure Asad, but Zoya wanted to cook with me and Najma. She was really hungry anyways. Why don't we cook and eat lunch and then watch some tv, right zoya?

Zoya gave a weak smile to her puppi. Asad noticing this decides to take action

Asad: NAI!

All shocked once again. Asad clears his throat.

Asad: I mean, why don't we order pizza. I don't feel like eating homemade food. Let's order some pizza, right Miss Farooqui. I hope you don't mind.

Zoya: Uh.. right Mr. Khan. Pizza and T.V sounds good. Don't worry Puppi, we can cook another time. Let's go!

Najma and Dilshad were just at a loss of words. First Asad walking Zoya to her room, then Zoya talking about how much he cares, Asad wanting to watch some T.V, and now Asad and Zoya agreeing on pizza. What was going on in this house, they thought.

They all began to walk near the living room when Zoya stopped

Najma: Zoya, are you ok?

Everyone seemed to be very worried, especially Asad. (Of course)

Zoya: Don't worry I'm fine. Why don't you guys go sit down while I just go grab some water?

Everyone agreed and went to sit down in the living room. Zoya slowly walked to the kitchen and grabbed a cup. Asad, sitting in the living room, was worried a lot so he made an excuse to leave and check up on Zoya.

Asad: Ammi, my phones dead, I'm going to go use the land line and call the pizza place. I'll be right back.

Dilshad understood why he said that but still agreed.

Zoya was now pouring herself a glass of water when she felt dizzy.

Zoya: Maybe I should sit down for a second and then go.

Zoya was walking towards the dinner table when she got dizzy and lost her balance.

Next part:

Asad holding on to Zoya, when he realizes that there is blood on his hand.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome ff daer
it's very gud
pls add me into ur pm list

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